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Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:30 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
uh oh drama is about to happen... i hope edward and bella are going to be ok!
Reviewer: im_on_a_boat (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:28 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
Oooo I wonder who it is... It has to be someone she really knows to remember their laugh... Hmmm... Really good chapter! I love how Emmett is in a very akward place with Bella's and Edward's relationship. On one hand it's his baby sister, on the other it's one of his best friends who used to be a manwhore. Must be tough for him. I'm sure he knows how much Edward loves Bella but it still must be something to get used to.
Update Soon!
Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:12 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
Ok - the cliffie was definitely cruel...but will keep me coming back for more! A very sweet chapter overall. Your Edward & Bella are so sweet together. Please tell me that Trevor isn't going to rain on their parade...
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:09 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
NO!!!! Evil cliffie! I'll be waiting right nere waiting...impatiently! please update!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:09 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
That's just nasty, where's your holiday spirit gone????? Might be the dodgy Doctor that skipped town, but it would be a HUGE conincidence that he would be there as well......
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:04 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
kids! awesome.
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 06:02 PM · On: surprise, SURPRISE
holy shit please you cant stop there, i need more
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 04:59 AM · On: The World Spins Madly On
Great chapter. I'm glad Emmett and Bella had everyone with them this year they went to visit their parents' grave. I got all teary when Edward was telling Bella about how he fell in love with her. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 08:07 AM · On: A Raft In The Flood
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward's found a possible alternate job and he told Bella everything. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Surfacing From The Deep
Damn I've gotten behind again.
Great chapter. What's Edward going to do? And how's Bella going to react when Edward finally tells her about everything?
Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 08:39 PM · On: The World Spins Madly On
It was agreat story I teared up, it reminded me of when my mom died I remember the funeral not the cemetery, funny how i just remembered that I didn't rmember. I treid so hard now to picture it and I can't. I do remember freaking out the next day in the store and yelling andmthinking how can they all just go about their business the weepies song is true the world does spin madly on.
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
Good job in the descriptions of feelings and actions. The operation was pretty well defined and I appreciate the details.
What I wouldn't give to slumber next to that Edward, so sweet and finding his way to enlightment.
Reviewer: beraroma (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Equivalency
I just love Psych and Bones! Certainly two of the best shows on TV! Now as for David being an inspiration for Sellers, well, that is just wrong on so many levels!!!
LOVE this story!
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Femmes Night Out
What they have is sweet and precious. I know that they'll get to that honest place, but I know that they will agonize a bit longer until they get there. They always do.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:03 PM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
cow tipping is a huge thing in my little hick town in california! It is so mean but so funny at the same time...great chapter as always.
Reviewer: TicketGirl95 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 05:47 AM · On: A Raft In The Flood
Absolutely PERFECT!! The future is looking bright for Mr. Mason...uhh...Mr. Cullen lol I absolutely love your story! Awesome job and can't wait to read the rest!!
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 11:30 PM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Great story. I have cried multiple times, remembering the lose of my Mother a year and a half ago. I can't imagine loosing her at 16.
As for the pranks, several of my friends and I were "socking" (you take tube socks and stuff wet socks in the toes of the sock and throw them at cars as they drive by) and we actually socked a sheriff's car. My Dad was a cop, so you can imagine how well it would have gone over if the officer had actually caught up with us when we ran away.
Keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: Lys (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:06 PM · On: The World Spins Madly On
Beautifully written. I very rarely cry over anything I read, and this chapter mad me cry.
Reviewer: aussietrueblue (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 02:51 AM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Wow i love this fic.....
I'm glad that Em is going to work with Edward now we need Jasper to work with them as well.
Chapter 46 was so sad...
Keep them coming please....
Reviewer: MistylovesTwi (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 04:05 PM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
I would drive my boyfriend and his football buddies around while they went "bush diving" Meaning that they would all pile into the blazer and hang out of the back doors while they looked for the perfect bush. Once they found it, they would simultaneously dive out of the front and the back seats into the bushes...too many trips to the er for that lol I never did it just watched but it was hilarious!!! I live in the same town that I went to school in and we are a very small town in southwest Va. Seriously my graduating class only had like 52 people in it lol Needless to say we didn't have much to do besides get drunk or act stupid, we chose to act stupid lol
Author's Response: OH my gosh...okay you'd think after the first trip that they would stop...but no...teenage boys are insane! LOL! Was this before or after the show Jackass was ont he air? Because that sounds like something they would do! LOL! Thanks for sharing@!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Disturbed
I have to tell you, I have a punching bag & it is an AMAZING way to release stress!!! That and sex ;0)
Awesome chapters!!
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 10:38 AM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
the ritual that was developed sounds so thoughtful...kudos!
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 06:29 AM · On: The World Spins Madly On
thanks for the warning! and right before work too!! sheesh! grins! it was very touching & moving. thx ever so much!
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:46 AM · On: A Raft In The Flood
awww so cool!!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:15 AM · On: The Missing Pieces of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Very interesting, hearing about the crazy things Bella (and Emmett) got up to as teens. And I can totally see Emmett getting crazy/angry at Bella when hearing about her excapades even many years after the fact. Double standard, yes, but most older brothers won't let their little sisters do the stunts they themselves did (if you know what I mean).
I had a lame childhood. The craziest thing I did as a teenager was swipe the bottle of brandy on my 15th birthday. I had a sleepover, and my friend decided she was going to pierce our other friend's ears. I read somewhere (in a Baby-sitters Club book, I think) that you needed alcohol, that's why I swiped the brandy. Well we ended up not piercing ears that night, just drinking the brandy with coke. The funniest part was that my mother had no idea that I'd gotten to the brandy until Christmas, four months later, when she wanted it to light the pudding!
Can't wait to read more!
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