I believe that Edward is hearing and reacting to what Bella's saying. That's something I've always heard, that people in comas can hear what's going on around them. Mind you, I'm not a doctor and have no idea if it's true or not; but it works great in stories!

For the record, I never believed that you were going to kill Edward.

Can't wait to read more!

I so should have been in bed hours ago..but couldn't stop reading. You are amazing!

I haven't been on in 2 days maybe 3 and I come back to a bunch of chapters to catch up...WOOT!!!!! LOVED this chapter. mama bear Esme rocked it.

You are an evil evil author. I have now been late for work 2 days because I get caught up in reading the story and lose track of time! Hmm, maybe I should be reading fabulous stories for a living?

Fantastic and I can't believe I'm all caught up! Thanks for this story - I can't wait for more. Bella heartbroken over this whole craziness is really well written. Great job!!

Author's Response:

Wow...thank you for reviewing as you read!  It was great reading your impressions!  I'm glad you have enjoyed the story!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Wow - what a lead in! A twin brother - awesome! :) GREAT chapter! Can't wait to move on to the next and SOOO glad you're only 1/2 way done. 

I love it!!! I love me some Edward!!!!

Fantastic! I haven't seen most of these videos, since I stopped watching MTV when they started doing more shows than music, but I can picture it pretty well based on your description. Great chapter! Lots of fun! :)

Really good chapter, really loving your story and looking forward to the next update!!

Hurry, I can't wait!

Glad that all that came from Esme. Go Esma:)  Tanya? Can't wait to see how that goes. Love it. Keep writting:)

ok i'll forgive 'slutwards' ways.. I was starting to think once a player always a player and going to tell bella to run for the hills he don't deserve you.... but I suppose people must have a reason for behaving that way..and that is edwards... but how easily does one stop this behaviour...

Are you planning on have any kind of confrontation with Dr. Sellers? It seems to me like he would want some kind of retribution for being forced out. I know it might seem a little monotonous after these last two chapters, but I think we need some kind of closure with his character. Great job on theses chapters though. Everything was happening so fast, I had to go back and read them again.

Author's Response:

;) wouldn't you like to know...lol.  It won't be for a while, but we will eventually see him again :)

Thank you for the quick update on this!  It's good knowing that Edward isn't going to die.  Sticking with this story, looking forward to more...