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Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:36 PM · On: April 13 - April 14, 2008
I'm a little mad the whole family knows what happen dang they are going to think she is a slut man oh man now Rosalie totaly has a reason not to like her great like she needed a reason before.
Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:08 PM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
Please tell me that was a dream OMG why wouldn't they go to his place Why is she even with him I mean come on and then you do it in Edwards house please I expected a little more from Bella.
Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:38 PM · On: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008
Aww I hope they can be friends but thats it I hope
Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:13 PM · On: March 24-27, 2008
I like that I also like that you made him older Then Bella. This story is so good I can't stop.
Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:46 PM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2
Wine helps you tell the truth lol
Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Thursday, March 20, 2008
Wow he is quite into himself. Anyhoo he should have let her pick it out with him. I really like this story so far on to the next chappy
Reviewer: Elleg20 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 11:50 AM · On: February 29, 2008
This story sounds very interesting I can't wait to find out what happens next
Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 06:36 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Very nice chapter. They finally said the 3 magic words. I really liked the fact that Bella got her revenge on Tanya.That portion was well written.Ofcourse Bella would second guess herself and Edward would reassure her.
Reviewer: Camimae707 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 10:02 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW I CAN'T BELIEVE IT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: EdwardMakeGingerPop (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:14 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
The last lines of this chapter made my heart melt, I love the angle you used to allow E & B to declare themselves. Fantastic story! I am totally riveted! The dialog is incredible, I am enjoying it so much, and the plot is sexy as hell, Bella posing as Edward's Fiance and under the guise of her protection, hell yes! The pairing is so very sexy and the sexual tension...palpable and burning HOT! I love Bella's flawed logic that to stay alive she has to have sex so she can live to regret it and Edward volunteering his, ya know, to help her out - haha. Yum. Two words - HOT TUB! Um, give us more!
Reviewer: Shelby911 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:08 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I thought I submitted a review but now I'm not sure. My work computer is on the fritz. Just know in case you didn't get the 1st one that I said many wonderful things and hope you update soon.
Reviewer: Shelby911 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 09:06 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I've read this in a matter to two days and I can't believe I haven't read it sooner. I am completely in love with this story. I get tired of reading fics where there are a 1000 POVs and every minute detail is rehashed 100 times. You put just enough info in there to make me want just a little more but still get the point and everyone involved feelings across. From your ANs it seems your updates are sporatic, I'm happy to wait, but really I'm not very patient especially now that I'm so sucked in. Hope you update soon but if not know I am not patiently waiting.
Reviewer: Carabella Sophia (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:14 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I'm loving this! Please continue, I'm dying to read more! Well done :)
Reviewer: RosalieAliceluvr (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:09 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Bonjour! Greetings from France! I hope you'll update soon! I can't wait to see E and B's near future. Maybe marriage and even babies! Please tell me you're going to go up to that part in the story!
Love Ya,
Celestexxx
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 04:02 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Ooo, what a wonderful chapter. Bella and Edward have finally admitted that they are in love with each other, but the question still remains, will their love last once everything is over between Marie and the Volturi? After all, most of Bella and Edward's relationship is based on a lie. Granted, they both know there is a lie involved, but even though they've gone into everything with open eyes, will it be enough to get them through life after? Can't wait to see what you've got planned!
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:01 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
The last few paragraphs of this chapter gave me goosebumps!!! I loved it :)
Reviewer: bellobella (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:25 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Pleeeeeeeeaaaaase don't give up on this story!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:13 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
you so did not end it on that!!!!! i was sooo happy that when i came back from holiday you had updated and now i'm going to have to go back to checking every day praying that a new chapter will appear!!
as usual loved loved loved it!
Reviewer: Gigglegirl1616 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:30 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Is it over?
Reviewer: justjenn (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:58 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
Where's the rest of the story?!?! What happened with Jason Jenks, the trail, and the wedding?
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:00 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
One word: Finally! :)
Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:21 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008
You are a good writer but I really hate reading about Bella and Jake. Dont get me wrong I am not so Team Edward that I hate Jake but I do not like the fact that she was going to give it up to him. Please let there be some Edward coming soon. Great story thus far!
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:17 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
loved it... can't wait for more
Reviewer: SilverInches (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:24 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
I love this story so much!!!
You are an amazing writer. cannot wait for more :)
Reviewer: lilspidermonkey (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:50 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008
oh my.... this is such a good story i don't know where to start i just can not wait to read the next chapter i just found this story today and read chapter 1 to 18 today keep up the good work and i will keep looking for updates the last line of this chapter made me sit here and think oooohhhh my!!!!! thank you
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