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Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Crankward

Poor Bella! This is reminding me of when Josh was shot on The West Wing, and poor Donna had to take care of him! (Josh/Donna are another pairing of mine--although they weren't together at that point, so they didn't even have trysts as a diversion! It would have improved his disposition too...)

Anyway, I'm digressing way OT. I can understand why Edward would want the night alone (even though I think he will regret his actions at some point in the night...), but it was just shitty timing with the day Bella had. That Dr Powell! I'm wondering if it's purely the "boy's club" thing that Angela was talking about, or if something else is going on. That remark about Bella 'manipulating' herself through the ranks...

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Crankward

That is so cool!! I'm happy for you!! It really is an amazing story....Loved this chapter...I can not wait to find out what is up with Edward...someone had to of said something to him, or else he wouldn't have sent Bella away.

 

-lionandthelamblove7

Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Crankward

Edward really is wound tight this chapter. I hope he has agood excuse.

Reviewer: twifan07 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Crankward

stupid edward!  lol...leave us wanting more as usual!  update soon!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Crankward

Congrats on making Top 10 my dear...you totally rock!!

Ok I thank you for explaining that little bit of a cliffie as I am about ready to throw something at Crankward expecially after the crappy ass day Bella has had. I can't wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Crankward

Excellent chapter but Edward needs an enema!

Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Crankward

doucheward is back full force!!! and so is all the males in this chapter minus emmett!! lol. cant wait to find out his excuse for being a jerk!!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Crankward

i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: WazUpYall1 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Crankward

Congrats on making the Top Ten list. I loved this last chapter but I'm dying to know what happens! PLEASE post soon.

Thanks!

Allison

Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Crankward

excellent chapter again...............I hope he is not pushing her away again......

Reviewer: michelly (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Crankward

I bet he is just pissed at the Dr. that was rude and needed Bella to leave so he could kick his ass... lol.. but poor Bella

Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Crankward

What the hell? That ass better have a damn good reason!

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Crankward

Awesome chapter!  There's always one asshole doctor isn't there?  Is Edward doing this to push Bella further into her therapy?

Reviewer: bellalovesedward (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Crankward

Update soon. I love this story

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Crankward

I'm sure he needed time to set the doctor out properly.

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Crankward

I can appreciate Edward being a bitch, but still, That's no bueno!!  Thank goodness for Bella, but we knew there was going to be another bump in the road, so continue on my dear!

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Crankward

Yeah, pain plus not getting any equals dickward!! LOL Nicely done, but I seriouslly hope the jackass Peds guys gets his. Oh, and also that Edward's got a fucking sterling reason for giving our girl the boot!

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Crankward

awwh, everybodys frustrated :[

sigh, hope bella shows tht jerk of a doctor! :P

top 10? wow...wheee more to read! :DDD

Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Crankward

cant blame the poor sod, it would suck being in a cast with people poking at you all day!

Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Runaway Rollercoaster

how heartbreaking!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores

OMG I just love the fact that you put in one of my favorite show!! I love Psych!!! Thank you Thank you Thank You!!! Your Bella is an amazing person and Edward is just so damn suportive that it warms my heart. I cant wait to see how this all works out for them. One question though...how did Trager know Tanya was pregnant?



Author's Response:

YOu learn that answer to that mystery next chapter :)  Glad to see another psych lover!

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Equivalency

Good chapter, Bella is steadly making progress which is good.  Glad the nightmares are starting to subside Edward could use the sleep so that he and continue healing.

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Disturbed

awsome new banner!!!! great chapter love bells emotion!!!

wtm

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Equivalency

I'm glad to see Bella is slowly recovering her PTSD with and without Edward right by her side. She needs to trust herself again and regain her own strength, which she will with time, but she's coming to the realization that her family, friends and especially Edward will be there for her through everything, but that she also has the strength and will to get through it herself! Great chapter!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Equivalency

Wow we had Mama Esme not we got a dose of Papa Carlise!  Don't mess with those Cullen parents!

I absolutely love this story! 

Well knowing Edwards personality he his going to blow his top soon since he obviously isn't being allowed to rest to much and we all know he isn't the type to just lay around and do nothing!

Can't wait to see that!

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