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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts
LOL...God you gotta love Jasper. He sees to the heart of things and love his straight forward attitude. Thanks 4 both POV's it helps me understand the characters better...
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
You did a grwat job explaining everything! Loved this chapter and can't wait till you update! I loved the part where Edward woke up from sleeping next to Bella.
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
I have no idea how SWAT teams work, so I think you did a great job. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Puppet Master J
Can't wait for whats coming.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
i'm so happy that he finally admitted it!!! hopefully bella won't take too long to forgive him and get together with him.... i guess i was wrong about the other guy... he wasn't part of the situation that involved the team...
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
loved this chapter and that Edward got a taste of his own medicine ... the SWAT operation was very well written and you worked it in great with the story ... now Edward has to grow a pair and tell her he loves her when she is awake ....
thank you soooo sooo soooo much for the amazingly quick updates ... you are awesome !!! can't wait for the next chapter and for the prologue chapter to come up .... i'm so excited :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Hell yeah. Cayote (msp) Ugly time.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
great chapter! cant wait for the next one!
Reviewer: purpleblanket (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Liking it! Also liking your sPeedy updates. Now if only twilighted work let me add this as a favoriite, all will be well! :)
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Thanks for the quick updates! You rock! Edward FINALLY admitted his feelings for Bella to himself and the guys.....bout time!! Now, he just needs to tell Bella and make her believe it! Looking forward to the next chapter already!
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
The action was good ... the touching bits with Edward and Bella ... well on Edward's side anyway, were FABULOUS!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
You did more than okay! I'm not an expert when it comes to SWAT either, but for the sake of story telling I think this is pretty good - it was suspenseful, exciting and a little scary. And of course, love the Edward-Bella interaction. Oh, and one more thing! I notice you update really quickly and I can't thank you enough for that. It's such a relief and a nice pace from waiting ages for an update, though of course I don't mind that too much. Thank you!
Reviewer: Chillis (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
I love this story! So well written and I love that you put up chapters so fast! It's like, almost instant gratification! I love not having to wait forever for updates! Keep up the great work :)
Reviewer: curiusgeorge (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 11:03 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Me likes. Is that good? First kisses with Edward is better than winning the lottery.
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
WOOOWWW... so many updates!!! Thank you so much for updating so quickly! And the story is great... can't wait for edward to fess up and fix this!!
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Woo hoo! Awesome chapter! Two thumbs waaaay up!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Well, at least Edward realizes that he put his foot in his mouth.
Okay, so the cute guy who was hitting on Bella was a player. I'm not fully surprised.
They are cute together sleeping on the couch. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts
Is Jasper going to her job and meet Alice? You know I love those two guys together.
Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Make that...the last three chapters. You are like Superman on crack, you're so fast. Again, it was an awesome chapter. Keep up the great work.
And please, please let Edward grow a pair really fucking soon. Sure, yes, he admitted it to himself. But he's not Bella. She's the one that needs to fucking hear it. I swear, Edward has a bigger vagina than any of the skanks he used to fuck. Just saying.
Author's Response: Sorry...can't claim superman status....I already have 3/4 of the chapters written and I'm just posting as quickly as the process allows. Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Lazairahel (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
I found the SWAT scenes to be very believable. I really enjoyed this chapter and the previous one. I just discovered this story last night and I've been very impressed. And I'm glad you don't wait longer to post chapters. As much as I love Twilighted.net, I find that many times I have to reread a previous chapter when a new chapter is released.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
I can't wait to see what is next!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
Well it's about time she showed him and didn't let him get by with anything but I really don't trust this Trevor character something is off about him. I am glad that Edward did tell abouth the Maggie thing something for her to think about.
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
Theory: Trevor is the reason the boys got called out. He knows who Bella is and her relationship to the SWAT team and is looking for an angle.
Good chapter btw can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Puppet Master J
Great chapter. How thick is Edward? Seriously? Someone please hit him over the head with a blunt object.
Looking forward to girls' night. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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