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Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
whew, glad that is out of the way, and I am glad they are growing! I see all sorts of possible difficulties in the future,I hope the boys can do something to keep Tony's son safe.
Reviewer: weaverfamily09 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
I love this story so freaking much! I get online 5 or 6 times a day to see if you have updated!
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
holy shit! I am so in love with this story, i really hope nothing happens to tonys son :-( Cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: gd_girl05 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
*Tear*
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
*Lets out the breath I didn't know I was holding and takes a much needed sigh of relief* I am thrilled that those two worked something out and that Bella is safe. I really feel for Tony and hope that somehow the guys can keep Tony's son safe. It would be heartbreaking if Trager did kill him. The tension is mounting and I can't help but wonder if we are getting closer to the epilogue scene. I am on edge wondering what will happen next...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Oh my God! *looks at screen in stunned silence* While I understand that Tanya was just an old friend, I am still upset that Edward didn't take one of the guys with him so no misunderstandings could take place. Bella must be devastated! Oh lord this is not going to be good.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Oh! I'm soooo glad that it all worked out. Really really glad! <3
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
How funny that Emmett wasn't going to step up and defend Edward at first, and rolled his eyes when he had to...
Anyways that was AWESOME! I didn't mind the changing POVs because it helped you see everything. And poor, sweet Edward all broken on the floor was heartbreaking, I'm glad Bella didn't drag it out too much. It's going to be so hard for them to separate again after this...
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Suz (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
ok, I feel better now. ;)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:32 PM · On: The Unexpected
Holy Hale that was magnificantly written! The whole last date had me turning into a puddle of mushy goo and cripes that last night had me fanning myself and wondering where the hell my significant other was. I love it and can't wait for more...
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Wow. That really was a rollercoaser.
I'm glad Bella's okay and Edward explained everything and they talked. Too bad they didn't catch Trager. Though if they did, then there wouldn't be much more plot to get through, huh?
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: bella_babe (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
My favorite AU story!!! Please keep updating!
Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
I AM GIVING YOU SOME LOVE!!!!
Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Puppet Master J
OMG!!! I CAN"T WAIT!
Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
SO GOOD!
Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
OMG! i am so addicted to this story. Keep going girl, you are AMAZING writer!
Reviewer: SamasaurusRex (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Aww, I love me some Snuggleward.
Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
really great story cant wait for more......
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Intense. Glad that they got there before Trager. So happy that E/B talked and were able to work it out.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
Well I am relieved that the situation with Edward/Tanya is just a mis understanding. I hope that it is resolved soon.
Also, I hope that their training in regards 'hostage negotiation, infiltration, and blind insertions' will be very helpful in the future. ;)
Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Missing and Misunderstandings
I like the added drama, even if it wasn't intentional. I do think that adding the mother into the mix was a bit much. The story does well on it's own and does not need any subplots. I hope you don't go into that area too much.
Reviewer: littlelarinda (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
I don't think it was a bad cliché it was real. I love this story good job
Reviewer: VivianDarkbloom23 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Big smiles! Thanks for not dragging on the misunderstanding--I'm glad they've got it all sorted, and now see how much they truly need each other. Are the guys still heading back to training?
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
I'm glad they worked thru things. I like it, but after a while I think if I were Rose and Alice I would b-slap my friend for running away from painful situations! The drama is useful though.
So it's Tony who's wrotten! I still think you've got something up your sleeve with Edward's mum and Tanya...
Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster
Now, that's a bit better.
Another awesome chapter love.
xx
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