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Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 03:56 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Great chapter
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 03:51 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I am so in love with this story already!!!! Like really really really love it.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:03 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Phew...finally caught up. I'm glad Edward is fighting for Bella, I hope that it doesnt take too long for them to get together. Hope you update soon!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:00 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Duh Duh Duh. The tension mounts. Stupid Trevor! He needs to go back where he's from. If he hurts Bella I'm going to write myself into your story and kick his ass along with the other boys and Rose. ;)
Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Great chapter!
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
Another great chapter! Can't wait to read EPOV.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Great chapter. I ususally don't care for chapters that contain a lot of rehashing of the previous chapters contents but this worked well and you included enough "extras" like the SWAT action sequence and the "taking out of the trash" in the bar to make it completely new. Edward's realized how special Bella is to him, that he really and truly does love her. The big question now is how does Bella feel and how long will it take them to work everything out.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:14 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Love it. I'm a fan Dale Earnhardt Jr to.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Puppet Master J
Great chapter!
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Great chapter. I hope that during the girls night out Bella gets asked out and Edward gets jealous, then maybe he will get his shit together. haha
Reviewer: MJae (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:55 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
More please!
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Another great chapter! Stupid stupid Edward...
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:06 PM · On: The Day From Hell
wow I love this story so far. Great Job! Can't wait to see what happens!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:57 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and can't ever get enough....please post more soon.
Edward is finally not being a doucheward in this chappie - about fucking time right? but Bella and her insecurities...it is my ferverant belief that ALL women date alot of different kinds of guys...b/c they all teach us something about ourselves...maybe Trevor is that for Bella....but we all end up with our Edward in the end - hopefully. At least I did :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:52 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Yahooooo! I love the fact that there is a whole slew of friends/family working toward getting these idiots together! :))) Even Emmett! I'm surprised he hasn't threatened Eddie's balls yet if he doesn't treat Bella right. Hmm, maybe that'll be his Best Man speech at their wedding. 8)
Now I'm out of chapters. Waaa! :( Please, sir, can I have some more???
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:32 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
1st I gotta thank you 4 the nice long chapters. And I love the different POV's!
Lots in this chapter! I hope Ed & B get their talk on in the next one!
Ohh & I can't wait til her boys come in to save the day in the ER!! How exciting that will be!! All of them will be worried & pissed & ready to kill!! Fun fun fun
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
oh damn. now i'm falling for edward too! curses!!! :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
oh damn. now i'm falling for edward too! curses!!! :)
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:10 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Great chapter!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
AWWW, his apology was really freakin' sweet! He just spoke honestly and laid it on the line. WAY TO GO, Edward!!! :) Well done, my man.
Glad the girls had fun out playing. Nothin' beats a girls' night out, dancing like a fool and singing like asses. Bella does need some more estrogen in her life! You can't be the little sister forever - or she may grow chest hair!! eek!
Glad the boys are all home safe. And with their respective flames...hmmm...wonder if Alice and Jas will get a bit rubby, now that they're horizontal?????
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
AWWW, his apology was really freakin' sweet! He just spoke honestly and laid it on the line. WAY TO GO, Edward!!! :) Well done, my man.
Glad the girls had fun out playing. Nothin' beats a girls' night out, dancing like a fool and singing like asses. Bella does need some more estrogen in her life! You can't be the little sister forever - or she may grow chest hair!! eek!
Glad the boys are all home safe. And with their respective flames...hmmm...wonder if Alice and Jas will get a bit rubby, now that they're horizontal?????
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Puppet Master J
Ugh, I was right - Eddie's mother is a psychobitch of EPIC proportions! man almight, what a thing to do to your kid. I hate fucktards who have children! gah.
Andy has his skull screwed back together but his head on right. :) Edward is gonna be that pathetic "old guy at the club" and be completely SOL. The others guys will fall in love, marry, breed, and Eddie will be the balding, big-gutted pervy uncle the kids are wary of! What a sad fate for our beautiful boy. Better get movin', Eddie!! Time's a wastin'.
I snickered to myself, thinking that it would be TOO funny if Bella stuck out her foot and tripped him one of these times he tried to bolt past her! ha! Splatto goes the player onto the linoleum. >:> It would serve him right...
I'm running out of chapters. Please make more. :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Puppet Master J
Ugh, I was right - Eddie's mother is a psychobitch of EPIC proportions! man almight, what a thing to do to your kid. I hate fucktards who have children! gah.
Andy has his skull screwed back together but his head on right. :) Edward is gonna be that pathetic "old guy at the club" and be completely SOL. The others guys will fall in love, marry, breed, and Eddie will be the balding, big-gutted pervy uncle the kids are wary of! What a sad fate for our beautiful boy. Better get movin', Eddie!! Time's a wastin'.
I snickered to myself, thinking that it would be TOO funny if Bella stuck out her foot and tripped him one of these times he tried to bolt past her! ha! Splatto goes the player onto the linoleum. >:> It would serve him right...
I'm running out of chapters. Please make more. :)
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:00 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
OK you threw me, but I'm still wondering with Trevor doesn't have something to do with the organized crime. Let me be one to say I REALLY appreciate that you are so ahead in your chapters. I enjoy reading a story so much more when it keeps updating rapidly. Thanks again!
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