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Reviewer: JacobandNessieFurEver (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
wow that was awesome great job i loves it a lots
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 5
please update, this is really good and fun. Update please :D
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like the 1st chap! Cant wait to read more :D
Reviewer: shehunter (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
That...Was....Awesome!
Reviewer: redshoes (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
I might be getting ahead of myself, I'm not up to your latest chapter, but I have a few questions. How on earth does Bella own a Hotel at 23? And, judging by the shopping trip she is obviously quite wealthy....is their some heiress backstory to this?? And how does she maintain the respect of her employees (who can't ALL be 23 or younger) as such a young and surely inexperienced manager???
Beyond my questions, this is a wonderfully fun read. I probably wouldn't have noticed the 23 thing if I was not close to a decade older than that myself : ) It's very entertaining- please keep it coming!
Reviewer: lizzybtmn (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
Gosh I love this story! Every chapter I get more and more hooked! Please update soon!!
Reviewer: Kennasua (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 5
Great this is getting better by the minute!
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5
great chapter Tanya seems like a real bitch that has no verbal filter! How drugged was Edward while datin an proposing to her exactly? LOVE the sstory so far!
Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh yeah - sure - go ahead and brag about how many times you've seen New Moon. I'm still trying to get to the movie theater. I was supposed to go with a friend last week who has already seen it once but I had to come down with a headcold and hacky cough. Maybe this weekend if I'm lucky.
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 5
Yeah, Chris Weitz is awesome isn't he? The man is ten types of genius!
Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 5
I really like this story..but too be honest it doesn't make sense to me that edward's character would date and propose to someone as unappealing and stupid as tanya's character. what's the back story there?
Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
Interesting (:
Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
OMG! This sounds like a cool story! Please continue to write and post more soon! Can't wait to read about their first interaction!!!!
Reviewer: blb1000 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 3
Thanks for the add'l 2 chapters! I can't wqait to see what happens when they talk to each other the first time (Instant attraction? Feined disinterest? Sudden arrousal?). I'll keep checking back for future updates.
Reviewer: kivacute (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
okay honestly i can't wait to see how this story turns out!!! plz write more more soon!!:)
Reviewer: lizzybtmn (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
NOOOOOO YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loooovvvveeee your story! You are just as good if not better then every other author on here!
PLEASE for my mental health’s sake, update soon!
Reviewer: holdxme3xdownn (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 3
goood gooood gooooood!
Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love story where Edward is famous and has to deal with a non-public Bella. It leads to all kinds of over-the-top romantic ideas and story-lines! Please keep posting!
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm a Brit,I doubt any Londoner would drive hundreds of miles to Leicesterhire for a day with Bond St etc nearby and the new Westfield mall.
Reviewer: blb1000 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
I don't know... what does happen? Not much posted yet, but sounds like you already have more written. I'm intrigued. Please share!
Reviewer: Sakkosekk (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like it :d
Reviewer: morganlizard (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
rock on, Bella. Lay down the law! Great start!
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