aww it is so sad to see this story end... but at least you are jumping only 15 years into the future... i hate it when stories end with a funeral because it 60 years in the future or something....can't wait to read the epilogue!

So sweet. I can't seem to get submissive Edward out of my mind though. Talk about a cutie. Thanks.

oh coming to the end thats always a bit sad glad bad boy trevor is behind bars

fab chapter like you said i did not get some of the chapter being english, i generally get confused with ages ie how old is a senior sophomore? etc plus cow tipping thats so random its hard to believe its true, i dont  think i  was very outragious as a teenager just lots of mad regular stuff, my friends mum had a shop in a local seaside town where we all hung out as all the girls in  our gang all lived there except me (i was the one who phoned home to say i missed the last bus out and would need to sleep over ) with an empty flat above that we had the most amazing parties in no adults so anything goes, lots of all night beach parties with out of control bonfires, crazy car rides with a very over loaded car 8 people on the back seat, dyke jumping when drunk (how we diddn't drown i dont know) using empty  beach huts to get privacy with boys,  the list goes on but your probably bored so stopping now, great story  

Author's Response:

Sorry...here Freshman year is 9th grade and our first grade in high school.  Sophomore is 10th, Junior is 11th, and Senior is 12th.  Once we graduate 12th we move on to college which follows the same order for first through fourth years of undergraduate study.  I was the youngest in my class, so I turned 14 shortly after beginning 9th grade, and was still 17 when I graduated high school and was a college freshman for a month before I turned 18...if that helps at all.  My birthday is the day after Bella's, so I made her follow the same ages in school.

Loved the drunk dialing! They are too cute together!

The wedding sounded so perfect.

oh so thats his idea running his own training facilty, i like the recgonition that their relationship has shifted into something solid and bella is so much more confident in it

bad news all round but bless edward for giving her one more day but will bela think that? edward dosent need to work so he has the advantage there of being able to take his time and think about what he wants to do

Love Mama D!  Yeah for a girl's night out!

You said in your author's note pretty much what I wanted to say to Edward!

Edward should remember- you always appreciate something (or someone) when you have to work for it!

 

PS IFrom the get-go,  thought Ethan was abused (I used to work with abused/neglected kids) & his mother was hidning it. Its almost a relief to find out that he is at least not being th5rown about by his mother's boyfriend)   Anyway, I like that storyline too.

Awwwwwwwww yeah happy. I needed happy today!

just effing unbelievable. It was perfect and it was just magic. I think this might be my favorite chapter I have ever read as far as Edward and Bella getting married..actually maybe all together fav chapter period. I could picture what they looked like and them looking at eachother and walking down the beach..and oh the playlist..great great job. I am not afan of country music, but those songs were PERFECT! Great GREAT job!