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Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:11 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Limona - None of us could forget about your story. I have been waiting patiently for an update because I love this story so much. This chapter was awesome.... from the way that Edward planned their alibi's to the way he stalked outside the courhouse. When he offered to run away with her for a while, part of me hoped she would say yes. But of course I understand why she didn't.
I'm so glad that they were both more open about how they feel and what they want at the end of the chapter. I know Edward has been fighting it, but it's time that he needs to let go and give into his feelings without worrying that he's taking advantage of her.
Great chapter Limona!
Author's Response: Jessica, Thank you so much for your long-term support of this story. I appreciate it so much. And thank you for telling me your thoughts on the chapter!
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:07 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
still love this story. thank you for updating!
Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:06 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I loved the chapter. I'm glad to have you back.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:06 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
WELCOME BACK! And you're back with a big bang too:-)
First off - I know that Marie was only with Jason Jenks for a little bit just over a year ago, but I can't believe she didn't recognize him at the gala, or him her. Especially after she heard his name! She is so wrapped up in Edward. And I know that sometimes when you see someone outside of the normal setting for him/her - things don't always click right away. I wonder if it will come back to her at some point, especially if/when they join the Occhi.
Which, btw, I'm so excited for them to join the Occhi - I think it will be incredibly interesting.
I think Jake has told Bella's cover story to Leah, it was pretty clear that Leah doesn't buy the whole E&B are engaged story. And the only explanation for that doubt is if Jake gave her the info. While I don't think Leah is going to turn out to be uber connected, it still concerns me.
Edward reading innuendo into everything Bella says and does is HILARIOUS! And totally adorable. And I love a Bella that cheats in Scrabble.
I really liked how she finally started to confide in him. She still didn't reveal anything too important, but I think even saying their names was a big step for her. I hope that "you make me happy" was the sentiment she had wanted to say last week too. Even if it wasn't, I'm sure it was something along the same line. So lovely.
Author's Response: Jilbur, thank you so much for your long-standing support of this story. You've been following it a long time, and I appreciate it more than you know.
As for Jason Jenks... Bella met a LOT of people when she worked for the Volturi, and it's not like she would expect to see him in Seattle.
You're one of the only people concerned for Leah, haha.
So glad you enjoyed the chapter :)
Reviewer: Josben (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:02 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
YESSSS!!! Totally worth the wait and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: ArcCleo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:01 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I really like it...
We Miss you!!!
Write More Soon!
Reviewer: captain_of_the_house (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:01 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Thanks for the update! Chapter was fabulous! I was even scared for Bella/Marie in the depo! Can't wait for another chapter!
Reviewer: simbi (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:54 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm still reading and still loving it! Thank you!!
Reviewer: jeesiechreesie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:50 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm so glad to see Edward finally breaking down in his affections for Bella. He's been fighting against the inevitable for so long that the poor man was probably ready to pop if she said one more sexually charged word. I can't wait to see where this development takes them!
Reviewer: twilighteyes (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:49 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Totally worth the wait. (:
Reviewer: ssoopphhiiee (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:42 AM · On: February 29, 2008
OMG!!!!!! i just spent the whole day reading your story (even though i have a shit load of studying i was supposed to do) and i LOVED it more than words can express. i couldn't stop reading it and the plot is so exciting. you made my week, seriously! i can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: cutekat (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:41 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I was ecstatic to see that there was an update, and the chapter was wonderful. I'm happy she got through the deposition unharmed and now I guess only time will tell what will happen. :o) Thanks for the update and the great chapter! :o)
Reviewer: coffeeobsessed (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:39 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm so so glad to see you writing this story again! It's one of my favorites because it's such an original story line and because you write so well! Thanks for not abandoning it (not that I thought you were going to)
Reviewer: dramagurl82 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:38 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Oh my.... That is all I can say right now... I need time to process this chapter and maybe re read it...
Reviewer: jacobson33 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:36 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Still reading - keep writing! :)
Reviewer: gigi (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:29 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
So excited for the update. And so excited that Edward is starting to admit his feelings for Bella to himself. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: iheartnj (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:21 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Thank You for the update! It made my morning when I opened my email to see that you had written!! Loved it - missed this story!!
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:15 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Thank you for finally updating and for them being together! More now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: possession (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:10 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
FINALLY you updated!!! I really love this story. I'm glad he got to go with Bella. I picture Edward w/ Tom Ford's style...Very HOT! Thought I would mention...LOL
Reviewer: lilgoblin (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:10 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm glad to see a new chapter posted. I was started to get worried that you dropped the story. Still a great chapter though, the deposition part being much shorter than i anticippated. Still, Edward's point of view was a lot of fun to read. Thanks again for posting!
Reviewer: Sam362 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:06 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I am so happy for an update!! This is by far my favorite story, and I am so glad to get to finish it!! YEA :)
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:06 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
thank you for uploading again. Love the story. I wonder if Alice finds out something isn't right. And yay they're together, or aren't they?
Great job on this chapter
Reviewer: Kayten (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:59 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Love the new chapter =D And I love where their relationship seems to be going, and how it's getting there. More more more!
Reviewer: Patsy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:58 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
LOVE IT! I'm thrilled with this update! It's like Christmas in June, lol!
Now we know what Jacob and Edward were discussing from the last chapter. Interesting how much energy Edward is putting into an alibi for Bella.
Also interesting that Edward is considering assoiating with Laurent and the Occhi... The things he will do for Bella!
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:58 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
ahhhh i missed this story!!!
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