thid weas such a sweet chapter! i am happy that emmett is going to be an instructor, having a safer job while doing the things that he loves... can't wait for the next chapter!

Crazy kids! Me, my best friend and a few others took her 86 cavalier to an industrial park at night and start going a decent speed then through the e-brake and slung the car around.  There was another time we took another friends old school giant Cadillac and jumped hill  going about 70 mph.  I got pulled over one night while racing a coworker home from work. I thank the powers that be that the cop just didn't realize I was racing and let me go with a warning. Hehehe! Good chapter!

Author's Response:

I always had huge cars...and hill jumping was a thing for us too.  I didn't have a hand break or I probably would have tried the Emergency thing too.  I was always doing crazy stuff while driving.  The coolest thng wasn't even on purpose though.  I had a Toyota minivan at one point that had horrible breaks.  They wouldn't work and then they'd sort of lock up and make you skid.  Well one day after school I was approaching an intersectiona nd the light changed and the breaks locked up and we were skidding into the intersection, so I had three choices....skid through witht he breaks on, straighten out and hit the gas, or since we were already sideways, turn the wheel and hit the gas and do a U turn before I got to the intersection...I chose option three and it was like somehting out of a movie.  We screamed the whle way through and when it was over I pulled off the side of the road and we sat quietly for a few seconds before my friend and I cracked up laughing and both yelled "That was awesome!!!"

 

A few weeks later I nearly got killed in the dang thing and refused to drive it anymore when a similar situation happened and it nearly flipped.  Anyway, it was still a fun story!

we convinced a teacher that everyone was gone from school when really they were all hiding in his supp;y closet :) we also hot wired another (very trusting) teachers car because she left it unlocked in the carpark during the day and went joyriding around town in it, crashing it into a power pole and spraypainting it yellow from its green colour. other than that at boarding school we all hid in the laundry courtyard and snuck out at night with boys from down the road and we'd go out and do random things like flog road signs, doorbell dashes at 2-3am made paintbombs and completely painted the school, bleached song quotes into rival schools ovals .... lotsa crazy shit .... at home we even cemented a toilet to the councils front garden. a couple of my mates let off fire crackers outside the cop station on race night because they couldnt see outside on account of it being dark :)

Author's Response:

Wow...okay...I* think you guys may win the prankster award. YOu guys were pretty brutal!  LOL@!  Thanks for sharing!

Holy Shit!!!

I felt like I was watching a suspenseful movie or soap opera or something and all of a sudden I could hear the music in the background when the moment in the movie/soap opera heightens dramatically and you hear that background music...dun dun dun daaaaaaaaaa

LOL

That little moment of intrigue was quite interesting and just made the story that more addicting!!!

Now, I can't wait to find out more then anything how it all plays out...

Oh, and I just have to say that I love this version of Edward & Bella and I absolutely love that he calls her "baby"!!!!

Keep up the good work, now I am dying to read on to find out what happens and yet a moment ago I was wanting to take a break and go to sleep since it is fast approaching midnight, but after that little intrigue I am just going to have to keep reading now because I surely will not be able to sleep!! LOL

 

 

Great job writing unconscious Edward.  Loved the Michelle fight.  I hope Bella doesn't get in trouble

Great chapter!

Wow! That really changed the story quickly.  Great job.

I love, love, LOVE this story so far!!!

I love that they are all in the SWATT team together and all look after Bella, and I definitely love that Emmitt is Bella's big brother because he just always kind of felt that way to me anyways!!

And so far I love the dance happening between Edward & Bella, but I can only take so much Angst; so I am really hoping that you are not one of those authors that drags out the angst til the very last chapter before giving us what we all really want and that is nice juicy lemons with Bella & Edward!!

Because we all know that is why we read fanfiction, & stories here on twilighted because Stephanie Meyer kept that lemony goodness out of the original stories with such HOT CHARACTERS!! LOL J/K

 

Anyways, I am kind of rambling and I kind of suck at reviewing which is why I usually don't do it much but I wanted to just tell you that so far I love this story and really appreciated the author note at the bottom that said you already have most of this written and will be updating quite often which makes me very happy!!!! OH, and I am also very glad that you have "impulse control" because I do not want you waiting a few days in between updating as someone suggested, trust me the reviews will still come and probably come more often because we really do appreciate the faster updates!!!!!!!!

xoxoxo

I'm really enjoying the story so far. I like the way Bella is not all weak and needy all the time. Can't wait to get to the juicy, citrus stuff.

this story is awesom. i have been reading it for a few days now at work. and honestly im not getting any work done.

Great Chapter!

The lime was nice.  I am wondering how Trager will breach the crack security team.  I didn't mention before...I like how you put Jacob in the mix.  Much luv