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Reviewer: selli (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 12:26 AM · On: February 29, 2008
I'm still reading :) i love this story. But, i'm a bit confused. Is this the last chapter or will there be more?
Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:56 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Yea! We need more! Eight months until the trial... hopefully, plenty of time to enjoy being a couple before the Volturi crash in on them. I'm worried about this Jenks character, the Occhi can't be a good thing for Bella. Hope you update soon, kutgw!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:00 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
OMG!! I cannot wait until you update again....it's been so long I had almost forgotten the story....almost 8-]
Heather
Reviewer: jstormlala (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:45 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
awww. I love it.
that was so worth the wait!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:46 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
The story is so worth the wait :)
Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:19 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Awww,that was beautiful,and they even said they loved each other.Sigh.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:55 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
aw :)
i wish these updates weren't so far apart...:P
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:21 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Oh limona, it never matters to me how long it takes to get a new chapter ... it simply matters that we get them.
I actually had tears in my eyes when Edward held the baby. I am sooooo sappy like that and it was written so very beautifully.
Now this Jenks guy has me just a little bit worried. Good guy? Bad guy? I really, really want him to be a good guy.
Can Esme get any more loveable than she was in this chapter? I mean giving Bella pointers and everything is this chapter. I found myself giggling a time or two.
Yeah, yeah I know lots of other great stuff happened...the dance, the date, the convo with Jake...but thoughts of all that kinda flew out the window.
When Edward and Bella declared their love. They were a couple of horn dogs in the beginning but when he said he loved her at the end ... well i may be typing this with some kind of silly girl crush grin as my heart flutters.
EXCELLENT CHAPTER!
Sandra
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:07 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
This remains one of my favorites on this site (if not my very favorite) and I still think your writing is awesome! It's just so amazing I want to cry for not being able to spin these tales like you can!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: violakate (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 02:56 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
O.O
Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 02:39 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
really a great one. update soon!!!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 02:25 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
*Squee* You can't go far wrong with declarations of love amd babies being born! Great chapter! I really love this story and I'm so glad that Edward and Bella's relationship is moving forward the way it is! Surely they'll be a proper couple by the time the trail is in Febuary!?
Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:50 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
loved i'm a new comer 2 this story and i love it write fast please u are a briliant author kept it going
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:45 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Yeah! That was a wonderful chapter! I know there will be more angst and hard times, but I hope that Edward and Bella stay happy together through it.
Reviewer: Vanillamochalatte (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:14 PM · On: March 22, 2008
This is turning out to be a great story. I'm anxious to see if Bella falls in love with Emmett or Edward (biting my nails) :-)
Reviewer: rosie_girl (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:22 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
sigh, wow.
i love this story. and the way you ended this chapter, sigh, i love it.
i have been falowing this story since the begging. since i found it, i read it and each time i find another chapter, i had to catch up.
the way this chapter ended, i can not stop thinking about it.
amazing work.
please keep it up. i need to find out what happeneds to edward and bells.
i cant wait to read the next part to the amazing fanfiction i am now addicted to.
like i said, great work.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:00 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
oh wow a new chapter after so long and they actually said I love you, even if Bella's was kind of "thinking out loud"... the fact that Edward answered will go hugely towards reinforcing her confidence in their status and allow her to act more readily upon it :)
Reviewer: twilightbrunette23 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:05 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I loved the chapter as always. I am excited to see what unfolds from J Jenks recognizing Bella!! You have a great writing style. Thanks for sharing your story!
Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 09:13 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
YAY!!!! I love babies and declarations of love made from the subconscious. So glad to have you back.
Reviewer: OCD_indeed (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:41 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I'm still here. Still reading. Still loving.
So much happening! Loved it.
I like the (pardon my poor use of words) "fade to black." A story like this doesn't necessarily need the smut jammed in our faces all the time. It detracts sometimes.
Side note: Seeing Rosalie like this is always nice. I have the hardest time with her, and I hate it when people paint her as a complete bitch, so it's nice to the see the little touches etc that you have added.
Okay, I will stop because I am not making any sense and am sounding like a fool. Thank you for the update, waiting patiently for another.
OCD
Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:54 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Kudos to another great chapter. I just don't like the cliffies at the end....oh well something to look forward to!!
Reviewer: danigr89 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:20 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD... I LOOVEEE THEEEM... and i loveee thiis!!!!!!!
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:37 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I bloody loved the long chapter. You are a legend. I have to say that i would have liked a few more details about how Edward "set a lot of things right" with Bella that night......
I loved Bella kicking Tanya's butt but oh my god i'm nervous already about Mr Jenks! Please update faster if you can so i don't get a stomach ulcer!
And the "I love you"'s were perfect. You ROCK. Thanks so much.
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:51 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
WOW WOW WOW they said thats just so great i cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: jasleenkaytina (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:50 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
My exact reaction to the ending of this chapter:
"EEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEeeee!" You know, that high-pitched sound that i'm sure only dogs can hear, with crazy facial expression and the shaking fists, 'cause i'm just so damn happy for these two!
Please, please, please keep updating! :)
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