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Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:35 PM · On: "Not your type"
Ugh not Charlie and Alice. I liked the chapter.
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:21 PM · On: "Not your type"
oh but I love charlie and alice, JK, great chapter, so close on that kiss!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:40 PM · On: "Not your type"
great chapter!
Reviewer: skfh (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 03:34 PM · On: "Torn"
really great story
Reviewer: Belindella (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 02:38 PM · On: "Not your type"
I was only saying to my sister the other day how I was dying for an update of this story, and here you are!!! Yay! Damn, and just when it was getting really good it stopped - I'm in the same dilema as before: I was more, damn it! How freaking RUDE is Laurant? Damn, I wanted to hit him so badly, so I was cheering Edward's decision to leave and get Maccas instead. The next chaper sounds like it may just be the best one yet, so I'm hoping RL doesn't get in the way too much of a quicker update. Great story, thanks for giving it to us! :)
OH! And how adorable was Edward not liking Bella all dolled up? Just gorgeous that he likes her the way she is - the man is wonderful!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 12:59 PM · On: "Not your type"
Great chapter!
I thought that the dinner would end badly with Laurent making her feel the way he did, but I love the way Edward resolved it!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 12:27 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
Hmm....I think this Bella is just a tad too pathetic for me to handle. I could understand it if she stayed with Jake because he threatened her or her family, but this ridiculous obsession she has with him, well...it's just hard to stomach. I know there are women that choose to stay in abusive relationships every day, but rarely do you see it with women that have a relatively clean life and a supportive family.
She's just...stupid. And while I'm sure there will be some great revelation for her later on, I can't find it in me to care one tiny bit either way.
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 12:08 PM · On: "Not your type"
WOW!!!! Thank you for continuing to write the story, I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 11:50 AM · On: "Introductions"
Another brillian chapter. But...i would like to tell Laurent where to stuff his orange chicken..lol. Bella may need more than a strong show of support from her family and friends...not to mention a hotter than hades doctor..lol
She needs to find her self worth, to learn to stand on her own 2 feet. Be strong for herself. Then she can go to Edward strong and healed :) Can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 11:07 AM · On: "Not your type"
I think this is my favorite chapter so far, though I did enjoy the spa escapes.
Reviewer: sarahuk (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 05:08 PM · On: "N.R.A"
Just found your story and I am really enjoying it so far!
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
I am always over the moon to get new readers, hello to you. I am so glad you are enjoying my story. I submitted the next chapter over a week ago so fingers crossed, any day now. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 06:14 PM · On: "N.R.A"
oh god...please no...not.....LAUREN!!!!!....I'll do anything..lol..I am really enjoying this story. I am glad that Bella is taking babysteps and that Edward is not pushing her. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! This is a great story!!!
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
LoL, since you reviewed, I wont add Lauren, I promise hehehe. I am so glad you are enjoying the chapter, I didnt want Edward and Bella to rush in to things and be unrealitic, glad I am not alone in thinking that way. The next chapter was submitted over a week ago for validation, so any day now. Thanks so much for taking the time to review :)
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 06:14 PM · On: "N.R.A"
oh god...please no...not.....LAUREN!!!!!....I'll do anything..lol..I am really enjoying this story. I am glad that Bella is taking babysteps and that Edward is not pushing her. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! This is a great story!!!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 11:57 AM · On: "N.R.A"
Great chapter!
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next was submitted over a week ago so should be posted any day now. Hope you keep reading and thanks for taking the time to review :)
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:13 PM · On: "N.R.A"
u fight dirty darlin' i like that! awesome chapter can't wait for the next u totally rock just plain awesome as always ur no1 fan chelle x
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
Ah, my lovely number one fan! Thanks again for the sweet email, really made my day. Like i said, the chapter was submitted over a week ago *shrug* guess there is alot of submissions to go through or something :(. You will however, be happy to know that I have the chapter after that (12) all beta-d and ready to go! So soon as 11 is posted, I will submit 12 :)
Reviewer: Mily06 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:56 PM · On: "N.R.A"
aww edward is so sweet!!! and jasper too! when are they goin to kiss!!?? haha cant wait!!!!
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
I love Edward too, isnt he a sweet heart? They will kiss but I am not revealing any secrets about when or why so Xp. I submitted the next chapter over a week ago so hopefully it will be posted any day now :) Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 03:39 PM · On: "N.R.A"
They're finally getting a dinner date - even if it perhaps feels a little contrived. Wonder if Edward will do something that convinces Bella of his feelings/intentions? Hopefully nothing happens for the negative though! :)
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
I am revealing nothing of the dinner date, my lips are sealed! I did submit that chapter over a week ago so any day now and you can read for yourself. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:34 PM · On: "N.R.A"
I like your threats at the end!
Fun chapter - glad Bella gets to feel happy. Smart making Jasper the therapist and you should tell Edward to back off a bit and not be so bossy. Yes, it's charming and such, but B needs to get used to making up her own mind once she gets a little confidence and not let him run her life. That's just trading one bossy bit of goods for another, though the second is a far far better deal... That's the biggest issue I've always had with Edward, I guess. True to form to keep him that way, but I hope it shows up several chapters from now that Bella doesn't let him shush her like she does here...
Loved it! Thanks for writing!!
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
Glad you enjoy my threats, it gets the reviews rolling on in hehe. I think Edward is a little bossy, you're right but it's all part of his charm! Bella and Edward will develop as the chapters roll on and I promise, she wont be a door mat forever! I submitted the next chapter over a week ago, so any day now :) Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading.
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:19 AM · On: "N.R.A"
NOOOOO ... No Lauren ! I'm reviewing ...
I love how she doesn't realize her feelings for Edward yet ... they're there but she doesn't recognize them ... because she has never felt that way before about anyone (including Jacob).
more please!
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
Good, since I have my review, I will not add Lauren! Yeah you are completely right, Bella does have feelings for Edward, she just isn't ready to accept them and what they could mean. She will figure it out soon enough hehe. I submitted the next chapter over a week ago, so any day now. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:15 PM · On: "N.R.A"
YAY Jasper gave her his card!! MAKE HER USE IT!!!
Ohhh I can't wait til she gets the help she needs! That will help her gain the confidence she needs to dump Jakes ass & kick him in the balls while telling him he's not good enough for HER!!
...& then jump Edward & practice her orgasms ;-)
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
bwahahaha! I love that. Bella just kick Jake in the balls and go get herself off using Edward LOL. We will get there, I promise...maybe not that exactly but somewhere close enough. I submitted the next chapter over a week ago so any day now and it should be posted. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading :)
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 06:31 PM · On: "N.R.A"
:)
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
I take the smiley face to mean good things? Hope so. I submitted the nexr chapter over a week ago so any day now and it will be posted. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading.
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:43 PM · On: "N.R.A"
I like the fact that Edward fees he's putting his money to good use. I'm also somewhat suprised that she agreed so quickly.
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
Go glad you liked the way Edward is putting his money to good use. Maybe Bella shouldn't have given in so easily, but she is very much under his spell at the moment. A charming man who wants nothing more than to be kind to her and help her...its new and confuses her. Thanks so muchf or taking the time to review, hope you keep reading. I did submit the next chapter over a week ago, so any day now :)
Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:41 PM · On: "N.R.A"
Please update soon!!!! I want Edward to romance Bella!!!!!!
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
Edward will romance Bella in his own way, promise. I did submit the chapter over a week ago so fingers crossed, any day now it will show up :) Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading.
Reviewer: autumnlee (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 04:22 PM · On: "N.R.A"
i do NOT like the embry idea at all!!! & i HATE the lauren idea!!! but other than your threats im loving this story its amazing!! (:
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
Well since you was kind enough to review, I will keep Embry and Lauren out of the picture...for now *insert evil laugh*. So glad you are enjoying my story. I did submit an update over a week ago so any day now and it should be posted. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope your keep reading :)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:06 PM · On: "N.R.A"
hey great chap =]
Author's Response: So sorry for not responding to reviews sooner, epic fail on my part!
Thanks so much, glad you are enjoying the story. I did submit an update over a week ago, so any day now and it should pop up. Thanks so much for taking the time to review, hope you keep reading :)
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