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Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:11 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Thank you for finally returning!
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:10 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Ah the L word! I loved how excited she was to finally get to the LOVE making lol And poor Em, he's trying to keep it all together, keep them all safe and then there's his brother doing what? Underground societies and keeping tabs.. you'd think that it wasn't JUST Em in protective services lol
Great chapter!
Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:10 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Thank you for finally returning!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:08 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Welcome back!
Aro going to Renee is freaking me out. Makes me wonder whether the cancer free for however long she was and then the sudden relapse was true or if it had something to do with the Volturi. And what was it about Renee that made Aro want Marie after college? Repaying a debt of Renee's? Hmmm.
Loved the one word, "didyoumeanit?" and her mini freak out and his frank answer. Awesome. But I think my fave was that he didn't mess around with his feelings when talking with Emmett. He just threw it on the table with little provocation. So excellent.
They're totally going to have to run at some point. Isle Esme is my guess... maybe not for forever, but for awhile at least.
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me smile. I'm so happy you're still reading.
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:01 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
loved it
Reviewer: ThePiedPiper (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:57 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
I am so glad this story is back! I fell back into it like an easy chair. I can hardly wait for the remaining chapters!
-Chris
Author's Response: what a great compliment. thank you.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:56 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Yay, for an update! I love Edward and Bella growing closer, although he is going to mess it up badly by keeping everthing from her. I can't wait for more!!! :)
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:50 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Welcome back! I'm glad that Edward and Bella are "loving" each other!! :0)I've missed the story alot.
Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:49 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
So happy for an update! Well worth the wait.
Reviewer: countrygirl39 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:48 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
YAY!!!! Doing the happy dance and giggling and the hubby thinks I have lost it. I am so happy that you have updated and haven't abandoned the story. It is such a great storyline and there are so many possibilities, and you do such a great job writing it. I love your versions of Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie and Alice. This chapter was worth the wait - glad to see them moving the relationship forward instead of going backward. Hope Edward and Emmett can work well enough together since they are both control freaks but also both heavily invested. Love it! Keep it coming, please ;-)
Author's Response: thank for sticking with me!
Reviewer: crystal16 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:47 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
another excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:45 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
This is such a great story! Still...I am so glad that you wait and post when you are ready. Thank you Much luv
Author's Response: thank you ;)
Reviewer: Ironic Twist (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:45 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
I'm glad you're back and appreciate your committment to finishing this story. This was a wonderful chapter to get back into the swing with.
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: gigi (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:43 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
So freaking excited to read this. It was, of course, wonderful. Poor Emmett. He just can't see a way out. I can't either, but I know you can, certainly. I love Bella's enthusiasm and Edward's confidence, and I am just dying to see what happens next. Great job! What a fun addition to my night!
Reviewer: AmoreTwilight (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:41 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
First I did a happy dance when I got the email udpate!!! Then I started reading and couldn't stop the smile on my face...because I love your Edward and Bella aka Marie. The ILY's, breakfast in bed and Bella pulling of the boxers...WOW!
When Edward told Emmett that he loved her!!! GAHHH!! Their conversation with the cooler in the room was fantastic. And this line "If I believed for one moment that her presence was endangering our family, I would take her away somewhere else." Edward is really coming out strong and showing his force. I love this story!
Hope you had a wonderful Holiday season. I am so excited to have this story back in my inbox!
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Author's Response: Thank for sticking with me. Knowing you're reading makes me smile. I hope you, too, had a lovely holiday season.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:41 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
now it really has me thinking about what is going to happen to bella and edward after the trial. But i hope everyone is going to be safe, i really don't want any death to the cullens or thier family...
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:40 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
I'm glad you FINALLY posted a chapter. You're lucky to have such loyal readers - really. All of that aside, I am still reading because in your absence I have done a lot of reading of others authors. There are very few who can weave a complicated story like yours. I will be waiting (semi-patiently) for the next chapter! Whatever the reasons for your leave from this story, I truly hope you can take it through to its conclusion. The story deserves that.
Author's Response: Oh believe me, I know I am lucky. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: charityasmom (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:40 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Thanks for the update!!! I love this story and can't wait to read the outcome!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:35 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
thats really scary
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:34 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
So glad you are back! I am enjoying the story - can't wait to see how it all turns out!
Reviewer: jtab04 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:34 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Great to have this story back! Loved the chapter!
Reviewer: Lazairahel (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:34 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
I've so missed this story. I'm glad Emmett and Edward are on the same page now, sorta.
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:34 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
You're doing a Wonderful Job... cant wait for more Update Pleeeeeeeease Barb
Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:32 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
Yay! I am glad to see a new chapter. And it was great! Can't wait to read the next one. :)
Reviewer: Katie1824 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:30 AM · On: June 20 - June 24, 2008
I actually squeeeeeed when I saw this story was updated!! I've missed this story.
Awwww.....the ILY's were really sweet!!! Glad they are starting to move forward.
I think Emmett has a right to be concerned about his family. Things could get really ugly if they aren't careful, especially with what Edward it doing.
Great chapter as always!! :)
Author's Response: thank you!
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