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Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares
wedding sounds fab, & sooo romantic, i get the feeling though that sellers will be making a comeback in the next few chapters because everything is running a little too smoothly for them both, even thoguh they dont know about all the other stuff yet
Reviewer: lpham12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Equivalency
i really enjoying this story, i've only read up to this so far.
having said that, i can't say that i like Bella very much. yes, i think she has admirable qualities, and yes i find the love dynamic between her and edward to be great.
i realize that she's been thru a lot of trauma (death of family, being cheated on, then this whole edward getting shot deal) and she's still come out amazing but i find her whiney and... spoiled.
please know that i enjoy this story immensely and as i sit here trying to come up with words to describe how i feel i can only say that i never liked Bella the character anyway so you are staying very true to smeyer's vision of her.
i'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.
Author's Response: I did intend that to a degree. I envisioned the boys catering to her a bit more than they probably should trying to make up for not having her parents. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Happy New Year
i knew it with the name, loved all the dry humping which turned out to be no so dry lol, keep em coming i say haha
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 04:38 AM · On: The Name Game
cullen cullen cullen hmmmm
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Declarations
the proposal kinda took me by suprise even tough he had been thinking about it i just didnt expect it to be christmas day, anyhoo still loving this story like mad lol
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I'm dissapointed that they didn't nab King, too. They should be able to charge him with something. Thank you for not injuring anyone during this confrontation.
I thought that the standoff in the ER was going to be the climax of this story...I'm glad that I was wrong, cause I love what you've got going on so far. Definitly gonna have to finish this tomorrow, though.
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:55 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
Damn you...I was just about to go to bed (I have class in the morning) and you hit us with a cliffie...Now I'm gonna have to read the next chapter and it's already 11pm. ;c)
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:16 PM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
NO, NOT SPRINGFIELD!!! You're gonna bring back Psycho Mob Boss Doc!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
girls night out....great idea
Reviewer: JMax (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:04 PM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
LMAO...As someone that lives in downstate Illinois (just south of Danville) I can personally say that this chappy is spot on!! and as a side note my birthday is February 19th *shiver* freaky ;)
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:35 PM · On: The Day From Hell
great chapter
Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I absolutely LOVED this story!!! This was one of the best stories I've read in a long time (whether it be fan fiction or not!!!) Can't wait for your next project!!
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
Love Mama Bear Esme! Elizabeth so deserved that!
If you're saying that the prologue is close, I'm scared. I haven't even reached the halfway point in this behemoth and you're bringing in the action. I was hoping that it wouldn't show up til about chap 40 so we could have some more fluff and citrus before all the craziness...now you're going to draw it out and make us all worry for 30 chapters.
I'm loving this story so far. You've done a great job.
Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I loved your story and will definitely miss it!! Great job!
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:57 PM · On: The Angel's Kiss
fuckin awsome i knew it would be edward cause there was no way we could possibly go any more chapters with you making it all nice & rosy for us, good job woman
Reviewer: DreamAngel (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Rock On
That was PERFECT. I actually sat here with the playlist open listening to the songs as each one came up in the story, stopped reading so I could listen to the whole song, then continued on. I loved it.
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
loved it go esme
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 02:14 PM · On: For the First Time
how romantic, loved that ti was at the beach house where they were able to make better memories for each other, hope she moves in
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
woohoo bring it on, i feel like such a little perv lol, bella impressed with her gun skills
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Truth Revealed
im glad you put the note at the end because it was unbelievable that he would forgive her so easy, best story so far by a country mile
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
like Ive said in past revews, this is the best story I have read on this site. Im sorry to see it end. At the same time I loved the ending! Very good
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 07:01 AM · On: The Angel's Kiss
This brought tears to my eyes!
Great job on wtiting all the action-it was fun to read!
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
hot hot hot
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Bonding and Plotting
im all over the place with my guesses so im just gonna move on lol
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 12:55 AM · On: The Inner Sanctum
knew there was something fishy with him mentioned it a few reviews ago & then you had me all twisted up thinking oh he's just a hot shot doc, good game girl good game lol
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