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Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:03 PM · On: May 4 - May 15, 2008
Hm..
Okay, just hoping things will move along a little bit here.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:45 PM · On: April 27 - May 5, 2008
Go Emmett.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:52 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
WWEFD: We Want Edward For Dinner
Ha, I crack myself up. [:
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:20 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008
I'm liking this. A lot.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 11:58 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
You madea good point in this chapter: Alice does think that Edward is perfect, and completely overlloks his flaws because he loves him so much.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:50 AM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
Gah, Jacob.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:29 AM · On: March 24-27, 2008
Or the two weeks will make him miss her, and not only her body.
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:17 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
come back! i need more of this story. this was the first really interesting AH fanfic i saw, but i was hesitant to read it b/c when i first started reading fanfic i was snobby and only wanted vampires. well that was a blessing and a curse b/c although i missed out on an amazing story when i first started, i got more chapters when i finally did. and now i need more. this story is great! don't leave me hanging. i can't take it!
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:45 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
No, Bella, it most defintiely is not the wine.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:30 PM · On: March 22, 2008
Really, he still needs to loosen up.]:
I like how you made him older than Bella, though. It's jsut like that in Twilight.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
He definitely needs to losen up some.
Reviewer: lsvm21 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:14 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Such great writing. Gread diction. I love the suspense and the fact that you keep many things hidden as you give out crumbs to keep us following your trail! I'm always checking to see when there is more!
I loved how Edward kept hearing innocent comments as sexual ones. Too funny!
Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: rachaelxleanna (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:00 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Awww....crap...why did you end it there?....MORE PLEASE SOON!!!!!
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 06:45 PM · On: February 29, 2008
I began reading this on Fanfiction.net before and I plan to finish it here.
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Cool story.
Reviewer: mommyjgv (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:25 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I just found this story this weekend and am so sad that I've caught up! I have enjoyed it very much and would love to see another update soon!!!
Reviewer: jamiejackson42 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:44 PM · On: February 29, 2008
ok so i just figured out that you could write back to us LOL. Your question to me was what kind of action i was talking about. well the car chase happend and only got a mention so i'm hoping they will come after her one more time durning the trial and have something really exciting where Edward and Emment have to fight them. Something like another car race or a shot out in the court house that would be good.
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:53 PM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008
aww, slowly and sexily falling in love...
Reviewer: PRodgersRN (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:06 PM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
Love the story! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chpter.
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:04 AM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
oh. my. god. that was amazing. now i like the lemons as much as the next girl, but that was fantastic. in true edward form he was a gentleman all the way through (apart from sneaking a peek ;). i thought it was great how he let her lead, moved to her pace and made sure she enjoyed her experience. there was a beautiful tenderness to it that was different and refreshing. well done
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 01:12 AM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
bitchy alice. not in the demanding psychic way but in the regular, probably hormonal, bitchy way is weird. i don't know if i like it. i don't hate it though
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 04:20 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
omg, that was hilarious! i can totally see emmett grabbing rose by the arm and leading her away like a totally pissed off he-man, and her just being like "oh crap, i'm in trouble."
and bella running? brilliant! i shed a tear laughing at that, it was so funny!
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
awkward...
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:54 PM · On: February 29, 2008
no-bullshit Emmett and momma Rosalie. i love it. it's so nice to see them outside of their usual fanfic characters, human or no.
even edward is outside his usual holier-than-thou gentleman routine and is kind of a prick. but i have a feeling i'm gonna warm up to him =)
so far, so good
Reviewer: mspolarisblack (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:56 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
oooh..lovely...totally had to go back and re read some stuff coz i forgot, but worth the wait...i love the care that edward put into making alibis for him and her while the deposition was taking place...:)
Reviewer: Laure_lei (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:19 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
This story was recommended by Meadow on Twilight-Headed, and I've read it non-stop without pausing to review. I absolutely LOVE it, and I can't wait for the rest!!
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