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Reviewer: rt04 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

It was short, but it was so sweet!  Loved it!

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

!!!!!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

Why do I get the feeling that when it hits the fan and Carlisle and Emmett finially divulge what's been going on, it's really going to hit the fan? Edward and Bella are not going to like the fact it's all been kept from them, even if it was for their sakes.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

Very quick, cool little update to keep us in the loop. Loved it!  :)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

I was wondering if there were going to be any lawsuits from the attack... so typical of people right? You save their life but because it even happened, you feel the need to sue.  Anyway... another great chapter, can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

actual tears rolling down my cheeks....AGAIN!!!! dangitall!!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

I liked hearing from Carlise. So trouble is brewing once again. I hope everything turns out ok.

Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

I can't wait to see what happens next when all these things come out they don't know about. Loving the story:)  Update soon.

Reviewer: jgj18023 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

LOVE THIS STORY!!!  LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!  Thank You for this chapter, i have been wondering and wanting to hear from the others to know what has been happening in thier worlds but i also enjoy Bella and Edwards veiws also, but Thank You!!!  You made my night!!!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

i guess bella n edward would have said 'thanks' because that shitt is going to hit them out of left field

Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

Can't wai to see what the out come of the lawsuits and edwards job

Reviewer: Raeluvs (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

loved this chapter, yes i agree thank you for not just blindsighting us, thanks for giving us some insight into the other situations that are going on..more please! and soon! :)

Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Happy New Year

Oh My, O My, Did you hit a good one tonight.  I have always said it was great when they all hit the club sence together and boy did you make this one HOT!  The playlist was right on and I could actually see the sence play in front of my eyes with this one.  I loved Emmett going all Emo for once instead of Edward.  Good Job!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 02:38 PM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

I like Trevor... I mean yeah, he looked at another girl "OH MY GOSH THE WORLD IS ENDING TREVOR LOOKED AT A GIRL'S ASS WHILE DANCING WITH BELLA LE GASP HE IS A SKANK!" Like get real, he is a guy. He has to attatchment to anyone, he is allowed to peruse the merchandise. I still think he is a decent guy, and personally, I hate Edward in this story. He is a whiny bitch. Bella should pick Trevor. But this is TWILIGHTED, so I guess Edward will swoop in and save the day. I just hope the "execution" of Trevor isn't for cheating. Because that would be depresing to myself. Personally, I don't trust Edward, and it would take more than a week before I forgave him. Twatwaffle.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Happy New Year

Absolutly FABULOUS!!!!!

I am thrilled that they are both changing thier names to Cullen...fuckawesome!!! New Year's was one hell of a hot night. OMG laughed so hard that I cried when Emmett went off on Bella and Edward and then Bella had to tell off those skanky barflies. It was brilliant.

Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 01:02 PM · On: The Day From Hell

ok, after reading your author note for chapter 3, I've decided to take a min. and review :) I still have LOTS to go, but I"m really enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Happy New Year

I was very hot.  The public grinding with Edward priceless.  B is a lucky girl. 

 

Oh BTW.  What's with the scrouges at the hospital.  Is everyone jealous of Edward's peen. 

Reviewer: Shemhazai (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Happy New Year

Super AWWWWWW!!!

Is the story going to end soon, now that everyone seems to have a happily ever after? Or is there some other random drama on the horizon? Can't wait to find out, please update soon!



Author's Response:

A lot  more drama ahead.  Like twenty more chapters worth :)

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Happy New Year

Great chapter!!!! Love this story!

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Happy New Year

Too intense?  No, I thought it was great! 

Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Happy New Year

I'm not a bit surprised about the doc 'haters'.  A close friend of mine went thru med school, and it's way cut-throat, so that's probably more real than anything! lol

I thought her telling the bar-skanks off was sheer genius. I think I've been to that bar, you know the one with half the people dry-humping and the other half shooting them glares! lol Very funny!!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Concerning Charlotte

Great chapter. Poor Charlotte and Bella. Can't wait to read more. Hope things work out for Charlotte.

Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Happy New Year

oh those bitches...i love bella's attitude! that's a way to tell them hoe's where to go! till next time.

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Happy New Year

This is one of my favorite chapters i loved it

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Happy New Year

Wee bit intense? That's one way of putting it... I don't know that Pussycat Dolls song they got busted to by Emmett, but Nickelback's 'Something in Your Mouth' is one hell of a raunchy song to dry hump to! Appropriate too... ('Animals' less so in this setting. That reminds me of another of my plotbunnies...)

The Cullen name change was unexpected. It's lovely though (and a good way to throw the skanks off)

Can't wait to read more!

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