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Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment

Can't wait to read about the big night!!! Don't make us wait long!!!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment

oh i can't wait for friday *dances a little* so excited!!!  eeeee!!!! I'm such a girl!!!

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment

yay! more, more, more...lol

Reviewer: chloeswan (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment

i get so excited when i see this has been updated! i love the story!!!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment

i hope she moves in with edward! that would be really good!

Reviewer: Nicki 101 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment

cant wait!!!!!! WWOOO friday will forever be my favorite day of the week now lol

Reviewer: Tyranny (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment

Bella used her debit card. Trager is going to track it and know that she isn't in Chicago isn't he?

Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Truth Revealed

Okay I am trusting there will be a HEA. As long as Elizabeth doesn't fuck up Edward and Bella I would love to hear here story and have Edward go off on her. I am really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:26 AM · On: Truth Revealed

excellent story cant wait to read your updates

Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Truth Revealed

"Sex is on fir"e is my favourite song. i have waited and waited when it will be in your story, so thanks for that.

OMG, i cant wait to read "THE FRIDAY" - chapter.

You go girl!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Truth Revealed

Hmm, I wondered if the KoL song was 'Sex on Fire'! It's just such a natural lead in to smut! But going down on someone while they're driving is asking for trouble. Bella should have known better! Or Edward should have pulled over...

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Perfection

you are doing a great job writing about Chicago!  Love the story!

Reviewer: rnx24us (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Truth Revealed

I FUCKING LOVE THIS FIC...SERIOUSLY....YOU ROCK. HARD



Author's Response:

LOLOL...well thank you!  I'm glad you're loving it so much!  Your enthusiasm makes me really happy!

Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

awwwww! so cute. I love this story!

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Truth Revealed

Yeah, your right he did seem to forgive her to fast.  But I can see where it is so much that he is still processing, which is normal, it's unnatural to hate your parents.  After he has time to really process I'm sure he is still going to be upset over things that happened, like if she was really interested in patching things up with him how come she left it up to letters instead of seeing him personally.  Also she needs to confront Carlisle and Esme about her behavior.

Reviewer: Louise-Francoise (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Truth Revealed

I really love your story. Im enjoying it so much everytime I log in its the first thing i look for! I thought this chapter was one of your best yet and reading through the scene with Elizabeth, Edward and Bellla was captivating. The emotion in the scene was very touching. The way you had Bella supporting Edward through this chapter was amazing. I cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Truth Revealed

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what's coming up next! And I can't wait for Friday to get here! I want to hear about their first time together. Write more soon!

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Truth Revealed

!!!!!

Reviewer: Nannonv (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Femmes Night Out

I loved girls' night out...take that Edward!  Great chapter

Reviewer: t-reader09 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Truth Revealed

wow you are updating this story quickly!! i love it :D Cant wait to see where you go with the edward / elizabeth story.. it seems to easy so far.

Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Truth Revealed

i really enjoyed the interaction with edward and his mom, even though i still dont like her, how could someone leave their son. no matter what the reason, the car ride with bella having fun, damn thats hott!  cant wait for the next chapter, I love how fast you update thank you, and again awesome story.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Truth Revealed

Thanks for the clarification that all is not completly well with dear old mum...I was thinking it was all to easy for Edward to accept considering he's a pretty complex guy. It is rather sad that Elizabeth self destructed like that but with the loss of a loved one its not easy, I am so glad Bella was there to help.

Can somebody tell me Friday's a coming...Oh hell Ya!

Reviewer: tasia626 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Truth Revealed

Whenever I see that note that there is an update of this story, I just get giddy with happiness. This is a great story and I love the ups and down you are taking with it. Somehow I knew the happy reunion was too easy, and I can't wait to see what develops next.

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Truth Revealed

Well I'm still a bit hesitant on whether I want to believe Elizabeth's story or not. I know it's going to take Edward some time to deal with all the information she gave him but her story seemed too easy for me. I understand Edward's desire to want to cling on to any hope that his mother didn't abandon him and his desire to want a relationship with his mother, I'm just a bit uneasy with her. I think this "PI" was a flake, if there ever was one. Maybe just some druggie partnering with Elizabeth to find out a way to Edward's money. I'm just speculating here, and I'm glad to know that I have some basis for my worry, I just don't want to see Edward get too hurt by this woman again. The man has enough on his plate just trying to keep Bella safe! LOL Awesome story, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Truth Revealed

wow, driving and getting a BJ is hard, I'm so proud of Edward!  It takes skill to stay on the road!  Sorry I haven't been very vocal with my reviews as of late, but RL was kicking my butt!  I might even venture onto the forums... still not sure how they work, but who knows?  Really enjoying your character development and steady updates!

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