Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Damn! Drama!!!! They just don't get a break do they! Good chapter.
Reviewer: Polyxena (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
WoW... yes a drama cliffie. It was interesting, of course I have no knowledge of SWAT so... but well done, and I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
OMG! His mother and Tanya were in on the whole thing, weren't they? It was all a ruse to make Bella be on her own! There must be a mole in the security - CRAP! It's not Andy is it????
I love how you keep me guessing!!! =] Update soon, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:08 AM · On: The Inner Sanctum
Well I'm managing to pop a chapter in here before my day gets started and I have to say it's a great chapter to start the day off with! LOL Loved that Edward let Bella into his "inner inner sanctum" but a bit worried about this thug. Why am I not surprised his name is James? LOL Can't wait to read more, but will have to wait until later. Love this story!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
OMG... this is insane!!!
Reviewer: indianagirl (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Personally I don't think I would have walked away. I probably would have stood there and watched and stared at him until he saw me then turned around and left. Or i would have stabbed her with a fork lol Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Great chapter. Can't believe Bella had to walk in just at that moment. Hope Edward can convince Bella that it was a misunderstanding. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Ow! That's one nasty cliffhanger! I hope I don't have to wait too long... And what was that about his mother?...
Definitely can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Okay, I know you have a plan but I am pissed!
Please don't drag this situation on and don't make Edward the "bad" guy all the time!
Bella really needs to start believing in herself a bit and instead of running from situations face them!
Please, Please don't make us wait for too long for an update!
Author's Response: Never fear...resolution awaits in the next chapter
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
whoohoo! A visit from the Drama Llama
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
awww, talk about bad timing:(
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
NO hate, frustration yes. *bangs head against the wall* stupid boy, stupid overly dramatic girl!! Bella needs to grow a pair and learn to trust! After everything Edward has done, I can understand the instinct, but come on WTF where is the TRUST?!?!?!?! THis relationship will not work if they have no trust!!! *growls* they need counsling... *mutters to self as I finish my wine*
Author's Response: Never fear...only the damaged can grow with time. If I didn't start them off with trust issues and a little immaturity, then where could I go with the characters as the story progressed? ;) This doesn't drag out long at all....resolution awaits in the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
can't wait to read more
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
omg that so messed up thatnk god tanya said something for once i love that bitch
Reviewer: rocknredbrit (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Wow! You are doing great with the SWAT information (though I know nothing about it so I would believe it all anyway). Over used plot point? maybe, but if it fits in organically to the overall story line, then it is better than trying to force something else. I adore this story (and your frequent updates!)
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Write more soon before I drown in the angst! They need to fix this soon! Great chapter!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
great chapter!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
omg!!!!!!!can't wait for it!!!!!(bouncing up and down on chair!!!)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
okay so maybe it was an overly used plot point...but i'm betting this ALL feeds into Bella's insecurities.
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
why do people act first and ask later - all she had to do was walk in and confront him.........can't fault him on this one really.
Author's Response: NO, but he will still catch blame unfortunately. You'll learn a little more about Bella and why she runs when it comes to him even if she's brave in other situations. :)
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Perfection
What a great date!!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Be Careful What You Wish For
Awww, what a sweet first "date". I'm glad he was there waiting for her after everything she had witnessed at work that day.
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Yay, I finally got a chance to read a bit more tonight before bed and yay for Edward and Bella finally speaking and getting somewhere! Can't wait for date night!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 07:03 PM · On: The Unexpected
i really hope you just skip ahead to the part when everyone comes back... unless something happens between then and has to be told... but i really want more edward and bella, jasper and alie, and emmett and rose... pretty much i want them together and not separated...
Reviewer: VivianDarkbloom23 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 06:33 PM · On: The Unexpected
Love this story! Now excuse me while I go take a cold shower :P Score one for the shy girls ;)
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