Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Perfection
That was fantastically wonderful! Great great super-long chapter - great first date. I have totally fallen in love with this new Edward!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Be Careful What You Wish For
So awesome. The El crash sounds horrifying. I could never do what Bella does with the doctoring. Too sad. But great chapter nonetheless and Edward has been wonderful for the last couple of chapters. Hope he keeps his head out of his ass...
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Roommates and Baby Steps
Aww, so much better! I love it! This is super fantastic and I'm loving this story! Never played Rock Band, but your describe it well and it sounds like reading about the tournament in the future will be fun!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Grr, damnit. I'm in the disappointed category. Disappoint that Edward's timing sucks, that Bella's been hurt so much that she can't accept it, and that they're still not together. Edward needs to stop being a dumbass. At least he was finally honest!
Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
so loving the constant updat...thank you!!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:05 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Fantastic chapter - I really enjoyed the girl session and them figuring out at the end just how badly Bella's love life has gone this whole time! She needs a real man indeed!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
You did a great job with the action - you either researched that a lot or you've got good friends who are willing to share. Either way, you did great. Love the chapter!!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
Yum. A tasty morsel at the bar and then a repentant Edward. What a filling evening! Great chapter :)
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Puppet Master J
Oh, this is building up to a very interesting evening! I love it!!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
A Femmes night out sounds awesome! And that consultation was brutally hard. I really like your Bella! Your Edward needs a good kick in the shin, but hopefully he'll come around soon...
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
Damnit, Edward, do you have a clue in that pretty head of yours at all? I am profoundly surprised the boys didn't kick his emo ass considering how retarded he's been for the last two weeks. And I don't lampoon Bella in this because HE was the one who pulled away and walked off. Had SHE done that, I'd be bitching at her, but such is not the case. What a dork.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 01:05 PM · On: The Day From Hell
I promise to review every chapter, even though I'm many many chapters behind. I'm also working on some big papers for school and drowning at work right now, but I'm really engaged with this story and I like giving good authors feedback. If I were writing right now, I'd like it as well...
So, I think it's just hilarious that EVERYBODY seems to see this except Bella and Edward. Let's hope it doesn't take too long before they figure it out as well! Great chapter - I really enjoyed and can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts
I'm really enjoying so far. I like the dynamic between Bella and the boys and the fact that Jasper can totally see right through Edward and Bella trying to hide their feelings!
Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
hee hee hee...Springfield!! :)
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Oh just another day in paradise! LOL Well at least Rose and Emmett helped give a little push for the other couples and their living arrangments! I'm thinking we've got to be getting a bit closer to the prologue now. Especially since everyone else is letting their guard down about Trager. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
just found your story, and i can't wait to catch up! btw...i'm from a dinky central illinois town...lol!
Author's Response: I used 2 be too! I also went to college in Lincoln...which is why I chose there for Bella and Emm to be from :)
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Can't wait for the rock band battle!!! The girls are so going to win!!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:41 AM · On: For the First Time
That was a good first night! Sorry it took me so long to read it!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Things couldn't get any better with them fabulous chapter!
Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
I love it!!! Cant wait until the next chapter!
Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
love this chapter, i so could picture edward looking all james dean.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
I love how you did this chapter specially the rock band stuff, I so suck at that game..lol but I can sing so that saves it kinda....not really. Good work
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Wow Bella and Edward are one heck of a sexy couple! I love these two, I just know some angst is coming but from what I have seen they should be able to pull through together.
How soon till we get to the prologue? Is it coming soon, because that sounds like an intense chapter!
Love the Banner!!!
Author's Response: Prologue is coming up really fast...expect it in the next few chapters...I'm not saying exactly when and giving away the suspense...but it's SOON!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
They just keep getting hotter and hotter...and I love how Bella is becoming more and more confident as their relationship evolves with her own PERSONAL Slutward...LOL...keep it comin'...you're doing an awesome job with the story and I love it!
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Rose is lucky! It takes me about five minutes to get pregnant person dumpiness! LOL Very nice, I didn't see the baby thing coming. I'm wondering how we're going to get back around to the first chappie now. You are clever, aren't you?
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