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Reviewer: Andalor1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:48 PM · On: "Down the rabbit hole"
well that was some decisive action by Edward! Can only imagine what Jake will look like once Emmett is done with him. May I ask why Edward was bare chested at the end there? Not that I'm complaining or anything! :-) I'm glad Bella was got out of there, don't think I could take another beating by Jake. Found that quite frightening actually but all made up for by the gorgeous Dr Cullen Sr :-)
I love Comfortward....
Author's Response: Everyone loves Comfortward but why not toss in to the mix shirtlessward too? lol. He had been at work all day and was very stressed. First thing I do when feeling like that, is change in to more comfy clothes. So I figured Edward would have gone and taken his shirt off to change but then heard the commotion with Bella and gone to her. Plus...well I just like shirtlessward! If you are going to need answers for everytime Edward is rather nekkid...I might have alot of explaining to do hehehe. Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: Andalor1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:38 PM · On: "Introductions"
Guh this was a great first chapter. Really feel for Bella, in an abusive relationship it really is hard to see it from the inside as everyone else on the outside does. Its not easy to break away from it, the psychology going on is intense. I was lucky to get out of something that I found out later could have turned nasty when I heard what had happened to previous girlfriends of his.
But I love the idea of Edward coming to her rescue! "just think of me as your horse, ride me whenever you want"?? hell yes! I'll bring the whip and spurs! :-)
Author's Response: Giddy up Edward! lol! I had to add that line for the double meaning hehehe. I am so glad you like it and that Bella's emotions are coming accross very well. Hope you keep reading, thanks so much for taking the time to review :)
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:44 PM · On: "Revelations"
they should have called the cops on that asshole when he showed up at the house the first time. jacob is not going to change, he is not a man at all. and for bella to think that she needs him like that breaks my heart, hopefully while he is gone she can see how her life should be. update soon
Author's Response: There is more to come for Jake. Bella still loves him so it will be difficult to ust turn her back on him or call the cops as you said. I really hope you keep reading and thanks so much for taking the time to review :)
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:43 PM · On: "Revelations"
This is a completely new side to Jake. I'm actually looking forward to reading mroe and learning more about him. Dare I say I might actually be Team Jacob on this story, IF he can get his act together.
So looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Ummmm, you may not be team Jacob for long lol. I am so glad that someone felt that they belong together though, they are meant to be in love after all. But yes I wanted Jake to get his side across. Thanks so much for reviewing, I hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:27 PM · On: "Revelations"
This is not what I was looking forward to but I can only hope Jake will meet someone in his sessions or hits Bella again and Edward and Emmett beat the shit out of him and he leaves for good. Bella belongs with Edward and deserves a HEA. I really like the story. Keep up the good writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. There will be a HEA...but alot of angst and upset before it hehehe. Hope you keep reading and thanks so much for taking the time to review :)
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:24 PM · On: "Revelations"
great chapter! udpate soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:15 PM · On: "Revelations"
C'est la vie, Jacob. Love the story, but HATE his excuse... and then theres Bella, she is going to have to wake up and smell Juan Valdez' coffee beans :) I think Emmett should take her to a battered womans shelter, that would maybe help give her some perspective on the life she would have no doubt, led with Jacob.
The story is great, I cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: lol. I didnt expect people to suddenly forgive Jake, I just wanted to show he wasnt evil down to the core. There are still issues there for both of them. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:08 PM · On: "Revelations"
Oh my gosh. I am assuming that this is an Edward/Bella fic and I cannot even imagine the way Jake will feel when she leaves him. I just doesn't seem possibly that he wouldn't try to kill someone after that, turn into a James-esque figure. The only way I could see this working without bloodshed is if Jake fell for someone at the same time that Bella fell for Edward.
That is horrible what happened to Jake, though. I will never understand why people do things like that. You got tears again, but I was already half way there when I read this so I don't know if you want to count that one.
Author's Response: I count it! I love that I can make people feel for my characters, its exactly why I write. Things may not be so simple for Jake and Bella...we shall have to see hehehe. Thanks so much for the review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:01 PM · On: "Revelations"
Bella needs therapy too and I'm not sure if she should trust that Jake's really going to anger management. It just seems too easy. I'm sure you are just waiting to throw us a curveball. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: There may be a curve ball of some kind heading your way hehehe. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 08:00 PM · On: "Revelations"
So I still don't like Jake, in fact I'm even more annoyed with him. Being left at the alter is not an excuse to beat the shit out of your girlfriend. I'm glad he's recognized his problem and getting help. Bella needs to get help too, she needs to see that this isn't her fault and that Jake is not good enough for her. Its going to be a long hard road for her. Her and Edward need to get together already!! :)
Author's Response: I dont think you will ever like Jake again lol. I just didnt want to make him a completely heartless asshole, I wanted him to have a little something about him. It is going to be a long hard road indeed lol Thanks so much for the review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: bellaLife (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:03 AM · On: "Down the rabbit hole"
I'm glad Edward said something, though I can understand why Bella was upset by that.
Edward with no shirt is a wonderful thing and any visual representation of that to the mind is fantastic!
I liked this chapter, Edward is very caring and observant, and Emmett is every the loving, doting, caring older brother.
Author's Response: Of course I had to toss in Edward shirtless! Bella had a rough day, she needed some topless-ward. lol I am glad you are liking my Edward and Emmett. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: bellaLife (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 05:45 AM · On: "Introductions"
Oh wow, what a situation to be in. It's bad enough being attracted to your brother's roommate, but it's awful that when you're at your absolute worst, he's the one who has to patch you up.
I have never actually seen Jacob as a violent person, and I am sure there is more to him lashing out than we know, but so far I am intrigued by this story.
Author's Response: There is more to Jake yes. I did try writing James as the bad guy but it didnt work so well. I hope you keep reading, thanks so much for the review :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:02 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
Wow. She needs freakin' help! They need to call in a Therapist! And another woman. I don't think Bella needs more testosterone right now... so bring on Alice & Rose!
Oh Esme would make an awesome Therapist!
Author's Response: lol Funny you should mention that...they may pop up soon hehehe. Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:39 PM · On: "Down the rabbit hole"
YESSssssss!!!
I am SO Glad Edward took action & called Emmett & they did an intervention!! Yes!!!!
OOOhhhh I hope they call 'em over & beat the ever-lovin' sh** outta Jake!!!!!!
Oh & uh, thanks for the piggy-back ride & bare-chest Edward. That ih, *ahem* made mah day & i now cant spell r type....great visuals...*sigh*
Author's Response: LOL! I am glad you like where I am going with this story. Edwardback rides are the best! I did enjoy writing that part hehehe. Hope you keep reading. Thanks so much for the review
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:16 PM · On: "Introductions"
Oh my gosh i'm already hooked!!
Reviewer: Ryley Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 03:21 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
awesome.:)hope there is more soon. :)
Author's Response: I will be submitting the next chapter tomorrow. Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 12:47 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
damn girl, remeber how i said i was proud of you before, well now that is ten fold because i am falling so in love with these stories. everything, i mean everything that you have bella do, that she does is so true and i am just at lost wfor words on how much this story touches the lowest depths of my soul.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so gladi can convey Bella's emotions and reactions properly, its one of my biggest concerns that people would misunderstand my Bella. Thank you so so much for your kind words, its reviews like this that inspire me to write lol Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 11:31 AM · On: "Bruise Easily"
I'm impressed you didn't outright back Jake this SOB! He realizes what he is doing to Bella - that was a switch I did not anticipate.
Edward seems like he has some growing to do as well.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 10:45 AM · On: "Bruise Easily"
Hey another really cool chap poor edward =[ dont let her go
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Edward wont let her go easily hehehe. Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 06:13 AM · On: "Bruise Easily"
!!
Author's Response: um....ok lol Not sure if that is postive or negative...but thanks anyway
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:48 AM · On: "Bruise Easily"
bella is nuts, but the behavior and thinking is textbook, well written. love this edward
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am so glad people are liking my Edward :) Hope you keep reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:04 PM · On: "Down the rabbit hole"
I don't uderstand why she would'nt want to get out her behaviour has me baffeled.
Author's Response: Bella loves Jake and sometimes love really is completely blind. She doesnt want to be taken away from the man she loves and she feels that it is her fault that Jake hurts her. She loves Jake and wants to stay with him, she is on the inside looking out and until someone can get her to be on the outside looking in, she wont see what Jake is doing to her. I hope this explains a bit more.
Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 08:02 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
Still hate Jake....I know he realized that he has a problem but damn what an ass. And I hate that Bella still defends him after everything he has done to her..I have never been in an abusive relationship so I know it's easy for me to sit here and say I wouldn't take that but damn I hope she comes to her senses soon. But I also know that it has to be her decision, she will have to realize on her own that she deserves better than that abusive monster. You did it again...I'm all worked up and want to kick some ass!
Author's Response: lol. I would love to say that I am sorry you are worked up and annoyed, but I am not lol. Means I have done my job! Bella has two men who care for her and want to protect her now, she has a little guidence. Who knows...she may even come to her senses, or not hehehe. I am not giving anything away yet :p
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:12 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
I so didn't see this happening, despite your warnings! Really great twist to a "classic" storyline. My heart actually twitched at Jake's words. The fact that he realizes something is wrong with him. I'm starting to wonder if it's actually something biological, like a chemical imbalance or something causing his rages. And Bella, this chapter illustrates even more than the last one how strong of a hold Jake has on her. I haven't decided if it really is her love for him or just how long he has controlled her coupled with a low self-esteem or simply a fear of change. Bravo!
Author's Response: wow! You really hit the nail on the head with what I wanted my readers to think and feel. The next chapter is in Jake's POV so there will be a little insight in to him and his past. I am so glad you are enjoying the story and the twists I like to toss in every now and again. There will be a few..I dont like people to get too comfy hehehe. Hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:04 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
I just started reading and I love the story. You have me in tears now. I always think that I would never fall into a situation like that and how could anyone else be dumb enough to, but then I read something like this, and it reminds me that it could happen to anyone. Even strong independent women.
And to quote the almighty Joss Whedon: "Where do we go from here..."
Author's Response: Musical Buffy, one of the best episodes ever lol. I cant believe I had tears! My first tears! I joked with a couple of friends of mine that I wont be happy until someone cries at my writing, I cant believe that actually happened! And unfortunately, with the right guy, or wrong guy should I say, it can and has happened to very strong independent women. Sad fact but true. Hope you keep reading :)
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