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Reviewer: lauras1sttime (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:08 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
OMG you have no idea how awesome it is that you updated! This was the very first FF I read and it sucked me into the addiction. It is still my fave out of the dozens I have read. That being said....how the heck are you going to cut it off right there?! In the middle of the yummiest lemon ever that is filled with their newly discovered feelings for eachother. I surely hope that you continue it at the beginning of the next chap! I am really nervous about what the Volturi have planned for her and I hope that Edward is able to save the day w/ his connections Occhi. I really love this fic and can't wait for the next chap!
Author's Response: Who said it was the middle of the lemon?? I thought it was a good place to end the chapter, lol, but no one seems to agree. Thanks so much for sticking with me and reviewing :)
Reviewer: BrittanyAgd (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:07 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I am so glad to see an update! I was very impressed with you entry on Smut Monday. I can't wait to read more. I love the idea behind this story!
Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:07 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Finally they got together. I have been waitting for that. Great Story. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: autismmom (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:02 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
FINALLY! I thought I was going to have to give up on this story! I love the way you ended this chapter though! Please update soon!
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:00 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Yippeee tax season is over and we get another chapter!!! Way to get back into the swing of things! Super chapter! Of course I'm still reading. It's tagged as a favorite!!
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:54 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Welcome back. Your writing is worth whatever wait there has to be. I adore this story.
Reviewer: DSCH (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:53 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
i still absolutely love this story!
Reviewer: J13lue (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:45 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm so happy to see that this updated! I was anxious to see what would happen with the deposition and between Edward and Bella. I love the whole premise of this story, so please keep going!
Reviewer: Polunosht (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:45 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm obsessed with this story I need to know what happens, I got depressed when the chapter ended because I need more haha!! I am soooo happy you updated! I loved that it was in Edward's point of view, its nice to know whats going on in that pretty head of his =)
GREAT JOB! <3
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:43 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Um, wow. I have missed this story so very much. I love them. I can't wait to read how they respond to each other when they wake up!
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:42 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Thanks for the update. Hope the next one does not take as long. lol
Reviewer: LikeToRead (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:40 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
So good to have this story back, Limona!! I love it!! Edward's POV in this chapter was so sweet. It was a great glimpse into his thoughts after the last chapter. And, Bella seems more confident with E too. It's hard to know if that's true, given that we're seeing this from E's POV, but he keeps describing her as being stronger and he's so proud of her. I love that he encouraged her to go off the diving board the day before the dep. That was a nice symboloic touch. I can't wait to see how we pick up after this chapter (wink wink). Thanks for coming back!
Author's Response: Truth is such a subjective thing, given how differently people see things. But YES, I believe that Bella is getting more comfortable and her natural strength is reasserting itself.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: Theresa_no_more (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:40 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
YEAH!! I'm so glad to see an update to this story, and an excellent chapter at that. Actually, I was looking through my favorites that hadn't posted in a while, thinking about deleting some. I couldn't do it to this one -- the story and the writing are too good! Thanks so much for the update. I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters.
Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't delete me. :)
Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:32 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Awwww....
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:32 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
This chapter was great - although the lemon was cut off - how could you?! I always look forward to the updates of this story! It is very well written and thought out!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:26 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I am most assuredly still reading and completely thrilled you updated. I was beginning to wonder... Great chapter - you can only deny true love for so long. Glad Edward got to go with Bella to the deposition and I am SURE Alice will figure it all out first - I just don't know how...
Reviewer: twitart28 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:23 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
oh no you did not just leave me all hot and bothered!!!! im soooo sad please finish me off... i mean finish the story off thank you!!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: twimomof4 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:23 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
So happy for an update!! I love how it's moving along and can't wait for what's next!
Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:23 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Hey Limona, it is so good to have you writing again. HIPS is by far my favorite fanfiction. I would never give up on this story. This chapter did not disappoint and I can't wait to see how everything plays out. And I wanted to tell you that I read the one-shot for smut mondays and was wondering if planned on extending that? It was very exciting?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for making HIPS your favorite. YES, we plan to extend the one-shot, but not until November when we've finished our respective stories.
Reviewer: Legna (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:21 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Like I could stop reading this story. I'm sure I'll leave a longer review on FF once it posts there, so for now I'll just say that it's probably going to take all day for me to compose myself after this chapter. It had the perfect balance of mysterious backstory, dramatic tension, sexual tension and romance.
Thank you for writing.
Reviewer: victoria188 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:18 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
loved the chapter! keep writing i definitely missed this story!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:15 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Hey coo chapter liked the ending =] poor bella =[
Reviewer: SapphireEyes (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:14 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I am so happy that you updated. This is a great story and I am excited to see it wrapped up.
I love Edward's restraint in this chapter. He wants her so badly, but he's so good about keeping what he thinks is appropriate distance between them. I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:12 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I love that you updated, this is such a fantastic story! You are such a talented writer, HIPS is original and well written. I can't wait to see what develops further between Bella and Edward.
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:08 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Love the story, keep up the good work! I'm glad you managed to update it again.
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