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Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 07:41 AM · On: The Eye of the Storm
This site was not working on my comp today and since i saw there was a new chapter and i'm kinda obsessed with this story i checked to see if you were on fanfic! All i can say is so glad to find that you are ;)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 03:59 AM · On: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
they (bella and edward) are so frustrating both feeling as they do for each other and believing something else, but good news the whole gang is pitching in to help sort them out this should be intresting, lovin this story
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Sleeping With An Angel
another great chapter i found the swat stuff quite believeable and edwards feelings are now very known to him and the rest of the gang let's see what he does about showing bella
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 02:14 AM · On: Femmes Night Out
they had a great time at the bar i like bellas self defence moves very cool, and edwards appologised but lots more work needed i think, jasper and alice i'm glad they got together
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Puppet Master J
edward story is sad what a shit mother no wonder emotionaly he's a bit of a mess but then he does have esme and carlisle as good role models andy gave super true advice lets hope he starts to listen
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 01:19 AM · On: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
fab chapter, glad to hear edward sorts his crap out soon, this girls night out should be fun
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Avoidance and Disappointment
at least he felt wrong with the other girl so his attitude is changing a bit and he acknowledges what a dick he's been cant wait to see how he fixes things with bella
Reviewer: kittybear1985 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:37 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
This is a wonderful story, I can't wait til the wedding :) and it would be cool to have Alice and Jasper get engaged too. Also, maybe a suprise pregnancy for Bella and Edward. But way to go on the story :)
Reviewer: kittybear1985 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:34 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
This is a wonderful story, I can't wait til the wedding :) and it would be cool to have Alice and Jasper get engaged too. Also, maybe a suprise pregnancy for Bella and Edward. But way to go on the story :)
Reviewer: kittybear1985 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:33 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
This is a wonderful story, I can't wait til the wedding :) and it would be cool to have Alice and Jasper get engaged too. Also, maybe a suprise pregnancy for Bella and Edward. But way to go on the story :)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:09 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
I just love the baby's name! SO CUTE!!!!! I am super glad that it turned out that way! We have had to deal with enough angst and stalling....so a nice and easy "not liable for financial....." was a good enough answer for me! Thanks for making it quick!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:53 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
I just love the baby's name! SO CUTE!!!!! I am super glad that it turned out that way! We have had to deal with enough angst and stalling....so a nice and easy "not liable for financial....." was a good enough answer for me! Thanks for making it quick!
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:52 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
Great chapter as always. I can't wait for the next one but I don't look forward to the story being over. Keep up the great work v
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:52 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
I just love the baby's name! SO CUTE!!!!! I am super glad that it turned out that way! We have had to deal with enough angst and stalling....so a nice and easy "not liable for financial....." was a good enough answer for me! Thanks for making it quick!
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:49 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
Great chapter as always. I can't wait for the next one but I don't look forward to the story being over. Keep up the great work v
Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 05:17 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
I think the trial went great! I'm glad Edward got pissed off! I think at that point the jury was already leaning towards this being a waste of their time anyway. Bach parties next!?!? I can't wait!!
Bethanne
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 04:04 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
Oh My God! Loved this chapter! Sigh of relief! the verdict was a good one!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:22 PM · On: The Eye of the Storm
Loved how Edward handled that scum Varner's questions. Glad that everything with Rose and the baby came out ok.
Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 08:01 AM · On: The Eye of the Storm
really good chapter
Reviewer: danceegirl92 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:43 AM · On: The Eye of the Storm
I think you did a fantastic job with the trial!!! Since you made Varner such a jerk I'm assuming math isn't really your favorite subject? Or maybe you just didn't like him. Whichever, I am really enjoying this story!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:22 AM · On: The Day From Hell
oh my i found this fic yesterday and i'm so hooked none of my regular fics were updated so i looked on the most recent and this caught my eye but i think i may have seen it advertiszed on the forums also, it is a fab concept bella and emmett related (funny but just started reading another fic with the same paring) as brother and sister, glad andy is ok, that was scary but it did give us the first kiss even if bella and edward don't know what to think of it, excellent stuff
Reviewer: debs2crazy (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 07:07 AM · On: The Eye of the Storm
Great chapter.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 04:15 AM · On: The Eye of the Storm
You know, when Edward says that Bella looks 'hot' in the suits, I don't think he means temperature wise...
Thank goodness the trial came to the right conclusion! (not that I really thought that you'd write it any other way). But Edward could have really blown it in there. And the advent of Emmalie was so sweet. It almost looked as though Edward could be getting clucky.
On that note; I wonder if Bella's heightened libido means anything significant...
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Femme Docs and Self Conscious Sluts
with all the chapters is this a dance they keep up a long time? fab chapter
Author's Response: Eh...they don't dance too terribly long. by 1/3 of the way through things change drastically
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Prologue/Brotherly Manwhores
first chapter in and liking this and it's a long story just how i like them
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