Good chapter! At least Bella got some good news.

Good chapter! At least Bella got some good news.

hooray for take-charge Edward.  Such a great idea to have a SWAT training facility.  And it seems like Bella is finally, really growing up and understanding that you cannot control the entire world (no matter how much you may want to!)

Woo hoo! Go Instructorward!

Well there is always something to cause dark looming clouds over their happy buble wonder how Bella is going to take it?

*sigh* I think it's just me but I can't help thinking that Bella is becoming a bit of both a "MarySue" and female "Crankward" in the last few chapters. Up to this point, I've really enjoyed the E/B relationship and their interactions with the rest of the usual crew, but since Edward's been in hospital, both of them and in particular Bella, has started to become a bit annoying. Yes, she's traumatized from the hostage situation, yes, she is suffering from almost losing Edward, and I totally understand that she will take some time getting over it. 

Actually I'm not sure I can even explain why i'm finding her annoying. Maybe that after Edward sends her to Emmett's when she comes back to the hospital the next morning, it's Edward that has to beg for forgiveness, even though she wasn't totally faultless in everything.  It's already a established fact in this story that they both are crappy communicators. 

I feel a little sorry for Edward that he always gets the blame, for everything. Guess that's where the "marysue' aspect of Bella comes in...she's smart, beautiful, sensitive, everyone on her side...etc etc. 

Guess I'm just finding it a little tedious reading that over and over again.

Regardless of the last few chapters, I am still enjoying the story and am looking forward to seeing in what direction this story is heading. You've already taken this story to several directions that I never would have guessed after the first 20chapters.

Good job.

Thanks for writing. 

Author's Response:

Yeah, you're not the first to complain about that.  It's a fairly short blip on the radar screen though and we will be getting past it very soon.  

I know this is ridiculously minor in comparison to everything else in this story, but I love that Bella isn't woken up by texts when she sleeps for her night shift. I work graveyard -- and always tell people to text before calling, because a text won't wake me up, but a phone call will. And I just loved seeing that little detail in this story!

I really enjoy this story. I like the premise and I love the fem docs.

Oh yay!! their wedding sound perfect! I am scared that the other shoe is going to drop, but I know they will handle it. post more soon!!

Oh God more drama! Lol. I really liked this chapter. It was good to have a look at all the things happening in the real world, outside of E/B's bubble. Can't wait to read more.

Great chapter. LOL Swamsens... only Bella. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

I'm so proud of Bella!! Sorry it took me so long to R&R, but RL, ya know!

Poor Ethan. Go Bella for being able to go into the E.R. I just wanted to tell you that as a CNA I love your story. I can't wait to read more.