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Reviewer: justtwilight (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:07 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

wow this is awesome please please keep writing

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:05 AM · On: April 7 - April 11, 2008

I know they aren't really engaged, but I think she was wrong to tell Jake the secret and to sex him up - just as it felt wrong for Edward to publically flirt with Tanya. Sigh, how are they going to explain this one to Alice?

Author's Response:

Fortunately, those chapters are already posted. :)

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 09:26 AM · On: March 22, 2008, part 2

ahhh, so sweet

Reviewer: twilightgirl100195 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 04:35 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008


Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:59 PM · On: February 29, 2008

I really want to start reading this story, but I see that you said you took a break until mid dec. I'm worried that you won't come back to finish. Are you?

Author's Response:

i will come back and finish. I'm just busy.

Reviewer: Gem-dawg (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:39 PM · On: February 29, 2008

Ive been waiting for agesssss please update soon :) xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: Belize123 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:34 AM · On: February 29, 2008

wow so great! this story makes me feel tingly! Hope you update soon!

Reviewer: amm123 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:17 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Absolutely fantastic story line, I love it!

Reviewer: amm123 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:16 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Absolutely fantastic story line, I love it!

Reviewer: leerleer (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 05:54 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

OMG why haven't you updated please update I want to see them together

Reviewer: Synecdoche (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 02:27 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

amazing story... your style is absolutely captivating... can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Nathena (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:03 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I've just started reading Twilight Fanfiction and this story is a first AU-Human experience for me.  I'm loving it.  I do, however, have one question: why did Bella have to show her face at the deposition?  There are numerous occurences where witnesses have their voices altered and are never seen for safety purposes.  Why was this not possible for her?

I can't wait to see where this story goes.  I just want it to keep going and going!  Thanks for making this such an enjoyable read.


Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:33 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008


Ok, I read the hole story in just one day... And now, that my hand was aching to press the "next" button, there is NO button!

Oh my God.



*Thanks god it's alread 23rd December - you said we would have another chapter this month! *-*


Reviewer: lclar738 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 02:04 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

It's almost the end of December 2009!!!!


Really Great Story! Update Soon Please! 


Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: KayBressi (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 07:53 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I love love love this story!!


Reviewer: Nasuade (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 10:35 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

wow, I just started reading this story and I absolutely love it. I really love the development in their relationship :D Your writing is super! I enjoy it very much.. PLZ PLZ update soon!!

Reviewer: betxi626 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:42 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

i'm so excited to see what happens next.... you are one of the writers who are so good you've inspried me to write as well....

Reviewer: You know i love you (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:55 PM · On: February 29, 2008

It's a great story you are writting, and i'm hoping that i'll soon read this story.

Have a great christmas!!

Reviewer: KaitlynAusten (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:40 PM · On: February 29, 2008

so i read this on fanfic back in september...i'm craving more!!! please update. i know its will be like your christmas gift to the twilight fanfic world.

i would be excited to unwrap this!


Reviewer: countrygirl39 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 03:48 AM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I have fallen in love with this story.  The writing is so very good and the dialogue, interactions, plot, etc. is excellent.  I got addicted to the story and kept reading even though I was supposed to be doing other things LOL.  I hope you update soon! 

Reviewer: peculiar1 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 03:44 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

OMG i totally loved it and i want more! hahah please let me know when more chapters are avalilable! the story is awesome!

Reviewer: jodypearl1 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 02:02 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

Great story. Excited to read  the next chapter. Keep it coming....

Reviewer: beejay89 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 11:34 PM · On: February 29, 2008

This story is amazing!!! I hope you still plan to finish!! I'll still be here!!! :)

Reviewer: bricullen14 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 09:07 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

This story is FAB-U-LOUS. I'm loving every minute of it and am dying to know what happens. You give such a great narrative, it's so so so well written, and makes a lot of other fan fic seem downright silly. Keep it up! You kind of rock my world :)

Author's Response:

thank you :)

Reviewer: tkj001 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 01:06 PM · On: June 14 - June 20, 2008

I am dying to see what happens next your writings are fabulous  

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