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Reviewer: Odenc (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 11:04 AM · On: "Breathe"
Nooooo...Jacob is with another girl - right??
Bella needs to keep moving forward!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:54 AM · On: "Breathe"
Hey great chap =] i wish i had a hot guy to kiss me while i got pierced ;p wow twist at the end though =]
Reviewer: Odenc (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:23 AM · On: "Not your type"
You write with a good sense of humor...love it!!
Reviewer: Odenc (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:05 AM · On: "N.R.A"
Alice is fun & Emmett is funny and perfectly protective of Bella! Love the story.....,
Reviewer: Odenc (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 08:22 AM · On: "iPods and favors"
Love Love Love this chapter - angry protective Edward is HOT!!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:06 AM · On: "Breathe"
nice distracting there Edward... have to keep that one in mind, though my luck would be getting me a slap :S
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:44 AM · On: "Breathe"
Yayy I was so happy to see a update for this story! I loved how Edward was there for her while she got the piercing, so sweet! thanks so much for the update! Sooo Jacob??....Cant wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:22 AM · On: "Save yourself!"
I am cracking up at Emmett's middle name! Oh and now Alice knows that Edward likes Bella.
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:20 AM · On: "Breathe"
I'm so happy you update!
Uh-Oh!! Actually, I was wondering what the hell Bella is going to do about Jacob and devil himself show up.lol I wonder what she will do, which I have a bad feeling.....can't wait for the next.
Reviewer: trulyedwardly (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:18 AM · On: "A screeching Halt"
omg really this bitch is retarded!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:02 AM · On: "A screeching Halt"
That is terrible that Edward went through this too with his own parents. I really hope that Bella doesn't go back to Jacob.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:49 PM · On: "iPods and favors"
I knew it!! Jacob is a dog and her really better hope that Emmett doesn't find out about the fact that he had another girl in his sister and Jake's apartment.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:40 PM · On: "Breathe"
great chapter!! update soon!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:39 PM · On: "Torn"
Well at least they are still talking to each other instead of avoiding each other.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:22 PM · On: "Really? Never?"
Aww... Now that was sweet! I am glad that Edward made her feel better about what is going on in her life right now.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 11:11 PM · On: "Revelations"
I have to give Jacob credit for wanting to get better. I just hope that he sticks with it and doesn't relaps.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:45 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
Wow Jake just admitted that he needs help. While I don't know if this is just because it was infront of her brother or not it is a step.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:30 PM · On: "Down the rabbit hole"
Good job Edward! I know that Bella wanted to go home so that she didn't get hurt any further from Jacob but he did what he needed to do to keep her safe.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 10:16 PM · On: "Introductions"
Well that night didn't turn out like she had planned did it? I hope that she just gets away from Jacob because he just isn't good for her.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 09:44 PM · On: "Breathe"
Damn Jacob ruining a perfect moment!
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 08:14 PM · On: "Breathe"
I am really glad that you're back to finish the story, but omg how are you going to be gone all that time and then just leave a cliffie like that...that's just so wrong. Please tell me you will update asap!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:52 PM · On: "Breathe"
Yes, you should duck and cover! So evil, you are! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: tessuhhh (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:33 PM · On: "Breathe"
hurry and finish it
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 07:29 PM · On: "Breathe"
WOO, now Edward you've better heed Emmett's warning and not break Bella's heart otherwise your life will not be worth living. *L*
The present was very heartfelt and it obviously took a lot for Bella to accept the gift because she doesn't feel worthy of Edward spending money on her, birthday or not.
The whole piercing experienced made me laugh alot - especially when he resorted to trickery to distract her and stop her from hyperventilating, kissing the crap outta her. Bella reaction to Irina asking to keep Edward to stop other girls fainting was priceless. :)
Reviewer: ophie30 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:56 PM · On: "Breathe"
Please tell me jacob is ust passing through...
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