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Reviewer: Raeluvs (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

loved this one its nice to have some lemons! lol i liked that bella is getting better but whats going on in edwards life? please keep writing :)

Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

I love the wedding idea, it is so very them!

I am dying to know how the lawsuits and Edward's probable removal from the SWAT team play out. I'm pretty sure he won't take it well.

You continue to write a brilliant story.

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

i am so proud of bella... she went into the ER and faced her fears.  can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: angie54 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

i cant wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

:)

Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

I'm so excited you've been updating so quickly! It seems like everytime I check back here you have another update waiting. It's awesome! This is by far my favorite story!

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Getting Reacquainted

There are very few stories in which I like Tanya.....I am still not sold on her in this story, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

Sweet! I think you've got a fairly realistic idea about most things, this is fantasy after all, might as well leave the boring shit for the rest of us! I love your story, and I'd love more Carlilse and Emmett in the future!

Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

I have a feeling that Bella and Edward are going to be extremely pissed off knowing people were keeping secrets from them...

Another great chapter!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

i hope when it all comes out that nothing too bad happens as a side effect....

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

Oh my... that's a lot of lawsuits. I really have no idea how Edward is going to handle all that, he seems to have more tendency to be down than Bella (and she's a pretty tough cookie) but it'll all work out okay at the end, right? Great job as usual... I love your story so much and always perks up whenever I see an update. :)

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

AW!!! I love me some Carlisle!! I loved this chapter even if it was more like an out take. Sometimes you need those kind of chapters for the rest of the story to make sense. I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

God I love this story!  I had a bad feeling that Edwards job might be in jeopardy and with the way people are so sue happy today I am not shocked that the hospital is being sued.

I liked this chapter because it does give other POV and lets us know what other people are thinking.

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

Oh I sure hope we do see a Bella with "one on the way" in this story... Would be nice...

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

you know, in scary movies right before something bad happens the music goes all scary and stuff?? Or like on Jaws the dum dum??  I so feel that right now, the shit is about to hit the fan!!! *runs for cover*  I've got brownies and rum over here if you want to join me... I'm planning on re-inforcing this concrete building with lead....



Author's Response:

LOLOL!  Thanks for the offer...brownies sound awesome!!!  I'm not much of a drainker, but rum might be nice too!  LOL!  Thanks for the funny review!

Reviewer: rt04 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

It was short, but it was so sweet!  Loved it!

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Outside the Bubble

!!!!!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

Why do I get the feeling that when it hits the fan and Carlisle and Emmett finially divulge what's been going on, it's really going to hit the fan? Edward and Bella are not going to like the fact it's all been kept from them, even if it was for their sakes.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: lolobird (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

Very quick, cool little update to keep us in the loop. Loved it!  :)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

I was wondering if there were going to be any lawsuits from the attack... so typical of people right? You save their life but because it even happened, you feel the need to sue.  Anyway... another great chapter, can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

actual tears rolling down my cheeks....AGAIN!!!! dangitall!!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

I liked hearing from Carlise. So trouble is brewing once again. I hope everything turns out ok.

Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

I can't wait to see what happens next when all these things come out they don't know about. Loving the story:)  Update soon.

Reviewer: jgj18023 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

LOVE THIS STORY!!!  LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!  Thank You for this chapter, i have been wondering and wanting to hear from the others to know what has been happening in thier worlds but i also enjoy Bella and Edwards veiws also, but Thank You!!!  You made my night!!!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Outside the Bubble

i guess bella n edward would have said 'thanks' because that shitt is going to hit them out of left field

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