Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment
great chapter! i cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Truth Revealed
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward went to see Elizabeth and they sorted some things out and Elizabeth apologised to Bella and they became friends. I have Sex on Fire playing right now. I almost forgot how great this song is. Can't wait til Friday. What special day has Edward planned? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
ohmygodholycrapican'twait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
loved both chappies!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for the next!!!!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
great part
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
I thought you did really good with the SWAT lingo and action sequence. I know our SWAT team doesn't use much 10 code, or the apha beta charlie, just A B C etc... Emmett would definitely be a breacher on the entry team too, our guys always looks like linebackers :) Great job, that would be really hard to write!
Author's Response: Thank you...I'm glad it lived up to the approval of someone who actually has experience with SWAT! That makes me really happy! thanks for sharing the info!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
Okay, I'm looking forward to Friday... but, have you ever noticed that most people that make big plans for their first time wind up disappointed? Everyone I know who did that wound up either really awkward or caught by someone or having their plans completely ruined by unexpected house guests or something. I hope it goes well for them. =]
I trust you, but I don't know if I trust Tanya. This just seems like a huge gesture for someone who tried to make a move on Bella's man a week ago. I know she said she was sorry, but still. I'm rather jealous as well as being a henious, territorial bitch when it comes to someone who makes a move on my man (this happens alot as my husband has a high-profile career and is fairly attractive). I've learned the hard way that sometimes, being nice and trusting gets you an assload of 'taken advantage of'. Again, not a criticism, just the advice I'd give your Bella if I were in the story. Loving this story!!
Update soon...
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
It's nice to see Edward and Bella just sharing moments instead of dealing with all the angst ... great chapter.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
Annie Oakley returns and it was AWESOME! My favorite gun to tote around as a kid was a 30/30 Winchester lever action rifle. I loved shooting that thing and being I live in Wyoming there were plenty of opportunities to play. I loved the chapter!
Ohhh Friday is coming...*in preacher like voice* Can somebody say that Friday is a coming...let me hear you say AMEN! Can't wait...
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
Dun dun DUNNN!! And Friday is almost upon us!
Can't wait!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
Woo hoo, Friday is coming up next... Can't wait!!!!!
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
I always check back to see when this story is updated. I'm totally into it. I like the fact that Bella is no simpering Miss. I'll be waiting for the next installment. Awesome!
Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
The end there was so sweet. I want my own SWAT Edward to cuddle.
xxx
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
Is tomorrow night what I think it is? I can't wait. I know he will be gentle...but I really could go for rough.
Author's Response: Rough will come in time:) first time has to be special...he has to make it stand apart from the rest of his encounters :)
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
I love Gun-toting Bella!!!! Awesome. What a huge step for Edward asking her move in!!!!! Lovely chapter as always.
Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
Can't wait to read about the big night!!! Don't make us wait long!!!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
oh i can't wait for friday *dances a little* so excited!!! eeeee!!!! I'm such a girl!!!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
yay! more, more, more...lol
Reviewer: chloeswan (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Empowering and Contentment
i get so excited when i see this has been updated! i love the story!!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment
i hope she moves in with edward! that would be really good!
Reviewer: Nicki 101 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment
cant wait!!!!!! WWOOO friday will forever be my favorite day of the week now lol
Reviewer: Tyranny (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Empowering and Contentment
Bella used her debit card. Trager is going to track it and know that she isn't in Chicago isn't he?
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Truth Revealed
Okay I am trusting there will be a HEA. As long as Elizabeth doesn't fuck up Edward and Bella I would love to hear here story and have Edward go off on her. I am really enjoying this story.
Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Truth Revealed
excellent story cant wait to read your updates
Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Truth Revealed
"Sex is on fir"e is my favourite song. i have waited and waited when it will be in your story, so thanks for that.
OMG, i cant wait to read "THE FRIDAY" - chapter.
You go girl!
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