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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Getting Reacquainted
*Mwah* Ahh my dear such a magnificent chapter...I loved how you made Tanya such a lovable person. In most stories she is painted as the other woman so it is nice to finally meet a decent Tanya. I am excited to see what comes about with Elizabeth and did you mention Friday? Dear lord I'm going to be bouncing around my desk until you write about Friday. Hmmm better go find some more distraction as your chapter put a few dirty thoughts in my lil head.....
Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Getting Reacquainted
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Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
Can't wait for the next chapter... Oh Goodie! It's here...
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:05 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Great chapter. Glad they both feel something for each other.
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Girls nights out are good for the soul... a rabbi told me that once.
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Edward always manages to piss me off due to his denseness.
Poor Bella is having a really tough week!
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:58 PM · On: The Day From Hell
Liking it so far... on to the next chapter!
p.s. - I like your impulsive, posting nature.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
*dancing about the room like a mad woman* I am SO HAPPY! Maybe now that they are talking things will get better for them. James still creeps me out and hope the decoy works. Mel and Jacob should be quite cozy locked up together for a week...snicker. I am thrilled that those two are together for the week cuz it sounds like they are going to need each other.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Great chapter. I'm glad Bella told Edward all about how she's felt over the years, and not just about the Tanya incident. The songs that you chose for the game were perfect and really sweet. I'm glad Edward was able to bring Bella back to Minnesota with him. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Oh I am so glad that Bella is going back with Edward to confront his mother!!! They're car ride was a perfect opportunity to lay everything out on the line and they covered a lot of ground, but they still have a lot of talking left to do... maybe on the ride home.
I have a feeling that Edward is going to need some serious TLC after his meeting with his mother. I'm sure Bella will be there to comfort him! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
I loved the songs chosen on their playlists (especially 'Sweet Child O' Mine', 'Iris' and 'Far Away'). Although, I've been (slowly) writing a songfic to 'Far Away', now I'm going to be too self conscious to post it (if I ever finish it) in case someone thinks I'm copying...
Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: OH Do NOT be too self conscious to post it. I encourage everyone to give it a try. Let me know if you do and I"ll check it out! :)
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
The song game was too fun! I loved all this history and back-story in this chapter!! Excellent! I'm still not sure that I trust Tanya or his mom, but we'll see...
Brilliant, as ever!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
love it!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
great part
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
great chapter!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Love...mmmmm, I was having a bad feeling about Melissa, but maybe not..or you are a sly little author! Great chapter again.
Reviewer: twifan07 (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Great as usual!! Update soon please!
Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
excellent...............
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
excellent fluff ... the emotions were awesome ... love the idea of comparing the playlists and when each song was added
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Great chapter! Edward & Bella finally seem to be getting their shit together. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
loved this chappie!!!!!! sweet!!!!!
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Well this chapter was very insightful on both their aspects, now let's see how he deals with rejection from his own mother because we all know she is going to do it.
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
ohh this was the sweetest chapter ever. i think the sond you chose "Far Away" was perfect to describe Edward's love and feelings.
the Melissa decoy is awesome too :)
i love this story and the fact that you update it so often and never leave us hanging. I did play both the EAM and BB playlists while I read this chapter ... excellent choice of songs!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Decoys and Deprecation
Wow great chapter!
I like the playlist game idea, good way to get their feelings out!
Keep up the great work and keep them coming fast!
I love this story!
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