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Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 10:47 PM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

Why did Mr. Jenks give me the willies when he was questioning Rose.  And what kind of questions did he ask?   If he is Volturi trained he knows what he is looking for.

Edward is going to take her being gone very hard.  She has so thoroughly become a part of the family that they will all take it hard.   But the saddest thing is she is out there on her own with no one to help her.

Reviewer: Edward_love (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 07:59 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Really gooD! I'm hooked. Please get the next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: lclar738 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:55 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

No update this past sunday! 

That's a pretty big cliff hanger to leave us on! Hope we get more of the Edward/Bella interactions in the next chapter. 

Update soon! It's far more interesting when you can read the chapters in short successions and therefore get really into it! 

Great story!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 11:47 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Oh no don't let Alice will put her in Danger. I don't want my friend Alice in danger!

Reviewer: shead (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:13 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Oh thank you so much for writing again!!! I love this story.  I hope Bella is doing ok.  Can't wait for the next ch.

Reviewer: mrs_macphisto (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 01:59 PM · On: February 29, 2008


Reviewer: kittybear1985 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:27 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Great!!!! Can't wait to

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 09:04 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

OMG! This chapter was soooo heartbreaking!!!! I'm glad you did a bit of a time jump.

How in the world does Laurent know of the situatino with Bella. Wasn't he one that Bella recognized from the past. I'm going to have to go re-read some of this.

And I'm glad I randomly checked this because my notifications of chapter updates isn't working on so I've been sitting her since Christmas thinking this hadn't been updated.

I'm so glad I was wrong. Now I can't wait until your next post. *sigh*

Reviewer: FeFeLaRue81 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 04:41 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Awesome chapter. Cant wait to see how things mess is going to play out. Hope the next chapter will be ready soon.

Reviewer: mommyjgv (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:11 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

OH!  I so hope you update soon.  I need them together....I'm not an angst lover...I miss them.

Reviewer: tookool2c (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 02:31 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

More, please!? I love this story, sfm.

Reviewer: lillyannpossible (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 07:56 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008


crazy! can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:56 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

So, I swear I reviewed this... but I've been a little sleep-deprived lately.  And it appears that I didn't - or I did, and it's lost in the twi website somewhere.  


I think I said something like this:

So sad.  I saw that timeline in the title of the chapter and figured that he wasn't going to be getting Bella back for a few months:-(  A tiny part of me is hopeful that cutting it off on 12/13 is enabling a whole new definition of a Christmas miracle in the form of her return.  hehe.  

I loved the way he approached & thought about the ring and didn't allow himself to think about why it was sitting there.  It was so YOUR Edward.  

I think it's totally scary that Laurent knows that Bella is Marie - which makes me think that Jason knows too.  And maybe even the whole Occhi.  But then why didn't something happen sooner?  Maybe they didn't realize that Marie was wanted by the Volturi.

Aro's "sometimes people disappear" was brilliant. 

Can't wait for the conversation with Alice.  I predict she'll somehow be involved with getting her back.  

I can't help my overactive imagination from thinking that the unsigned painting is unsigned because it's a fake that was planted by Jason for some reason.  Even though it's probably just a tool for showing how apathetic Edward has become in Bella's absence.  

Impressed with Emmett's ability to lie convincingly to Rose.

That is all I can remember.  

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:34 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Oh, inquisitive Alice!

Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:15 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

wow GREAT chapter

Reviewer: tox (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:46 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

I almost can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:04 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

And so it begins...looking forward to the next chapter! Can't freaking wait actually!!!

Reviewer: Emeralds and Rubies (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:23 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

OMG. Cliff hanger much???????? AHHHHHHHH!!!!!! In a way, i think it's good Alice knows now. No one can get things moving like the little pixie! LOL, can't wait for an update!!!!!

Reviewer: RosieWilde (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 04:23 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Wow. Oh my god! What next? I literally cannot get enough of this story. I'd forgotten how much I loved it, but these last few chapters have definitely reawakened all that. Did you say that it's drawing to a close? That would explain all the added excitement, I suppose. Can't wait for the next update and thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:59 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Oh gosh!  I knew it was a matter of time before someone in the family found out...what a way!  Rip a new one Allie!!

Reviewer: Sam362 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:24 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

I'm so glad I stuck it out with this story. I stopped reading for a while after the hiatus, and just got caught back up today. I really love it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 02:19 PM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

wow. So Bella was right to leave, Laurent knew.... Poor Edward. Wow. Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: hermhogwarts55 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:36 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Wow, I wonder what's going to happen to Bella... I think it's funny how you started the chapter with my birthday... kinda makes me somewhat happy that my 18th birthday was the day that Bella put the pieces together that the Volturi weren't exactly good guys. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 03:12 AM · On: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Ah ha!  Finally the Cullen brood will come together to fight as a team.  Wahoo!  Poor Edward... he is so forlorn.  It brings tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 02:45 AM · On: August 1 - September 4, 2008

So sad.  Looking forward to more.


I understand why she left, though, and it is very true to her character.



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