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Reviewer: VivianDarkbloom23 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:32 PM · On: The Unexpected
Love this story! Now excuse me while I go take a cold shower :P Score one for the shy girls ;)
Reviewer: twifan07 (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:09 PM · On: The Unexpected
So great! Hope you update soon!! Always love when I see you've updated!
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:14 PM · On: The Unexpected
Poor Bella....always getting cockblocked!!!! Everlong just might be one of the sexiest songs ever...especially the acoustic version...DAMN! They gonna exPLODE when they finally get to do the deed. Can't wait! That Trager staring at them through the window was horribly creeptastic! But at least Bella is taking the threat seriously now. And BONUS! Rose is part of sleepover central. The end was heartbreaking with Edward having a panic attack about leaving...It's also heartbreaking knowing that even with all their precautions, eventually their worst fear will be realized with the prologue...
Love this story, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:52 PM · On: The Unexpected
uuuuuhhhh....soooooooo good!!!!! That is all I can say. I have already told you how much I LOVE your story!!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Wow that was pretty intense! How much further til we get to the prologue?
Author's Response: Prologue is quite a ways away. WE have a lot of building before that happens...expect it in the upper 20's
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:03 PM · On: The Unexpected
great chapter!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:34 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Man i don't know why I bothered to start reading this story on a day when all 3 kids are home for a teacher's workday, but I'm trying to get through this and leave reviews, but I do love it!
Reviewer: magicalheather (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:53 PM · On: The Unexpected
Damn bad timing Emmett
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:11 PM · On: The Unexpected
Another great chapter. Such an incredible last night together. And Bella sent Edward out in style. So looking forward to what their time apart will be like for them!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Oh poor Edward! He's finally admitting it to himself that he loves Bella and even admitted it to, although unconscious, Bella! This is a great story! I love the whole swat/hospital drama!!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
Awww, what a great ending to this chapter. I'm thinking Trevor is going to be one of the infamous Attendings at her hospital so hopefully that will help Bella want to stay away from him. As for Edward and Bella, I'm glad he at least told her a bit about his "relationship" try, so hopefully Bella will take that into consideration and we can see these two get back on track.
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:12 AM · On: The Unexpected
oh my, oh my!!! Dear sweet girl, I will send you Edward with nothing but a bow on if you update fast! ;-)
Author's Response: LOL...I may just collect on that one! LOL! It's int he queue!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:37 AM · On: The Unexpected
Hot hot hot!! I am nervous about this 2 weeks...
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Puppet Master J
Great chapter! Can't wait to see Bella and Edward back at the bar!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:58 AM · On: The Unexpected
Wow, i hope nothing bad happens while they are gone. Update soon, love this
Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
It was GREAT!!! Perfect even. Don't know too too much about SWAP ops, but that was as close as I've heard, listening to the hubby's descriptions of sting ops that they do.
So good, keep it coming! Will Bella and Eddie finally talk, or is she going to fend him off a little longer? I can't wait!
Author's Response: I'm so glad it seems to fit reality. I had one reviewer who says she works with Chicago SWAT and that it was pretty much spot on all the way up to Slutward...she said most of them are cocky asses! LOL! It made me really excited to know my imagination came close to doing their dangerous work justice! Thanks for all the reviews...I'm so happy you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
OMG, got goosebumps when the guys got called out. My husband is a cop, and I know that feeling all too well. You got it just right. You learn to live with it, but you never stop being scared.
Great job!!!!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:28 AM · On: The Unexpected
OMG OMG OMG!!!! This story is pwning me hard with every chapter. I am SO TEMPTED to go on ff.net to read what else is posted@!!@!! but i'm trying to resist...as i have a feeling you might be tweaking from your original posts...hmmmm?
Anyway - that lemon was incredibly HOT....beyond intoxicating, romantic and DAMN....
Goes without saying i'm on the edge of my seat for more.
Author's Response: LOLOL....your enthusiasm makes me really happy. Yes I am tweaking slightly, plus if you read there then you'll have to wait anywhere from 1 to 2 weeks to find out what happens next...where I"m pretty sure it will be complete before I get to that point on here :) So glad you're enjoying it so much! Thanks for all the awesome reviews!
Author's Response: LOLOL....your enthusiasm makes me really happy. Yes I am tweaking slightly, plus if you read there then you'll have to wait anywhere from 1 to 2 weeks to find out what happens next...where I"m pretty sure it will be complete before I get to that point on here :) So glad you're enjoying it so much! Thanks for all the awesome reviews!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Uh oh, Bella's going to have a ladies night out, but will she be observed by Edward? Will she meet another man? Hmm, so many questions, must read on!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Oh Edward, one step forward, two steps back! I'm not sure how upset Bella can really be at Edward since she's known all along the type of man he's been, but he's clearly got his work cut out for him. I think she's probably more mad at herself for letting her emotions run away from her. Granted the kiss helped escalate things, but being avoided for two weeks might have been a sign for Bella. Can't wait to see what happens next! Great story!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:38 AM · On: The Unexpected
So much sexual tension between them too. I do not trust that guy how dare he follow them around . I have a bad feeling something is going to happen while Edward and the boys are away.
Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
LOL and good thing too. My heart broke for Bella when she heard Edward's voice. Such great writing, you totally suck me in!
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:33 AM · On: The Unexpected
So close...but no cigar....darn it!!! Why Emmett, why??? Loved this chapter and can NOT wait until you update!! I'm so happy their together!!
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:26 AM · On: The Day From Hell
That was GREAT! How romantic and hot!!!!
The little boy Bella treated the other day bothers me though....I hope it's not abuse, and I hope he's going to be OK.
Good good job, keep it coming!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:19 AM · On: The Day From Hell
Can you spell "wake-up call" Edward? LOL Great chapter!!!!
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