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Reviewer: ice (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
he's right... he is a waste of space... at the moment. I honestly am going to hate cliffhangers for the rest of my life. well i will still keep reading... love it so far...
bella and i have something in common during this chapter... zombie mode. when i'm angry i'm bad... but not as bad as bella.
i love how you had edward walk in and tell all the guy's about everything, then have him count the seconds until they all started to scream at him...
this may have been one of the bad chapter's but i still like this one out of the other three.
i'll keep reading: ice
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Ah, just when I was going to start pulling my hair out from the monotony of work, you go and update. Bless ya.
Btw, Edward is a git. You can tell him I said so.
Author's Response: LOL...I'll pass on the message! Glad I was able to break up the monotony of your day :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jennchris821 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Yay, another excellent chapter. I am so glad that you are posting so quick, it's awesome
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Oh he fucked up there, but she loves him, and at some point she will forgive him, it's just going to probably take a whole hell of a lot of groveling on his part.
Author's Response: OH yes, I like a begging Edward! LOL! I hope you like the things to come :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Edward is so tatally clueless. I hope he gets his act together before Emmett and the rest of the boys yank his head off! I hope Bella makes him squirm. looking forward to what is coming next. :)
Author's Response: LOL...I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
He does like to f#$% it up doesn't he? Please give them a little bit of slack soon.
Author's Response: I'll be torturing him for a few more chapters, but then he's going to start doing things better :) I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ice (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:25 PM · On: The Day From Hell
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it's alway's the stupid cliff hangers with these kinda stories
Author's Response: Sorry hon...kind of hard to find a good stopping spot when the chapters tend to run so long. At least I'm posting them all back to back every day and you're not having to wait a week :)
Reviewer: Paige Parkker (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Slutward! Bella should have castrated him. What a jerk! I hope she throws it in his face and makes him come begging on hands and knees!
Author's Response: LOLOLOL! NO, castration is bad....castration would inhibit the awesome loving to come once he has to fight a little harder for her! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Kittyinaz (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 08:44 PM · On: The Day From Hell
ur doing a great job and I am happy u post so often. The worst thing is waiting for a story to end.. or for the author to post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I hope to keep posting a chapter a day as long as it's possible. I have it mostly written already, so you should hopefully never have more than a couple of days of waiting until I have posted everything already finished...then I'll post as I get it done, but as a rule I try to write at least one chapter a week. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: dcb855 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:27 PM · On: The Day From Hell
hey-great writing on the subdural hematoms-i am a nurse that works directly with a neurosurgeon so your writing was pretty right on-only its not neural surgeon it is neurosurgeon-didn't mean to be picky but its what i do for a living. thanks for the great chapter
Author's Response: I'm wondering if my beta changed that before she posted thinking it was wrong or something because I actually knew that....or maybe it was a weird slip. I'm really glad that I did that well enough to appease someone who actually works the job. My medical experience is limited to helping my mom study for her nursing school exams fifteen years ago, ER, Grey's anatomy, Bones, and whatever research I can do online. Anyway, glad you liked it and thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: wophers (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:41 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Oh wow this is amazing. Love that they are all such good friends. Cannot wait for the next chp. You're such a great writer.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. thanks so much for the compliment and the review!
Reviewer: weaverfamily09 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:34 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Loving it so far! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it...thanks for the review!
Reviewer: weaverfamily09 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:34 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Loving it so far! Keep it coming!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:16 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I just found this, and I've really enjoyed what you've written so far and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks...I'm so glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:48 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Love this story. A different look at the E&B relationship. Love that Bella is the doctor. Keep it going.
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. I wanted to give her a twist for a change, make her stronger without making her bitchy like a lot of fics do :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:31 PM · On: The Day From Hell
This was a great chapter. I loved B &E's kiss and I'm so glad Andy's going to be okay. I wonder what Emmett would think about Bella and Edward together. This is a great story so far.
Author's Response: I"m glad you liked it. With any luck the next chapter will be posting tonight as long as my v beta can get to it! She said she would try. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:28 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I am soooooo LOVING THIS STORY! Just found it and am very happy I did! Update soon please. I can't wait to see what happens....
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it! It's been fun to write. I will probably be posting a chapter a day for a while until I catch you guys up to what I've written so far, after which I will do my best to post at least a chapter a week...but who knows, but the time I finish posting I'll have it all done and there won't be any wait between chapters :) Anyway...glad you're liking it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: familyof4 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:58 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Don't you dare hold off posting. This story is so good. I love it!
Author's Response: don't worry...I'm pushing them through as quickly as the system allows :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:55 PM · On: The Day From Hell
that was so sad with andy... but i'm glad he is doing better... i just wish that edward and bella will admit that they love each other... well tell the other person how they feel.. maybe that will happen when the prologue incident happens.... great job so far and i can't wait to read more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It will be a bit of a rollercoaster for a while, but trust me they will work it out eventually. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:14 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I'm enjoying the story, and I appreciate how fast you're posting. (I don't usually get to review, because I have a one-year-old who likes to try and type every time I get the keyboard out! She's asleep now, so I can tell you now how much I love your story!)
Love,
Rachel
Author's Response:
I feel ya...I have a one year old and a four year old....but I keep the pack n play up to give me some hands free writing time :) Glad you love the story and I hope you keep enjoying it! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:06 PM · On: The Day From Hell
This is an AWESOME story.
I just wish there were more chapters to read *HINT HINT* Ha ha.
xxx
Author's Response: Oh don 't worry...I'm already up to 49....I'm posting as fast as the process will let me since you can only post one chapter at a time. Thankfully my validation beta is speedy getting through about one chapter a day :) Glad you are enjoying and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:42 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Isn't life funny,when it comes to love. Everyone around you can see it but you are blind to it when it's right in front of your face.
Author's Response: Yeah, and these two have been fighting the attraction so long since it was illegal in the beginning that they're having a hard time getting out of that mindset. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:26 PM · On: The Day From Hell
You know, impulse control problems work in my favour when I'm loving the story!!! It's great! You're doing an awesome job and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks...I"m so glad you are enjoying it. Next chapter is in queue and the next two are polished and waiting for their turn. It kind of stinks you can only put in one chapter at a time, but that's how it goes I guess...LOL. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:17 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I really do like this. I was a social worker assigned to a task force for a decade. Most of them are slutwards LOL
Author's Response: LOL...you know slutward is actually based on a guy I went to H.S. with. He was such a sweet guy, kind hearted back then. He moved to Arizona and joined SWAT and is a total cocky self important narcisisstic slutward now. So when I started thinking of the storyline slutward was a blaringly obvious choice. Glad you are liking it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:51 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Impulse control is no good ... update now .... pullleeeeasse!
This is so good and I so want to know what happens. The whole scene with Andy was intense & I love the E & B kiss as he wakes up!
Author's Response: I'm posting them as quickly as the system will let me :) I'm glad you are enjoying and thanks for the review!
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