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Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:49 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
oh man. so much happened in this chapter, and all of it left me with a heavy heart. so wasn't expecting that reaction from jess!!
Reviewer: SarcasticGirl (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:46 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008
My heart is breaking a little bit. I get why she feels the need to run. but the whole family is going to be so devastated. Can I just say again how happy I am to pick this story up again? : )
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:36 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Oh flip! Didn't expect Jessica to know, and now Alice will figure it out! Felt really sorry for Edward, second guessing Bella's feelings and becoming detached to life. Great chapter.
Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:35 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Poor Edward...I hope she returns soon for him
Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:32 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
So Alice knows, I for sure thought Rosalie would be the one to find out first. This just keeps getting better and better, great job!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:09 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Holy shit! Holy shit, holy shit, holy shit! That was SO not what I was expecting from this chapter! I always suspected that Jessica would be more involved and so that part wasn't so surprising, but holy shit! Okay, I'm going to stop cursing now.
So the Occhi knew then? Or is their knowledge a new development? I'm assuming the painting is a fake? Is there a bug in it? Or was it just a device for J. Jenks to infiltrate Casa de Cullen? Is Edward in Danger now? Now that the Volturi know? What about the rest of the Cullens? Oh, man! So many questions!
And what a heartbreaking chapter. Not only with Edward (I knew that would be terrible), but with Emmett too. How he had to lie to Rosalie. And how the rest of the Cullens took things as well. I just... wow, it was so sad.
And now Alice is privy to dangerous information, too. Crap. I'm REALLY glad, though. I always wanted her to know the truth. Not to mention, Edward now has someone to talk to besides Emmett, should he want to. Or at least someone who understands. It makes all the difference in the world when you just have one person who truly understands.
Ugh, Jessica is such a dumb-shit! Like, really? Why would someone change their name to become a gay guy's beard? And is it really that hard to understand how to shut your mother-loving mouth?! Yeesh! It's like talking to a brick wall!
And for the record, I really don't like Jacob in this story. I mean, I thought he was cocky before and I didn't like that he was messing with Edward and Bella, but I could see his side of things. For him to sit there and basically taunt Edward over what happened... It's not just a chip he has on his shoulder, that was plain mean. You can't be around Edward or Bella without seeing the love they have for the other, and he used it to his advantage to hurt Edward. Grrr.
Wonderful chapter, though. It seriously exceeded all of the expectations I had for it. I want to cry now, but I still adored the chapter. God, I'm dying for the next!
Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:03 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
OMG, I am reading this on my phone, while at work and I think I have tachycardia! Can't wait to see what's next!
Reviewer: joyful (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:54 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
This is getting gooood! I hope the family finds out and trys to help and understand that he does love her.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:38 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
OH MY GOD!
Laurent knew! This definitely changes things. I'm not so sure it was a good idea for Bella to leave now. If Laurent knew he could have told the rest of the Occhi and maybe they wanted Edward because he was with Bella. I think Edward and Emmett might try looking for her now. Amazing chapter!
Reviewer: gonyes (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:37 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
rut roh..... Alice knows! I am curious about the painting...is it some hidden camera or something? Did Emmet check it out throughly? I am worried about Edward now that we know the secret about Bella is out. They could try and force imformation of her whereabouts out of him. Or use him to get her to come out of the woodwork. So many possibilities, I can't wait!
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:27 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Ahhh! This is all so intense! Im on the edge of my seat til you post again!
Reviewer: hhall87 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:26 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Oooooo.... great chapter!!! Loving this story!
Reviewer: lasrnr (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:11 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
UH OH! This is not going to be good at all! But can I just say how much of a treat it is to have so many updates in a row. Looking forward to the next one!
Reviewer: vgutz11 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:07 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
NOOOO!!!!!!!! I hate being left on cliff hangers. Hurry up and update!!! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Pam P (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:55 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Holy fuck - I need another chapter, otherwise I'll just get crazy! Seriously, that's enough of drama! It's the third chapter on a row that I read on fanfiction where things are not going so well... I need tissues!
Please, post it soon - and make Bella/Marie come back!
xoxo
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:54 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
hey another great chap - poor edward bella is only trying to protect him but ooooh its all startin to happen now
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:51 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
I don't know how to review this chapter.
There were tornados of emotions and I think I'm scrambling away with a few concepts. ;)
What a whirlwind! So, Edward doesn't go after her, yet, because he would put everyone in danger. Then he finds out that the Occhi already know about her, at least Laurent does. Will he try to find her now or go to Laurent? Both situations are dangerous. Is Bella safe? Rose seems to know something, would she try to find Bella? Gah! It's killing me! Can I please speak to Bella? lol
Reviewer: bmango (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:48 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Well, then - that's out in the open... And she's survived at least 3 months on her own. I just hope Alice doesn't get into trouble over this and that Jess can keep her mouth shut. The painting is still concerning me, but it's just a gut feeling. Great chapter, bb. I can't wait for the next one! -b
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:30 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
She left no trail to follow. She is clever and knows her game. Where she might be is not as important as hoping she is safe. And a part of me hopes she is really sad too. Is it being worth? Lets hope so.
But now part of the cover is blown and Edward will have to figure what to tell Alice. Emmett won't be happy. I am almost sure Alice has never truly believed that Bella went back to her ex; but she has no idea what the truth might be.
Has she been keeping taps on them? In touch with Jacob?
Will Edward forgive her?
So many questions.....
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:28 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Lol, wow, that last part was funny, Jessica just doesn't know when to shut up. I can't wait for more! Update soon!!! I want info on how Bella's doing, lol.
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:09 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
GOD!!! Please don't leave me hanging for too long!! Love the mystery. This should be a damn movie!!
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:04 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Uh-oh. Jessica deserves whatever she gets, how dumb can one person be? Hopefully we'll hear from Bella next time. Good chapter.
Reviewer: snafu07 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:30 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
So absolutely fantastic! This should be sitting on a shelf in a book store it's that good.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:30 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
Awesome, as always! :-)
Reviewer: gidgets evil twin (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:22 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008
oh god.....I can't wait for the updates!! I stop everuthing I'm doing just so I can read this! Ahhhhhh!!!!
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