Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Warmth In The Darkness
Very good, go Bella Kick some butt!
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:41 PM · On: For The Love Of Esme
Gotta Love Esme, Very good.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Focus Fluctuations
Very good
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:28 PM · On: The Angel's Kiss
Very good. I love The Banner.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Underneath It All
OMG, Can't wait to find out more.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
It's so good to see quiet Esme Rip into Someone, Very good.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
Oh, what a great ending, and haha! Emmett being the overprotective father. Yay for Bella putting him in his place. <3
And I love this story! At first I was a bit iffy about reading it, but I'm so glad that I did get into it. You're a great writer! I'm sad that it's over!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
wow....is it really over!?!?!?! GOSH! I can't believe it! Well, at least I didn't cry! THANK GOD!
Reviewer: Raeluvs (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
i loved this story thank you so much for writing it, i really enjoyed reading it :)
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Very good.
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
I've really enjoyed reading this, and I'll be sad not to get update e-mails in my in-box every now and again. Thank you for sharing your story!
Reviewer: glissette05 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
The BEST story I've ever read...and, believe me, I've read a LOT of Twilight fanfiction. Job well done :D
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
Ah...I know how Emmett feels....I dread the day my daughter grows up and starts to date.
Reviewer: DeJean Smith (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:53 AM · On: The Inner Sanctum
Danger magnet to danger gravitational field. That has to be the best line I've read in a long time! Bwah!
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
I am so sad this story end, I have started reading it again :-) are you going to be writing any more stories? I love your style and the way you bring people into your world. Loved it!!!
Author's Response: I actually have quite a few stories elsewhere. Two are WIP and the others are completed. Unedited versions are availible at twcslibrary dot com http://www.twcslibrary.com/viewuser.php?uid=1534. I"m also on ffn.net. Same penname except without the underscores :)
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 04:25 AM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
What a beautiful ending to one of my absolutely favourite stories on this site. I feel truly blessed to have been able to be a part of your writing journey for Femme Docs :)
Reviewer: puja (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Getting Reacquainted
thisd chap is gr8
the smut is not overboard
its gud
nt vulgar
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:22 AM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
Awww WOW this last outtake was AMAZING!! I have loved and enjoyed reading this story soooooo much!!! Its an incredible story, you were amazing writing this! Thank you soooooo much!!! <33333
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
Hmm, hopefully Edward learned from what happened at Emma's first kiss not to do that with Hailey! And maybe Emma might just warn Hailey not to get into that situation with her father around.
I know Bella and Edward can be a pair of horn dogs at times, but dry humping at the beach in public? Yes, they were mostly covered by the water, but still...
I'm really sad to see this story end. Thank you again for writing it!
Reviewer: Addicted73 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
This was a great story. I loved it! Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
I love how overprotective Emmett is of his little girl. I'm sad this story is over. I oved it!
Reviewer: track4me13 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:28 PM · On: The World Spins Madly On
This chapter really hit home for me. I'm an only child and this made me realize how horrible it's going to be to have to do this alone. I hope I have as good of a support system as Bella and Emmett.
This was one of the few stories I've read that have actually had me crying, not just a few leaking tears.
Love this story! Can't wait to see how it develops from here :)
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
Awww, what a sweet ending. I wish it didn't have to be over! I so love this story... but I guess that just means I'll have to read it again... oh darn! LOL
Reviewer: Munchie1981 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
Man its over that sucks but loved avery chapter thanks for sharing......
Reviewer: weezieh42 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Outtake: Our Last Summer With FDKK
I am so sad this is over. I truly enjoyed this story. For the relationship between Emmett and Bella. I always thought in the books they should have really been brother and sister. I love love the Edward and Bella relationship. I also liked that you did not make Tanya out as a villian like she is in most stories. Thank you for a writing a beautiful story. Sure hope you come up with another story although not sure you could top this one off. '
Louise
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