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Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:17 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Oh Limona! Just fucking fantastic!! LOVED everything about this chapter. Seeing how much Edward has come to care for Bella!!! Cannot wait for more of your amazing story!!

Reviewer: cadykat (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:12 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I loved it, keep it up- the story is great, I know that this isn't an insightful review, just words of encouragement, thank you!

Reviewer: xoambxo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:11 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

yay! You're back!


Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:09 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008


Reviewer: Thejazeffect (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:01 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I loved the part about Emmett and the suspenders, I can't even imagine it.

Reviewer: twiks99 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:55 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Thanks for updating this story!  I am so glad, this was one of the first twilight fanfics I started reading - and I really like it.  The story line is intriguing and I still what to know what's going to happen - don't stop now!

Reviewer: bookworm7073 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:54 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I'm sooooooooooooooo happy you're back.  I actually squealed when I saw you updated!!!!   Your story was missed....please don;t go away that long again.  ( pout-pout)

Reviewer: ashlee87 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:45 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

oh my goodness! I was so excited to see that you had was truly rediculous! lol.

this is a great story and i cannot wait to see how it turns out :)

Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:41 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008



Death-Hard-Rock-Metal was proven to grow plants better than classical music :)


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Sorry, I'm bad at reviews D:

Author's Response:

Your review made me smile. Thank you!

Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:36 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

LOVE this story!!! Please keep writing, and soon!!!

Reviewer: Llewlynne_Rose (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:30 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Well I'm hooked ... can't wait for the updates ... luv luv luv!!!

Reviewer: adri_anna (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:30 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Thank you for updating. I literally screamed when I saw the update. I was really nervous about the deposition but not I'm just excited to see if Alice staying with them is gonna push them closer together.

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:14 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was so happy when I saw this updated! Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: pickleweasel19 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:12 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Great Chapter, I'm so happy you started writing it again!

Reviewer: dazedx3 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:09 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

still reading! youve been absent too long though. im still hoooked so updae again sooon.

Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:03 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I love this story, and I cant wait until you post the next chapter!!

Reviewer: jabba0628 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:02 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I am upset that you teased us all through this chapter and you leave us hanging at the very end. Naughty you!

It was great to see you update again.  I am looking forward to see how you manage to tie this up.

Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:01 PM · On: February 29, 2008

OH YEAH! I forgot to say, PLEASE finish this bedroom scene. PLEASE.

Reviewer: mjpiper74 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:58 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Wow!! What an amazing chapter to come back with.  Marie's memory has me worried because she picked up Jason Jenks.  There had been a Jason Jenks at the gala Edward and Bella attended last chapter.  Although there didn't seem to be any recoginition between Bella and Jason, it has me worried about theirs and Alice's safety at Edward's home.

Edward was so great in this chapter.  The way his thoughts of Bella were told shows she means more to him than ever before. 

The way he tried to convince her to not testify shows how much he doesn't want to lose Bella.  Either to the Volturi or to a new witness protection program.

I loved the lemony goodness at the end.  I am sure they are both so full of sexual tension, they both needed that release.


Author's Response:

MJ, don't worry about Marie's memory. She picked up LOTS of people for the Volturi. And to be fair to her, she has no reason to expect to see a Volturi person in Seattle... she was working in Chicago. And I don't imagine Mr. Jenks looked the same dolled up for a gala as he did going to see Caius.

Glad you enjoyed both Edward and the chapter! Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:55 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Fantastic!!! Well worth the wait! Please keep writing, it's great!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Are you back to updating monthly?

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:55 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I love this story. I read everything in a day and a half.

I love that they are getting to know each other and it looks like they are falling in love. Still they have such a sweet moments it's adorable.

Reviewer: HeidiMarie (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:53 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Still reading...

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:41 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was going to be lazy and not comment, but then I read the end notes and the "I don't even know who all is still reading..." I am =P

I thought it was a cute chapter. Edward's such a sweetie, even if he doesn't realize it yet.

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:36 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

Of course we're still reading.  We've been waiting for this!

Great chapter.  I'm glad Alice is there to force the issue.  Can't wait for more!  You better finish that bedroom scene!

Reviewer: ffismopboc (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:31 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was so excited to see that you had updated! I re-read the earlier chapters and they are even better than I remember them. Thanks so much!

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