Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
Awww they are sooo sweet together at the beach house! The whole dynamic of their group is so amazing <333 Thanks so much for the update! Cant wait for the next one! :)
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
I don't know who to be more embarrassed for: Bella, Edward, or Emmett in regards to the Bella/Caleb night. Bur I'm glad that Emmett was reasonably mature when it came to realising that he couldn't stop her from having that type of relationship. And I think if Caleb hadn't taken the coward's way out that night (and if he hadn't cheated), Emmett may have taken a higher road there, too.
But I doubt Edward would have. Or could have.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
Finally..slutward was annoying.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
Loved it! :)
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
I loved this one. I can't wait to hear about the next year!
Reviewer: jzjazzy (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
I am new to twilighted and I just sat on my butt for 4 hours and read this story from start to finish! I loved it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
Aww, I love these outtakes... it just fleshes out this story so much.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Outtake: The Fourth Summer, July 2005
aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww so happy!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 02:47 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I love this story. I am glad you had most of it done and were posting often! So I just wanted you to know that I am sucked into this story. I love it! Keep it coming!
Reviewer: irishash (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
"One day he'll grow up, but until then he's going to piss all over the carpet and give you, puppy dog eyes in apology, before doing it all over again. It's just how men are in general," That was brilliant did you make that up yourself its one if the best that i have ever heard
Author's Response: Yep...that little gem came to me as I wrote. I totally picture Mama D looking like Kathy Bates and I could totally see that coming out of her mouth! LOL...glad you liked it!
Reviewer: irishash (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
men are just so f-ing clueless sometimes...... great story so far, i can totally picture the guys beefed up in swat t-shirts and its hot as hell.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:51 AM · On: Outtake: The Third Summer: June 2004
I swear I felt like slapping Edward upside the head half the time when I read this! He was being an idiot! But then, we knew he was at this point in his life. The poor guy still has so many hang-ups about his mother.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Outtake: The Third Summer: June 2004
AMAZING!!! That was so great, I like their confused angst because it so real for them. Cant wait for the next outtake! :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Outtake: The Third Summer: June 2004
That one didn't hurt as bad. :)
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Outtake: The Third Summer: June 2004
These are painful, however knowing the whole story and knowing that they are together forever is helpful!
Keep them coming!
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Outtake: The Third Summer: June 2004
Great chapter! I love, love, love the Ataris - so glad you put them in here! The Don Henley version was good, but the Ataris rocked it hard.
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Outtake: The Second Summer, June 2003
The flash backs are so worth it! I love reading them.
Reviewer: Sapphireeyes16 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares
" the slight contusion causing copious amounts of blood to stain his shirt and mat his hair."
I know you're not a medical expert, but you do have medical people beta-ing this for you. for the most part, you have taken some liberties, but they've been relevant to the story. this is minor, but it shows a lack of attention to medicine. a contusion is basically a bad bruise--it is a closed injury. it wouldn't be bleeding.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Pressure
I was so obsessed with this story when I first started reading it that I had to step away for a little while. I am back and ready to finish the last few chapters. Great story!
Reviewer: Sapphireeyes16 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 08:07 AM · On: The Day From Hell
hmmm... my nursey mind is thinking Ethan is being abused.
Reviewer: weezieh42 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Outtake: The Second Summer, June 2003
awww snotty little Heidi. Just got done reading this whole story. Took me about a week but I absolutely loved it. I loved the Bella and Emmett story very much and how you potrayed them. as Brother and Sister. Also really did like this Bella and Edward. Thank you for a great great story
Author's Response: Thank you. We still have nine outtakes to go before they are all up here...so keep your eyes peeled :) Thanks for the review
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Outtake: The Second Summer, June 2003
Arg! It's very hard to sit by and watch that happen to anyone. I remember my teenage years unfortunatley. Seems I like them together more LOL. Great insight though.
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Outtake: The First Summer, June 2002
this was very enlighteneing. nice to see the spark from the begining. I loved it, brought me back to the begining.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Outtake: The Second Summer, June 2003
No wonder Heidi had an issue with her. Even though they were both being emo, I enjoyed it.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Outtake: The Second Summer, June 2003
I made through! :) I just kept telling myself they end up together. Yep both were pretty stupid.
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