Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:53 PM · On: A Raft In The Flood
great idea for Edward
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Be Careful What You Wish For
I think the circumstances made it an even better first date! There was no way he have told her in words what he was able to show her with his actions.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Hooray they are finally talking to one another, doing less assuming and behaving like adults the whole time. Please let it last! I somehow get the feeling Trevor might put up a bit of a fight.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:33 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Great chapter and it covered a lot of distance. The morning wake up was of course great! The three Mc doctors was hilarious, and yes it appears as if he does have Bella a bit snowed. I hate that she immediately wrote off the idea of ever having a realationship with Edward, but in all honesty how can she think anything else. It was good to get her dating history, or lack there of from her perspective. Jasper's supplement to the overall story also helped round out the whole dynamic. The saddest was probably Jasper's realization that Bella attracted assholes because they all showed her that is how guys are!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
The swat scene was intense and really added a depth to the story. Edward's side of the evening was really great to know! I love that he has already embraced the fact that he is in love with her and damn the fallout, he needs to make this work for however long it can. That is huge for him with his long engrained emotional distance to love and relationships!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
It appeared as though smexing Bella up had the desired affect for the evening! Edward (and Bella for that matter) needed to see that she was a desirable woman, and had no intention of waiting on his dumbass! The night ended in such a sweet way! I love how as soon as Bella realized the boys/Edward were heading out into danger, the rest of his flaw no longer mattered. Stupid crap is just that - stupid crap when faced with life & death matters. I also think she is a strong enough person to allow it to resurface the next day to remind him he is still not done working for forgiveness!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Puppet Master J
Jasper pulling the strings of his puppet show is hilarious! I love that Alice took over the 'Bella is a girl' plan! I think Edward is going to have to agree with himself - if he keeps avoiding her, it is going to be really hard to gain forgiveness!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Bella put so much heart into the conference with Mrs L that shows what a great doc she is/will be. WTF with Edward playing ghost everywhere? I enjoy Bella embracing her inner bitch and going with it. Mama D was awesome, and I think a girls night out is just what the Dr. needs!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Edward is totally stupid and a complete ass. Did he forget that when he first met the skanky nurses he was the one who did not like the way they assumed someone like him could ever be with someone like Bella? Way to prove them right and make Bella uncomfortable and mortified in her workplace! That aside, what a kick in the face to Bella that he kisses her, then decides his first chance at a normal and real realationship needs to be with someone else. I have no words that are nice for him!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 07:05 AM · On: The Day From Hell
I really enjoy Bella in Dr mode and that little boy was so sweet! Hot & cold much Edward? How are you going to kiss and bolt? I enjoy that Andy witnessed it so someone can slap him upside the head for the stupid move and perhaps not allow him all the thoughts after of unworthiness to keep plaguing his brain.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts
The truth often hurts. Will Edward use the opinions of those he cares about for good or ignore them and behave worse to prove them wrong? I love that you have characters unique to your story. I think it really helps add the individuality that makes the story your own! Congrats on not being afraid to do so!!
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
The prologue looks like some scary times are ahead. Edward X chivalry = Hot! Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: CullenMenLover4ever (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I freakin' loved this story. It was really awesome.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Crankward
that was harsh.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 02:04 PM · On: The Angel's Kiss
awesome chapter
Reviewer: isabellarose (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
i loved this story alot. I really loved it. I like the names u gave each of the kids. i hope u have more story to come. pls write some more stories. This is the only fan fic that i have stuck to every nite and i will b willing to read agai and again.
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
fantastic story, loved every minute of the journey & look fwd to ure next story
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Everything
cant believe you didnt give us the lemon that is the mile high club you naughty girl, but i'll get over it lol
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:57 AM · On: I'll Always Be Right There
beautiful & i loved how edward had planned all the songs out for throughout the day, the way you described everything i could totally picture it all in my head
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Connecting the 'Future' Dots
hilarious, was pissin ma pants lol dont u just love drunkward as for the wedding favour baskets wow wish i could go to one like that haha
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:02 AM · On: On The Hot Seat
omg incredible chapter u kept it all very real, even though why varner felt he had to tarnish bella when she isnt on trial is beyond me but you did a really believable job well done
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
yay, sooo glad we still got the lemon as i am a wee perv when it comes to these 2 lol, and bella managing to bring down the infamous sellers well that was the icing on the cake, would have liked to have seen emmett get his hands on royce as well though
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 08:59 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
shit is it sellers, omg i was sooo looking fwd to the lemon as well with all those mirrors lol
Reviewer: ROTCchicq (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Great story! I can't believe you made Bella give birth 5 times!! I am a little disapointed that you didn't at least give us the mile high club details, but I understand not wanting to get into the honeymoon. I'll definitly head over to FF to see the summer oneshots.
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Surfacing From The Deep
crash bang wallop thats the sound of real life interupting our time of bliss aaah i suppose it had to end sometime lol
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