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Reviewer: Stardust1 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:18 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
How can you doubt that we're still reading?!. I love this Edward, he's so sure of his talents but so insecure with his feelings and the power of his heart. I think this is the calm before the storm and God, I want to see that storm!!. I'm sure, like Edward, that Alice has seen a lot more than they had, but not in the same light he suspects.
I can't wait for the next one!!
Stardust.
Author's Response: It is the calm before the storm. So perceptive. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: vavavampire (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:17 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
So glad you are back! I've been patiently waiting for an update and you definitely didn't disappoint! Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Donielle (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:13 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
OMG! That was good. This is one of my favorite stories. Please continue. I want more details.
Reviewer: Melissamh (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:08 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Thank God you are writing again! I've been patiently waiting and I'm sure others have too. More! More! More!
Reviewer: amybo15 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:06 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
yay thank you for updating! And I always appreciate a little smut :) Glad your back...
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:02 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Of course we are still reading. It is an excellent story. Love the chapter. Love it that Edward is giving in. They belong together. Love it!
Reviewer: Gumdrop147 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:58 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm really enjoying this!
Ive been watching out for you updating this story for a while now and almost did an Alice dance in victory, I was really quite pleased!!!
Enjoyed this chapter, It was interesting. I'm glad we are getting Bellas thoughts in the Volturi!
Please update soon!!!
Thanks!
Xxx
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:56 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Wow. All i can say is...wow. This is possibly the best fic i have read. It drew me in from the first word. I have spent most of my day blowing off what i should be doing to read all 17 chapters. And i might add i was thoroughly annoyed when i had to leave to deal with real life for awhile.
I love Edward and Bellas relationship. The fact they didnt fall straight in to bed, no love at first sight. The Angst involved and misunderstandings. You have me hooked. I cannot praise this enough. If there was a rating of a million, you would get it
Bravo...really. Update at once!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and review... I'm delighted that you enjoyed it so much. Seriously, thank you for reading! :)
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:48 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
yeaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh you added!!!!!!!!! now dont stop
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:48 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I really enjoyed the way you ended this chapter. I mean, not just the smutty bit, but that last line. :)
I'm glad you finally updated! I hope the wait isn't so long next time, but I get that RL gets in the way, and that it's hard to find the energy to write.
Anyway, I really enjoyed it. I'm also posting my own story, called Appassionata, and I'd love for you to check it out if you've got the time. :)
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:43 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Yes, it has been a while, it is good to have you and the story back.
Thoughts on it? Edward has fallen deep, really, really deep in love with Bella. Has anyone noticed? Can't anyone realize what is going on? A part says they should another is glad they haven't. The risks of it are really high, higher now that the Volturi know "Marie/Bella" is alive. How long will it take them to start looking in the right places? It is getting scary in that way. The dead-end we had waiting for has come and the what nows are big.
What are Bella's feelings? What does she really feel now for Edward? Does he just Make her happy? Or are there other things? It was interesting that she dared jump the day before they left for the deposition, it meant more than the deposition but her desision to testify. There is so much at risk now.
Alice is there, that should help reduce the tension but will also give them opportunities like where the chapter ended to be closer to each other.
Please, don't forget about us, you thought we might have, but we didn't. So update please :)
Author's Response: It's good to be back :)
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I enjoyed reading what you got from this chapter and the story. And really, I couldn't forget about you, the readers.
Best,
Christina
Reviewer: apple (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:42 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
i still love this story, cant wait until the next chapter :)
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:39 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Thank you so much for a wonderful chapter!!
This is one of my favorite stories and I am so happy tax season is over!
Edward and Bella are getting so much closer...I hope things don't get akward in teh morning!
Reviewer: martha8450 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:30 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm so glad you updated! I love the story line.
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:29 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Love it and have been checking the page several times a day for updates. Awesome surprise this morning when I saw there was a new chapter up! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: sfinn (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:24 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I love the story and can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming chapters and at the trial and how things turn out for Edward and Bella; I'm hoping for a fairy-tale ending, even though I know it could easily go the other way.
Reviewer: starsplash (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:23 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Yeah! I thought you had forgotten about this story! I'm happy she is more determined now! It's nice to see her grow :) I hope they will end up together after the trial and everything! Will Alice have her baby next chapter? I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Alice's baby is coming quite soon, but you'll need to read the next chapter to find out. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:20 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
ahh, I've been waiting so long for you to update this! it's my favorite and you were killing me by not updating haha. but you made it up to me with this chapter. it was GREAT. : )
keep up the AMAZING writing!! I totally can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: greenfairy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:07 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm still reading! I love where it's going. I like that Edward and Bella aren't "easily" becoming this couple, but are doing it regardless. I can't wait to find out more about the Volturi and to see what happens when the family finds out the truth etc etc etc. Don't ever let it be that long without an update! You're killing me!
Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:04 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
im enjoying this story it has been a while that i read it but i love it and i hope her and edward have a happy endingg with little children lol :)
updateee sooon! :D
Reviewer: AL Springdale (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:02 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm so glad you updated! I really liked this chapter and how Bella and Edward are finally getting it right! I wish you had spent a little more time on the deposition, though. After building up to it for so many chapters, I thought we'd get Bella's POV of what happens. I'm sure you had your reasons, though :). Update soon!
Author's Response: I thought long and hard about how much time to spend on the deposition... and considering how soon the story is ending, and all the things that need to happen, I thought it was better this way. Hopefully when the story is done you will agree. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Dazzled801 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:53 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
YES!! Finally another Chapter!! Please keep them coming. This is a good story and I can't wait to read the outcome. You've kept me hanging here. Update soon.
Reviewer: Voluptuous Vamp (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:49 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Even though it's been a while, I still came running when I saw the update email. I'm really excited to know what Bella saw happen between Jenks and Caius. Keep up the good work and please don't torture us with another extended absence.
Reviewer: KayBressi (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:39 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
it was great to get an update! I was a bit surprised but excited =). It was lovely, as always! Can't wait for the next update =)
Reviewer: tally 06 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:27 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Glad you're back!
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