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Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:00 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

It was definitely worth the wait! I'm always eager for more! :)

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: twinklyspecialkag (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:36 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Ah that was soooooo perfect, definately worth the wait. thank you!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:23 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:18 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I'll take that extra long chapter and follow it up with an extra long review. :-)

From the top - I think it's fascinating that Marie/Bella may have actually done a little "interrogating" for Volterra.  It just reignites my curiosity as to why she was recruited in the first place.  What has she done to make Aro want to trust her with some of the other aspects of the business?? 

While I didn't think it was going to be a one-night thing, I'm thrilled to have that confirmed!!  I actually love the fact that Bella now thinks of herself as "Bella" - and I hope she's right about not acknowledging a "Marie" in a room... b/c I've been nervous about something like that happening to her. 

Edward's disappearing acts - has to be the Occhi... especially after her dream of him being surrounded by wolves.  But wasn't he going to have her join too?  I can't help but think that Edward is inadvertently making things worse... he kinda has a habit of letting his over-thinking ways get the best of him.

And speaking of making things worse, Jake is totally going to mess something up.  I'm not normally inclined to distrust Jake, but I do in HIPS land.  I don't think it will be intentional... but, something is going to happen there.  I think:-)

I love that Bella stood up to Tanya and marked her territory.  Excellent!  I kinda want to smack Emmett upside the head for bringing up the trial at a party in the presence of 150 people.  He saw her reaction to the deposition date, this has to be 10x worse.  And she has to just put on a happy face and be hostessy.  Bush league, Emmett.

I wonder how much the arrival of JC and the ILY declarations will preoccupy Bella from thinking back to her conversation with Jason?  I hope she doesn't let it slip from her mind completely. 

AWWWW - ILYs!!!!!!!  I love that hers was completely unintentional.  And that he quickly returned it.  SQUEEEEE!

Author's Response:

Delicious review. I enjoyed every drop of it. 

I can't answer any of your questions, unfortunately, but I'm assuming you meant them rhetorically to let me know what you're thinking.

All I can say is that <3 thoughtful readers like you.

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:18 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Awesome! Please update soon.


Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: TLee (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 09:41 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Loved the chapter, as yes definately still following the story!

I am a bit worried for Bella though, that Jason Jenks knows something - hmmmm!!

Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: More Than My Own Life (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 09:20 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

This was fantastic and I am DYING to read the coming chapters! This is such a great story that could go so many different directions, and I am loving the unpredictability of it. Thanks for writing such an awesome fic, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response:

I am writing the coming chapters as fast as I can! Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 08:20 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Oh my holy hell!!!!  She said "I love you" out loud on accident and he said it back!  I'm happy Alice had the baby and he's healthy and happy, but OME, they admitted they love each other!  YES!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 08:20 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Lovely!  I hope Bella and Edward get there someday.

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:54 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

awwwww lovely - although you are killing me with the hints of lemons without the detail!

I'm still enjoying this story - I usually get bored and give up if they aren't updated really regularly but I'm sticking with this one so that's a compliment :)  Thanks for the long chapter this time!


Author's Response:

thanks for sticking with the story, I'm glad you're enjoying it, even without lemons galore. :)

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:50 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

i loooooooove this story!!!  you can't imagine how happy i was to see in my inbox that it was updated.  please hurry with the next chapter...thanks!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ArcCleo (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:41 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I loved every single word of it...

Great Chapter :)

Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:25 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I reall adore this story - it is on of my faves on this site...

The "i love you's" were perfect...

Update soon...

Author's Response:

thank you!!

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:57 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Great chapter.  I'm so glad you're back finishing it up!  Thank you!

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:42 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Yes!! Loved it! I'm so happy you're still writing!

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:18 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Awsum chapter. Keep em coming!

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:18 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

thanks for the extra long chapter! it was great! i get so excited everytime i see that this story gets updated! haha update soon please!

Author's Response:

you're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:11 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

thank you. 

Author's Response:

you're welcome :)

Reviewer: Jacoba (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:47 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Yay! An update!!! Lots of plot development here, and some lemony goodness too!

One of my pet peeves is when I do something for my kids (like organize a sleepover or a water park day) and before it's even over they are bugging me for the next thing they want.

You probably feel that way when we bug you for updates, huh? So, I WON'T be a hypocrite and pester you for the next update. (I might be thinking it, but that's different, no?)

Instead, I'll thank you for the pleasure of this one.

I'm guessin' Edward's been hanging with the Oochi, or whatever they are called. And what will come of J. Jenk's previous connection with Marie? Hmmm. Loved that Bella stood up to Tanya. And Alice. :)



Author's Response:

Yes, an update :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it so. I will try to get the next chapter out quickly, but it turns out it is hard for me to write to an outline... and we're at the point now where every scene has to be outlined to make sure I can tie up all the loose ends. So we'll see. It is my goal to finish by the end of September, but this chapter put me behind some.

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:44 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

finally!! and i mean that doubly: finally the chapter is here (yay!) and finally the admitting to love. triply: baby on board now. mazel tov!

that was so great. i love this story. i love that they're still getting to know each other and falling in love and that the trial is coming up. what's gonna happen there? i'm pumped.

oh, and when edward approached her, good grief, that was amazing! i coulf see it and it was awesome.

please don't go away for so long again; it's torture

Author's Response:

Ha. Yes, finally.

I will def. try and have the next chapter up sooner. Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:41 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I think I just dissolved into a puddle of syrupy sweetness.  What a beautiful chapter, for so many reasons.  Totally worth the wait :) 

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:41 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I luv this chapter. All about Bella connecting emotionally with almost everyone in the Cullen family.

And now, they've admitted their feelings for each other. But she has the trial soon....Pls don't make us wait for an update for too long!

Author's Response:

I will try not to. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: missingbrinly (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:26 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008


Author's Response:

you're welcome! thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:16 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

It was so great! I absolutely loved it. I love that little Alice was giving birth and I just had this whole movie playing out in my head of that last section in the hospital.

Great work, once again. Please try to update sooner, if at all possible. :]

Author's Response:

This review made me smile. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:08 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

i think...that may have been the best "i love you" i've ever read! it was so unexpected, and yet so perfect. wow. i'm just sitting here, smiling and content. thanks for the wonderfully lengthy chapter. i just wanted it to go on and on.

and, i love all the sex-less sexytime. of course, i want them to get it on, but this just builds the anticipation and (further) established edward's sweetness. yay!

oh, and go bella, for not only putting tanya in her place - but also for fully clarifying things with alice. that was awesome.


Author's Response:

Rochelle, I'm delighted you enjoyed the "i love you"s. I've been waiting so long for that moment!

As for the sex, I personally felt that given the way it happened the first time that it was super important that if it happened again it would be within a loving relationship.

And YES, Bella is finally coming out of her shell.

Thank you for reading :)


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