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Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:53 AM · On: And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

Holy shit, I found this story today and I am already inlove. I can't wait to read the rest. I love this twist in how edward already sees bella. And alice can't wait to see her blow her lid

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 07:17 AM · On: For the love of God

I just got caught up on this story.  It's great!  Can't wait for an update.  Really, moving for HS might be a bit much though...

Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 12:29 AM · On: For the love of God

Ok on one hand them moving in together for her senior year would be sweet and lovely.  But.... Edward makes a good point that I don't think he's realized yet.  He says that he's never seen Bella so playful being a free and easy seventeen year old.  She's out from under all the stress of taking care of her parents and running their homes.  If she moves in with Edward isn't that going to load some of that stress right back on her?  True they'd be doing it together but that's still a lot to deal with during your Senior year.

Reviewer: hotcullens (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:11 PM · On: For the love of God

Alice is bugging me too! (only joking) I don´t want it to be the end yet! - but am so very pleased to hear that there´s plenty more ahead ;)  Thanks!!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 09:07 PM · On: For the love of God

LOL. XD More please!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:52 PM · On: For the love of God

cute story

Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 04:11 PM · On: For the love of God

as soon as i read the chapter name "for the love of god" i automaticly though of them being cockblocked lol! poor edward.. he needs to get some. i can tell that things are kinda wrapping up quickly and i just wanted to tell you that these kida have me leaning on edge lol!ahh you are seriously my favorte author, like you have no idea. i LIVE for your updates and i have no idea what i'd do without you =] the charlie confrontation was a little rough for bella & i was wondering what was going on in her head.... damn edward for being human! ... not that it would matter lol nvm that ;]

luv ya

-jazzy =]



Author's Response:

I'm not one for Edward reading her mind.  I admit that it would make a great story, but I've always felt that it wouldn't be fair for him to hear her thoughts and her not be able to hear his.  He would ALWAYS know everything and that would get annoying.  She wouldn't have any privacy and that would get WAY more than annoying.  LOL! 

You're right, the story is wrapping up.  However...a good deal happens in these last couple of chapters.  I'm about to go and submit the next chapter, so it should be up soon.  Hopefully you won't fall off the edge. :D

Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Bethanne394 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:36 PM · On: For the love of God

Although I am ALL for E & B moving in together and getting started on their lives considering with his visions he knows that they will be married and prreggo within the span of 2 years, how will Carlise and Esme take it? Or Charlie? I am ready for the weekend lemon!

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:20 PM · On: For the love of God

i really love this story. i love that edward just accepts their relationship, instead of going all emoward and hurting and leaving bella. i love that he can see this future for them, even though it's taken such a short while.

hope to read more soon

xoxo

Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:44 PM · On: This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

Love your carlisle!  and I love how Edward is so honest with him. 

So glad I have a lot to catch up on!!

:)

 

Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:16 PM · On: And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

i'm excited to see where this goes!!  great job!!

 

Reviewer: NeedEternalDamnation (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:07 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

Hey

Ive only just found your fanfic and MY GOD! seriously you have some talent girl!

Me and my girl mates who go to another school are in LOVE with this story.. i'm kinda beginning to fall more in love with your Edward than Stephenine's- if thats even possible.

I can't wait till friday ;)

All i can think about is this! i even dream about it! My friends keep catching me smiling to myself when i'm reliving another lemony moment in my head (:

wendy xx



Author's Response:

Awesome!!  I don't think it's possible for you to love my Edward more, but I won't try and stop you.  LOL!  He's too perfect sometimes.  I wish I could clone him or something.  That's really awesome that you day dream about Sexy Time with Edward and Bella.  That made me laugh. 

I'm really glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review!! :D :D

Reviewer: epwatts_85 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:18 AM · On: And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

poor alice...hello hard place

Reviewer: DjDangerette (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:59 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

Yay more!!!! Please!

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:39 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

lovely!! Looking forward to the weekend, and why do i have a feeling we haven't heard the last of jake?

Reviewer: Nicki 101 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:16 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

lol your hilarious but great chapter i love ^_-

Reviewer: NeedForLust (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:30 AM · On: I...blow your mind?

Omg this is the best one on here ! x

Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:34 AM · On: And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

LOVE it!!!!!

Reviewer: bella_edwardcullen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 10:34 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

awesome chapter i love this story

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 06:08 PM · On: It's the best invention yet.

Loved it! Sorry I'm not more eloquent..just impatient to read more :) Hope the story continues past their first time so we can get to all the kinky stuff... that "against the wall" stint was h-o-t!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:48 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

Good chapter more please soon.

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

Good for her! Can't wait to read more! Big smiles :D

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:29 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

This was a great chapter and i loved the ending.

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:26 PM · On: For the better or for worse?

I was so nervous that Charlie was going to barge in on them at the beginning of this chapter, I had to skim through to the end before I could go back and read anxiety-free!!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 05:07 PM · On: I...blow your mind?

Yummy...

Hope she tells Edward when she see's Jake. No Secrets!!

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