this story is so great...I love how honest and realistic it feels.

Wonderful, I love IT!!!!

I cant believe that this is it. I have been dreading this moment for such a long time. I have been loving this story from the beginning and I hope to see many more of your works in the future.  You are really a very talented writer.  The beautiful style of your writing, the passion possessed in every word, the love and devotion that pores out of each and every sentence is a true testament of a talented and dedicated person.  This was indeed a beautiful sweet story and I promise you that I am going to push all I can to read it.  Cant wait to read more.  Take care and please keep writing!!

Hugs, and many squeezes!  Stephanie 

i absolutely loved this story!

Wonderful!

awww Im a little sad .. I adored this story...I want to know her reaction to the first time he saw her

Whew!  Talk about an emotional, sweet, loving, beautiful chapter!  Amen on the tissue alert!  Words cannot and will never express how much this story has affected me.  I mean all the emotions that you place out there between Jasper's courage, his struggles growing up trying to protect his sister; the love he shows for Rosie AND his mother even though she put him through hell and back; the passion and love he develops for Bella and hers in return to him; his overall healing and road to forgiveness with his mother and all the support from all who are involved; the proof of his success when it comes to how well Rosie turns out even without the help of a mother or father.  I could go on and on.  I don't know how you did it, but I can only commend you on a piece well done and it's not even finished yet.  I will probably bawl my eyes out when that comes to past as well just like I have almost done in every chapter.  So thanks again for sharing your talent and I'm sure I will be saying it again very soon!!!

Hugs, stephanie

*going immediately over to ff for the outtakes!!!!!:)

AWWWW! Perfect perfect perfect!

Im catching up! I loved this chapter hun!

i want to KILL his fucking mother. and write her a letter telling her to fuck off and gas herself again, and get it done this time! I would never, EVER let her into my life again. EVER.

I think she wrote them a suicice note

damn, its 3am and i gotta work in the morning!!

this story is seriously. breaking. my. heart. 

I want to CUT his mother. how DARE she try to contact Rosie!! she has no right. at the VERY least, she should wait until Rosalie is an adult, adn more able to handle things and decide if she wants to see her mom.

EVIL! I don't care what happened to the dad - as a parent, you SUCK IT UP and take care of your damned kids!

gah. my heart hurts. :(((

but I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story!!! :)

The ending made me cry again!!! You alway seem to have a knack for making me cry right at the end.

Okay, I'll go back to the start again.

That was really nice how Rosalie and Bella had that little talk about what Jasper has told Rosalie. I can understand why Bella was feeling a little uncomfortable. It is kind of overwhelming, in a way. All these little things that Jasper notices, and then for him to tell Rosalie shows how close they are, but also how much Jasper adores Bella.

I got worried when he came home and was distant. But I had a feeling you'd put it right again. My eyes did water a bit when they were talking about being with each other, and not wanting anyone else. The way you wrote that scene was perfect, it just rang with the connection they have with each other.

I'm glad Jasper finally found the house he was looking for. I guess in a way he couldn't tell Kate, or didn't want to, about the way he looked at things. As in, he didn't want to say that looking at a similar kitchen would remind him of his mother, or the mirror in the bathroom reminding him of cleaning up his cuts etc. That was a nice touch though, how you had Kate touching his cheek and him realising that he didn't flinch or pull away.

Sorry this review took so long to get to you.. I got behind on my updates, again. Yours is the first I read :)