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Reviewer: Remi (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:42 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

So good!! Can't wait to read more. I'm so hooked. My sister-in-law and I always call each other when you have updated!

Reviewer: hermhogwarts55 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 01:01 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Aww that was sooo sad, I hope everything turns out for the better! Update soon!!

Reviewer: Jocey17 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 10:38 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Simply amazing.

Your story has touched me in so many ways i love it :)

I cant wait to read what happens next

Reviewer: Red_9415 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 10:13 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Okay I'm crying over here! Love this story! I sure do hope that these two get their crap together! Update soon

Love Red 

Reviewer: Tsuki9 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:22 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

I've missed this story soooo much!! Haven't had a chance to review the earlier updates, so I'm taking the time now to say thanks for updating!! Can't wait for the next chapter, the suspense is killing me!

Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 05:52 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Oh my, This was so heartbreaking, even though I understand the reasoning behind the actions. Thank you

Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 05:08 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Oh my goodness, I am so happy you are back :) Hope all is well. Wonderful last two chapters, I'm so sad Bella is leaving :(

Reviewer: Samolly (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 03:55 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

You really got the story back on track with this chapter.  Especially loved the Heid flashbacks, it explained a lot.  Great work!

Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 03:29 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

That was an intense chapter.  I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: gigi (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 11:57 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Next Sunday??????  Can't possibly wait that long.  I can't believe she is leaving him.  Auuuugh!  I certainly didn't see this one coming.  I know you will work it out for us, though.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 11:52 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Wow.  Heartbreaking.  Edward will be lost.  He will stop at nothing in order to bring her back to him.  Excellent!

Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 11:04 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Ah, I can't wait for Sunday. I have a feeling Bella/Marie should have a gun; something for defense.

She's pretty damn courageous. I could never have done anything like that. Well done, B/M.

xE

Reviewer: ShadowEyes (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:11 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Damn.  I've been reading this for what feels like forever, but this is my first review.  I was worried when you seemed to stop writing, but this is getting even better that I thought it was!  I'm so impressed with your writing.  I secrely hope you do this for a living so all this talent can make you some big bucks. 



Author's Response:

I am a CPA turned stay-at-home mom. But I appreciate the sentiment. Thanks for your kind review :)

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 10:02 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Awesome chapter as always. Can not wait for Sunday!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:41 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

That was heartbreaking.  I really hope Edward sees through her note to the truth.  You have a gift for making us care about your characters.

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:34 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

NOOO!!!

Ugh! I seriously want to hurt Bella for leaving!

All right...I get why she did it. She just loves Edward and the family too much for them to get hurt, but it still sucks that she left. Edward is going to be heartbroken. He loves her so much and was doing all he could to make sure they would be together. And Emmett is just going to be pissed. I'm not sure how long she'll make it without being found. Edward and Emmett are going to look for her I think and she still has to be hiding from the Volturi. I really hope the Volturi aren't the ones who find her first.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: starsplash (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:34 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

TEAR!!! NNNOOO!!!! I mean I can see why she would leave I even had a feeling you were going to take it this direction but still!!! WWAAAHHH!!!! Is it Sunday yet? hahaha I can't wait till then!!!

Reviewer: excearulo (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:57 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Oh, So Good!  I can't wait for Sunday!  My heart is pounding - you do such a great job of making me feel the complexities of Bella's/Marie's emotions.  I keep checking back now and again for updates - I got three new chapters to read this go around!  I'll def. check sooner - can't wait!  Great Work!

Reviewer: ktcullen17 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:51 AM · On: February 29, 2008

I hope that the rest of the family will be in on the secret soon! Poor Rose and Alice!

Reviewer: ddiiddly (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:41 AM · On: June 3 - June 6, 2008

this is realy good i love it

Reviewer: Toni105 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:48 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Wow...so good.  Welcome back!

Reviewer: snafu07 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 08:04 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Wow, I love this story more than I though it was possible for me to love an AU-human story. It's amazing, I cannot wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 06:01 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

OH! Sunday can't come quick enough. Great chapter! (:

Reviewer: justtwilight (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 03:25 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

I really just love this story thanks 

Reviewer: caimera (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 10:03 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Can't wait until Sunday!  What a way to leave everyone hanging!!  I am a happy ending kind of girl, hope that you are too!  :)

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