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Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Long Goodbye

I liked it so far so good can't wait till bella is awake

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Another Bumpy Ride

I hope he dumps her in the next chapter. It would serve her right for him to screw her and then kick her out the door.

Author's Response:

Not a fan of Jess then lol?  Sssshhhhh, me either! 

Just wait for the next chap!  It's gonana be fun lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 3 The Chief Vents



Author's Response:

Soz, I keep forgetting to check for reviews on here!

Glad you enjoying it so far... honest, it does get better (so some readers tell me anyway lol.



Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 The Chief Vents


Author's Response:

Thanks! that really means a lot to me. 

The next chapter is with my Betas now so wont be too long!


Reviewer: olympic1340 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 The Chief Vents

I really love Carlisle, how he can be so sympathetic to Charlie while still protecting Edward.  I can't wait for Bella to wake up.

Author's Response:

Carlisle really is totally Canon here... he is just such a great character that I couldn't bear to change!

thanks for reading and reviewing!   I really appreciate it!


Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

It has possibilities.

Author's Response:

I just hope you stick with it long enough for the story to unfold. :-D

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

she has short term amensia.

= amnesia. ;-)



Author's Response:

Damn, that should read "she has short term dyslexia, not amnesia lol"

I noticed this a few days ago but since this is the first time I have used, I am clueless how to edit lol.


Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more.

The Boomtown Rats - feels like I am back in high school with Duran Duran memories LOL.

Author's Response: Lol, I totally hear ya! I can't guarantee any Duran Duran though... sorry! :-D

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