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Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

Ah!! I am so addicted to this story!! I can't stop!...though I did have to when I ran out of chapter...But I love it!! I can't wait until you update !!!

 

-lionandthelamblove7

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

 OOOOOOOOO progress....maybe hes not a lost cause afterall....maybe

Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

Wow. You Speed Racer'd it up with these last two chapters. And they were totally awesome! Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: familyof4 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

This is such a good story.  I'm really liking it. Thanks..

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

Great chapter. Hope Edward finds a way to fix things. I'm glad Bella's arranged a girls' night. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

I love everything you have written so far in the story. I just found your story today and hope this is one that gets updated often enough to not drive a reader crazy! Not that I would try to rush the creative mind (especially not having one). It's just that the really interesting stories are worse than a good book that you can't put down, because here the reader here has no control over the hours of sleep they lose if there are no new chapters to read.



Author's Response:

Well in the case of this story you are lucky because I already have 3/4 of the story written and so I'm posting close to daily in order to get you guys caught up.  When I first wrote it, I usually got anywhere from 1-3 chapters done a week, which still isnt bad since some author's drag out a month or more sometimes before we get an update and that kills me!  with any luck I'll be done, or nearly done by the time we get all these chapters posted here.  I'm debating on which you would like more.  This story was originally posted on fanfiction.net, and I'm just starting to post here..so you have a choice...you can go read the first 49 chapters already there and then wait a week or so between chapters until it's done, or you can get these regular posts here and then you might not have as much of a wait.  I almost hate doing that because I'm loving all of the excited reveiws of the early chapters that I don't see anymore becuase most people don't review until the end, but I figured I'd be fair and let you know.  Same name and penname except without the underscores ;)

Reviewer: sommer (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

Great story! I had a birthday yesterday, so the chapters were a great gift :-) Take care, and keep writing!

Reviewer: wophers (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

Yay the fast updates are amazing. Thanks again. Glad Edward saw that other guys like Bella too. He needs to get himself sorted out asap. I'm glad he's been jealous of Trevor but I don't want Bella to start dating this Trevor dude. Although at this point I don't blame her as Edward's a mess.

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores

I'm a little curious as to why you won't modify her age by at least a year, especially since you went to the effort of writing the lengthy A/N justification (which only served to draw my attention to something I otherwise would have ignored, by the way). I wasn't deliberately counting, but it looks like her age is only mentioned twice here. How many times could you possibly bring it up in the following chapters?

Sorry, I guess it's just a tiny pet-peeve of mine when writers can't (or won't) make changes to chapters that have already been written/posted. Kinda defeats the purpose of "feedback", you know?

Anyhow, fantastic start. You hooked me from the prologue, which is absolutely critical for me as I get bored easily. I'm very interested in Bella's back-story and Edward is such a strange mixture of jackass and gentleman...I'm completely enthralled.

Onto the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know.  If I hadn't already written the first forty chapters and it wouldn't take some major rewrites later on that I was afraid I wouldn't catch, I would have changed it.  Unfortunately at this point changing her age would mean changing how old everyone else is as well to keep the continuity of the timeline or changing how long they lived in Chicago which are both highly interspersed throughout the rest of the story.  I would rather leave it as it is then have the timeline jump back and forth if I missed something.

 

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Femmes Night Out

great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: purpleblanket (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Puppet Master J

This is a cool story, but I'm ready for the action part now! :) I'm just so impaitent!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Puppet Master J

great chapter! the next one is gonna be good! i know it!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

Why do I get the feeling that this Trevor is going to complicate any progress that Bella and Edward make? And why do I have the sneaking suspicion that Edward might be on the nose about him? Is he connected to the wacko in the ER in the prologue, or am I reading too much into it?

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: rfortu01 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

love it!!love it!!!keep the chapters coming

 

rene

Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

Very nice!  Just what I have been waiting for. :-)

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

aww that's sweet! I still say Bella should go on a date with Trevor because she deserves a nice man, true it's not Trevor, but it could get Emowards ass in order?

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment

poor edward!

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

Soooooo goooooood! You're really talented at writing.

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

All day long I have been thinking about this story...and then you not only give us 1 delicious chapter...you give us 2!!  THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!!  I freaking love this story....

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

Yes I was picturing David Boreanaz during the Trevor parts and it really did help, otherwise I may have got a little shitty with him.  Instead, I was totally jelous of Bella - I mean hell, how lucky can a girl get?!

I think we can add Possiveward to the tally aswell and maybe Fullycockedward!  I'm glad they didn't get into another heated debate in public and was relieved that that they were saved by the bell.  Here's a thought though - Trevors pager went off a little earlier......... coninsidence?  Methinks not!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Puppet Master J

hmm, Edward still has no clue that he needs more than Emo to fix his issues...

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

I hope they finally really talk to each other.  It would be torture to love a friend like that, I know first hand! I got my HEA though!

Reviewer: Natural_Disaster (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores

nevermind ignore my question on my review i just read your response.lol

KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Never fear....I'm already written...matter of fact it's almost completely written and a lot happens after the shooting too :)  We have a long way to go

Reviewer: Natural_Disaster (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

aww  sween ending!!!!  horrible lady nurse.  eww that guy that was into bella. please dont make them go out!!! PLEASE DONT!!!!!!   lol.  all edward and bella.   when is the shooting coming? lol



Author's Response:

Shooting is a LONG way away....think late 20's chapter wise :)  I have to set the scene first~!  As for the guy, I guess you'll just have to wait and see :)

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

Yippyy!!  Go shake your groove Bella

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