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Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:30 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
get you some girl
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:31 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008
so far so good
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:05 AM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
i liked this chapter and i like jacob i also like edward and jasper and oh emmett
Reviewer: worth_it (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:46 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
Ok...I am hooked, my dad keeps yelling at me to get off the computer but I want to read more!
XXjXX
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 04:59 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Awesome chapter! They actually admitted their feelings, but I sense drama on the way. I just realized Jason Jenks was in a falshback and then at the gala. He recognizes her doesn't he? I just know something bad is going to happen now that Bella and Edward are happy.
Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 02:11 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I do hope you don't leave hanging out here for to long. This is one of the most exciting stories I've read in a while. One of the things I loved most about this sory is the many different avenues you have left open for yourself to take this story. I just hope you don't wait to long to give another chapter or two. I love that Edward is falling in love with her and that she is getting through to the family. I waiting to see if Jacob is going to be a protective factor or if he will be bought out by the big boys and hired to kill her. I am not sure how your going to be able to savage the relationship in the end so that Bella and Edward can have a life they both deserve but I have faith that you can do.
Reviewer: kitkatkatie (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 06:22 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
awwwwwww that was awesome
Reviewer: antebellum (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 02:38 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I really like this story, I think you've really captured the essence of each and every character. Great job, keep it up! I'm waiting for more! =]
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 08:06 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Give me more...update soon!!!
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:03 AM · On: June 7 - June 13, 2008
I'm a little confused in chapter 16 at the gala, Bella and Edward are sitting at their table with a Jason Jenks and then in Chapter 17 flashback she is picking up a Jason Jenks from the airport...is this the same man?
Author's Response: If it's not the same man, it would be a mighty big coincidence... because I don't make goofs like that.
Reviewer: pammi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:11 PM · On: April 19 - April 26, 2008
!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....:)
Reviewer: Gigglegirl1616 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:21 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I want the next chapter! :D
Reviewer: pammi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:18 PM · On: April 17 - 19, 2008
nice......:)
Reviewer: pammi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 05:05 PM · On: April 15 - April 18, 2008
fantastic chappy!!!your Rosalie is spot. on. great job girl!!!
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:48 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Love it,
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:35 PM · On: March 22, 2008
So far I LOOOOOOOOOVE this story!!!!
Reviewer: lovetoplay (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:06 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I'm am so enjoying your story! I started it yesterday & ended up staying up way way too late because I couldn't stop reading! I am thrilled at the ending of this chapter & am so glad to see them finally showing their feelings. I am such a sucker for happy endings, and I'm hoping that theirs will be great, although I'm sure they're in for quite a wild ride before then. Maybe we'll even see some possessive and overprotective Edward?? I love that you do both POV. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: DazzleMe5202 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 06:29 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Ohhhhh I am soooo loving this!! You are very talented. I wish I had as much creativity as you do!
Reviewer: pammi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
oooh, this is fun...loving brusqward!
Reviewer: shopgirl7000 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:31 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I absolutely love this story!!! I just started reading it yesterday and couldn't stop until I got to the last chapter. I can't wait for another "extra-long" chapter!
Reviewer: DazzleMe5202 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:51 AM · On: March 22, 2008
Ok, so I just wanted to say that I'm not a huge fan fic fan, but you may have turned me! lol I am soo into this! I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:38 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
:o) i am enjoying this story so I hope it is UPDATED soon
Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:14 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
ahhhhh I am so in love with this story!! so suspenseful but sweet too - love what you've done with the characters - cannot wait for more!!! update update update!!!!!
Reviewer: justjenn (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:43 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I love your writing style! A friend of mine suggested I start reading your story and I am totally enthralled!
Your words leave my heart racing and my thoughts tumbling. I can escape for a few minutes and just be whisked away to the "world" you created...I can't wait for the next chapter!
justjenn
Reviewer: laurielaur (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
great story! got me hooked from the first chapter!
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