Love your story! It's been a while since you posted new updates!!! I was scared you stopped writting! Update soon please!!!

plaese continue even though it took you a while to add it is still amazing please please continue and quickly!?!

Peac Out

Wolfie

HIPS was one of the first AH fiction pieces I read. I was instantly hooked. I have been awaiting this chapter for a very long time. You did not disappoint. The chapter  is excellent. You are a very talented writer. I really like the character's personalities. You do a great job with the supporting characters too.

Now that we've begun again, I'm getting nervous for Bella. Part of me doesn't want her to testify bc I want her to be safe, but I think she will "do the right thing" and testify. I am anxious to see how Edward is starting to recognize his feelings for Bella.

Once again, I'm thrilled you were back. I'm still here, still reading. I haven't abandoned Merger either!

I know I can only rate this a 10, but if I could I'd give it a 147! 

This was so worth the wait.  GO Bella and Edward!

Don't worry i'm definately still reading this and will continue to do so! I too checked  on the story nearly everyday until you updated!

I haven't reviewed before so i'll just say i've always thought the story idea was good and that your writing is brilliant. :) I can sense that the next few chapters are going to be rather exciting with the volturi and whatnot.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

The next chapter will probably go up before June 27. It got slowed a little bit by me going on vacation.

I am still reading. It is nice that you are back. And it is nice that E&B get to make love as well.

I am glad to see some passion that wasn't pre-arranged!  Nice going!

I hope the Volturi are really in North Carolina...and I still really really really want them...Edward and Bella to work out!  He needs to let his defenses down  because we all know that they feel the same way about each other!

 

Update soon!!!!  I want to read more!

Wowzahs.

I wasn't on for ages and then I came on and you had uploaded three chapters!Yay!

I really enjoyed them. Your portrayal of the charcters make them seem perfect for each other but also different.

Once again, can't wait for more!

I was so happy when I saw you updated! I was checking the page like every day...I liked this chapter much but I have a feeling you are preparing some drama with the Volturi and it just feels like "calm before the storm" (does it even exist in English? It's a direct translation from French ^^)

Love you for ever!

Keep updating!

Author's Response:

Yes, "calm before the storm" exists in English, and you are right. Thank you!

so happy to see a new chapter up!!!

that was so amazing...it was great...cant wait for the next chapter...i hope they start being honest with each other about their feelings.

So good to have you back - wonderful chapter.  I really enjoyed it.  Poor Edward - I love how he misconstrued everything she said and turned it into something sexual.  Thank you Alice for coming to stay and forcing those two into bed together!!