Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 04:16 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Oh...poor Edward! I wonder what Bella's been up to....
Loved it, as always :)
Reviewer: jolene509 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:41 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
It's strange to see this: Bella leaving Edward alone and broken. Oh, I hope this resolves soon. They're so in love! Thanks for this amazing story!
Reviewer: pink_photographer (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:24 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
NO! Gah. When is the next update? LOL I can't wait! This is the kind of angst I like! :D
hehe
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:21 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
I think Jessica said that on purpose to snake info out of Edward. And I want Alice to know what's going on. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:16 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
ooohh, it's getting so good, I can't wait for more! :)
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:11 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
I can't believe that jessica would know Bella's real name even! it's getting even more suspenseful...can't wait to see what unfolds.
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:03 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
It gets better each chapter! Poor broken Edward. Can't wait to hear what Marie has been up to :)
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:02 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
OMG!! can't wait to see how Edward is going to explain to Alice. Is he going to tell the truth? so, if Laurent knew about Bella it's means that there are more people knew..... Bella please be safe!!
Poor Edward!! I can't blame him for thinking that Bella didn't love him. nice chapter!!
Reviewer: imlovinlife (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:56 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
ahhhhhhhhh! another cliffie??
btw cant wait to read the next chapter.
=)
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:54 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Oh shit!! alice knew now! where could bella be right now? i hope she's safe..
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:51 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Oh God it's been months since Bella disappeared...I hope she is OK.
Dum dum DUM...Alice knows, oh the wake of destruction will begin. Rose is going to kick Emmett's ass once she finds out the truth. Jessica really isn't the shinest penny in the bunch is she...snicker.
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:51 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Can't wait to get them back together... please hurry February! Thanks for the update. Great intriguing chapter.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:48 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Uh-oh! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: nataliem (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:25 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Ughhhhhh! I suppose I should say that this was a wonderful chapter, and I am DYING to know what happens next, but I am rather bitter over waiting for updates;) I love fan fictions, but this waiting thing sucks! Sounds like it was a good thing Bella took off, that Laurent freaked me out, and apparently for a good reason. also wondering what is up with the painting... I keep thinking it's somehow bugged, or was somehow a threat to Bella...? Hope she calls Edward soon, poor baby. You know I'd comfort him if I could;)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:21 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Whoo! You give the best cliffies! (Damnbit!) :D
Love the inverse canon here. Wondered back when he joined the Occhi if he would regret it or if it would be what ends up saving them. At this point it seems to be aliability. I'm also thinking the painting is a fake (hence the missing sigi) and is a way into the house, so Bella was right to take steps.
Gah, I love this fic!!!
Thanks for writing!!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 02:05 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
This was exceptional! I can't wait to see what Alice has to say.
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:59 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
That was good.
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:54 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
This story is incredible! And definitely one of my favourites!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:53 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
I've already written this review once and I took too long in reading this chapter and reviewing and it wouldn't let me submit. Rrrgghh!! So I will attempt to rewrite it.
YEA!! Go Alice!!
I wish something would happen to let Edward realize that Bella did this to protect them all. That it wasn't him and that she does love him. It might take the pain away a little knowing she did this to save him and not that she didn't love him. Poor Edward.
Don't keep us waiting long. I'm getting super anxious.
Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:53 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Keep the chapters coming!
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:50 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
I can hardly wait until there is another update. What is Alice going to say??? How is Edward going to talk his way out of this. Did Laurent tell the Volturi about Bella??? So many questions just waiting to be answered. I can't wait!!!!!
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:45 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
THANK YOU!!!!! I know your a day late... but I'm not counting. :-)
That was one intense chapter and I loved it. I will not hold you to any days now :-) you can post at your own pace. But pleassssssssseee don't make it months.
Thank you for a awesome chapter. Waiting patiently for the next one.
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:44 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
well the truth is coming out without Bella to hear what it is, how Edward feels about her and their relationship = how the girls are missing Bella - Rose, the girls and Alice as well. wish Bella would check in and hear about how mluch they miss and need her!
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:34 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
You're kidding, right.....you wouldn't leave it there....OMG...you did! I am on the edge of my seat...literally the edge! This is a great story. When you posted again recently, I went back and re-read from the beginning, and it really is one of the better stories. Thanks very much...and I generally am not one to beg for updates...but...please update soon! :)
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:29 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
OHHHHH!!! Getting goooood!!!
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