Reviewer: Natural_Disaster (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
i like this story. keep writing it. its cool. i like who its going.
how long till the mad man with the gun shows up and takes them hostage?lol. the first part got me hooked and im itching to see how the SWAT team saves the Bella
Author's Response: The prologue event doesn't happen until ch 28 and 29. Up until then I'm setting the scene and getting things in order. If it came any sooner it wouldn't make a whole lot of sense. Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
He's really lucky she didn't find him in the apartment at that time. He was right, he wasn't giong to be forgiven quite that easily. LOL
I like Mama D, I'm wondering what she'll say to Edward... *grins* great job and thank you for the really quick updates.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, coffee, pastries and flowers weren't going to solve the problem that's for sure! Silly Edward! Glad you enjoyed the update and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Bella did a brilliant job expaining Ethan's condition to his mom! She handled it perfectly.
I hope that Andy gave Edward some useful advice!!
Author's Response: We'll be seeing the Edward/Andy conversation in the next chapter that should post sometime today. I can't wait to post the one following it which is the Femme's Night out...you guys are going to get a kick out of it I think. I know the next chapter will post sometime today and then The night out will hopefully post tomorrow or sometime over the weekend if my beta can get to it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: amyn (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:56 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I love your story. Its very original and picturing Edward in his SWAT uniform is so HOT!!!
Author's Response: Ah yess.....SWATward is a fanfiction favorite! Glad you are liking it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Just started your story and I love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
love the story
a+ for fast updates
something tells me we might be seeing a jealous Edward soon
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it...thanks for the review!
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks...glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
edward needs to be slapped - love how he is feeling someone up but wait its not what u think lol
Reviewer: ice (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
it's alway's the unforgivable cliff hangers... you are one of the best writers i know... you can have a girl on the edge of her seat all through the chapter, then you pull on of those... do you know how angry it makes me, to be ready to scream at edward and then you end it... but in the same breath, i will alway's come back for more...
i can't wait to see who bella hooks up with at the "girls" night out... mike... jacob... you never know...
Author's Response: LOl...sorry, but I'm not as bad as some people and at least these are all coming out back to back. Just to warn you, you'r really going to be ticked at me in a couple of chapters...just a heads up! LOL! Don't worry, it will all work out soon though :)
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
No, no Edward. That might have been the worse choice -- ever! He really doesn't get it. He needs some guidance!!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Girls night out , what fun!! I hope Edward gets to see Bella blowing off some steam!!
Author's Response: Oh yes, girls night is going to be epic. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
That was better than excellent! WOW! Love the emotions ... and oh oh oh that sneaky Edward peeping at Bella ... oh he is gonna so pay for that. Hope the meet up by the Femmes is fun and enlightening ... and posted soonest!
Author's Response: LOL...I already loaded the next chapter which should be up sometime tomorrow. It's not Femme's night yet though, that will be in the next chapter. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: AngeAiles (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I absolutely love how fast you update! Keep up the great work :). OH, and please, please, PLEASE don't bring in Jacob as someone to keep Bella and Edward apart longer!
Author's Response: No worries, we will eventually see Jake, but he's not going to come between them. I'm glad you are enjoying and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: orchid_one (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I am absolutely loving this. And loving how quickly you are posting the chapters! I got to enjoy one before work today and one before bed. Awesome! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
This story gets better and better everytime I read it! I am glad that Bella is doing a girls night out every woman needs that. Bella is a very strong character and a very good doctor what she did for that family was fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks so much for taking the time to bump up the review number :)
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
great chapter! Keep going!! You can do it.
Author's Response: I will...thanks for the review!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Oh! This was a good chapter but I'm REALLY excited to read about girls night out! This is going to be awesome! I'm happy to see you've kept Ethan and his trials as kind of a side story in the main storyline. Of course what happens with him does effect Bella and therefore her reactions but it's also good to hear how he's doing, how his mom is handling everything,etc.
Yeah, I nearly died when Edward saw Bella in the bathroom. He so deserved that!
Really looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Oh the boy isn't going to know what hit him! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Great chapter I can't wait to see what happens when Bella goes out with the girls. I hope she gets some male attention and it drives Edward nuts. Please update soon.
Author's Response: We actually have a chapter between this one and Femmes night out, but it's a good introduction of what's to come. Plus we get to hear Jasper's POV and see what's been going on with he and Alice while Andy's been laid up. Femmes Night Out will be a good one though. I can't wait to post it and see all the reviewer reactions! :) Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Paige Parkker (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
This line "but until then he's going to piss all over the carpet and give you, puppy dog eyes in apology, before doing it all over again" nearly made me wet myself. BWahhahaha!!
I hope the Femmes go out, rock the place out, dance on the bar, cocktease all the men and then leave all of them with blue balls.
Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: LOL...that was one of my favorite lines in this story. We actually have a chapter between this one and Femmes night out, but it's a good introduction of what's to come. Plus we get to hear Jasper's POV and see what's been going on with he and Alice while Andy's been laid up. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
LET ER RIP GIRLS..lol which reminds me I need a GNO.. thnx for the reminder
Author's Response: LOL..yeah I'm finally getting one this weekend myself. Leaving the kids behind with my hubby and hitting the town with my bestie. Hope I can relax and enjoy it! thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Make Edward work really hard! Idiot (him not you. lol)
Author's Response: LOl...don't worry...he will. LOL! thanks for the review1
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
I love your story.....impatiently waiting for more....
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it...I'll keep posting as fast as I can on twilighted! thanks for the review!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
he better fix the shit that is going on between bella and him... but i can't beleive he was trying to go out with someone that wasn't bella....
Author's Response: Dork has to do all the wrong things before the right one. He's get his head straight soon though :)
Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Just curious as to how many more chapters before we get to the hostage scene. It's pretty good so far.
Author's Response: Um...a lot. Hostage scene begins in chapter 27 and all goes down in chapter 28. I had to set the scene...a lot has to happen that leads up to it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
I just started reading this story and have to say I really like it. It is very hard to go from friend to possible romantic other in any relationship, but a serogate older brother I believe would be extremely difficult. I like your writing style and look forward to updates.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it....thanks for the review!
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