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Reviewer: nienna (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:47 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm so glad you decided to continue this :) It's such a cool idea and this chapter was great. Keep it up! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Reviewer: twilightrules (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:45 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
wow that was good can not wait to see what happesnss
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Zipkins (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:25 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Awesome, simply amazing. Don't know where to start. Great plot, good writing, what more can I say? I see so much potential in here that I'm speechless. Just wondering when will Bella remember she's met J. Jenks before the gala dinner... I take it that Edward already suspects his involvement with the Volturi.
Author's Response: Thank you! As for Bella's memory... keep in mind she greeted a LOT of people when she worked for the Volturi... and she had no reason to expect to meet any Volturi people in Seattle, since she did all of her work in Chicago.
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:12 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
OMFG!! I actually screamed, like proper omg there is a murder in the house screamed, which therefore meant my whole family came running in and i was then welcomed with the strange looks when they realised i screamed because of something on my laptop!
but aaah i am so not a jacob fan! Like i am dedicated member of team edward and even though it is AU-Human and all i am still gutted!
this is an amazing story though i am keeping my fingers crossed for some more E/B and Jake to just conviently dissapear! lol
off to read the next chapters!!! =D
Reviewer: horsegirl75 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:01 PM · On: February 29, 2008
just starting to read this story and am very excited. greast start!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 02:35 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
You have written such a fantastic story here. The plot is moving just fast enough to keep me on the edge of my seat, intrigued. I'm on my tip toes looking over the fence to see where this is really going and I have no clue on how you will end this. Bliliant, intriguing, and so suspenseful! This is definitely one of my top 5 favs! Now hurry up! I need to see where this ride ends!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story so much. Next chapter should go up in a week and a half or so... they take longer to write now that the plot threads are winding tighter.
Reviewer: evabell (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:42 PM · On: February 29, 2008
ugh im so glad you have the patients for it, some authors can't wait for the chracters to get to the good stuff and the then story line just feels so rushed.
Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:15 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
your updates make my heart happy(:
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:03 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Oh my! It is about time he gave in to her.
I look forward to the next update. :)
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: jamiejackson42 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:51 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
i just started reading this one, I really like long stories and kept looking at this story and passing it. I'm glad to have finally gave it a shot, it's really good I like it. I like the "mob" that cracks me up. Although I think we should get to have a little action since it all happened previous to when the story began.
Author's Response: A little action? What kind? Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: evabell (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:44 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I've been waiting for something like this to happen. For them to just let go for a while. :D
Author's Response: me too!
Reviewer: Sarah2785 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:25 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Definitely, definitely still reading. I almost squealed like a little girl seeing she's been bought a Swan Princess Barbie for Christmas when I saw a new chapter had been put up. It was brilliant as always.
Author's Response: thank you, I'm so glad you're still reading!
Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:12 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
very good job i am so still here very good chapter i am glad she is done with her depostion very well writen i give it a ten
amy
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: purplexbuttercup (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:38 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
I just started reading this maybe an hour or so ago. I love it!
Hehe, March 22 is my birthday. :D
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:29 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
it was good. although i had to skip the last part...not really into that kinda thing. i really want to know what happened in the deposition and what is going to happen if/ when the whole vulturi thing is done with!
UPDATE SOONER! thanks!
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying the story as a whole! :)
Reviewer: vamptramp16 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:14 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
My apologies if this is a repeat...I tried to post yesterday, but my PC locked up. Anyhoo...I just wanted to say how thrilled I was to see this update. This is such a well written story with a great plot. I can't wait for the next chapter. Just wanted to pass along my compliments and thak you for your hard work!
Author's Response: No apologies needed for reviewing... not ever. :)
Thanks so much for taking the time to review (twice!)
Reviewer: The Brunette (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:06 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm so glad your going to complete this story. This has been one of my favourites on the whole site! The characterisation of Edward and Emmet, particularly, has been absolutely compelling. Only eight or nine chapters left, please make them long ones!!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I don't think I can avoid making them long ones. As it was, I didn't get quite as far with this chapter as I'd planned, and this one was longer than usual.
Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know you're reading.
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:39 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Wow, that was a long wait at such a tense time in the story. However, knowing that life gets in the way of fun sometimes, I will still keep you on my favorites - the story line is too compelling to stop now. I love that they are being "forced" to stay together at night. Love the lovin'!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story... and I know it was a long time to wait... hopefully I can wrap up the story by the end of September. That is my goal, anyway. Thanks for keeping me in your faves :)
Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:27 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
please keep going. I had thought that maybe you stopped writing this story and was happily surprised when I saw your update. Thank you!
Author's Response: thanks so much for letting me know you're still reading!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:14 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Still reading, still in love with the story.
Author's Response: thank you for letting me know and for reading!
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:36 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I was surprised to see an update. I thought maybe you gave up on the story. I did have to refresh myself a bit. I am enjoying this story though, thanks for continuing it. Seems like Bella and Edward may be expressing their feelings a little more. Good to see.
Author's Response: A lot of people were surprised, haha. I have not given up, obviously. I am trying to wrap the story by the end of September. Thanks so much for sticking with me.
Reviewer: TF Alice (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:15 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
So glad you are updating again. I can't wait for the rest of this story; it is my favorite I have found on Twilighted.
This chapter was great. A lot happened here and the story is really progressing. I am nervous to find our how Edward and Bella deal with the Vulturi/ Occhi.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to let me know you're reading and for following along. I, too, am nervous for Bella and Edward, believe it or not.
Reviewer: stinkybunny (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:49 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
it was sooo worth the wait. this story has me addicted.
Author's Response: thank you!!
Reviewer: brimag (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:21 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Just started reading and I am loving it! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: twilightbbmom (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:56 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
This chapter was wonderful, but cut too short! I have spent months checking daily for an update, and was really happy to see you continue. I worried that after such a time lapse, I would have a tough time getting back into it. Not a problem, that credits your wrriting ability to immediately bring the reader into the story. There were times I almost stopped checking and took it out of my favorites, thank goodness I did not. Welcome back! I am really looking forward to the remaining chapters. Thanks!!
Author's Response: The chapter may have seemed short... but it was longer than average. I'm delighted to hear that you hadn't forgotten so much of the story that you no longer cared about the update. I don't intend to ever go so long again. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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