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Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:26 PM · On: "iPods and favors"
Okay my previous review for the last chapter was a cut and paste because I read it off my blackberry and reviewing off of my bby is a beitch. OMG I cannot believe that f@#ker. You have leave to string him up to be tarred and feather!! What a a-hole! Well that was the faster team switch I have ever done. I hope I can kiss ass as well as be a martyr (lol).
You are amazing I love/(hate Jacob) this story, you have you coming and going. Thank you for the great story.
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:14 PM · On: "Torn"
God Edward is so f-ing hot. But, Jacob is so broken and needs Bella. So will this be a J/B story, because I feel for Jacob. I know I totally have a a martyr type personality. BTW this is the first story where I have switched team cuz before you I was Team Edward all the way.
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:49 PM · On: "Really? Never?"
I like Edward too, but I really hope that Jacob will get better.
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:57 PM · On: "Revelations"
Gosh you are making me really like Jacob for wanting to be a better person!! Jessica is truly a tramp and I hope she catches a STD that will haunt her till the end of her days. That's all I have to say about that.
Another great chapter! Thank you.
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:35 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
Yes well that was a fabulous chapter! Jacob admitting he needed help was just amazing! It just makes this story so much more complex. I love the little back and forth with Emmett and Edward regarding Edward's relationship, very telling. thanks!
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 04:48 PM · On: "Down the rabbit hole"
Let me say my tummy is tight with knots, feeling so sad for Bella, also so scared for her because from the sounds of it she is and will go back to Jacob.
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:58 PM · On: "Introductions"
Wow pretty heavy and scary first chapter and with the author note I was sort of scared to even read this story so I did a bad thing and read the last chapter.
Reading the last chapter has given me some hope so I plan on continuing because I really enjoy your writing style, it is very believable and that is probably why I was scared to continue reading because abuse of either women or children is something I can't stand.
Life for most of us is all about wishes, hopes and dreams and so if there was no hope for Bella to get out of her situation I couldn't continue reading it would just be too sad of a fate to leave Bella in. So thank you for putting a very intriguing story out there to be read.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:02 PM · On: "pressure release"
I hope Edward doesn't over think it! He should prove Jasper's point to her and show her what it is really like to have a man make love to her.
Reviewer: sassygrl0982 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 10:50 PM · On: "pressure release"
OOOOHHHHHH!!!!! Bella Edward kissage!!! YAY!! LOL.. I cannot wait for more so please update soon!!! Love it!!
Reviewer: Chipper (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 07:15 PM · On: "pressure release"
a) You even fuck with my Charlie, you're dead meat. ;)
b) I hate your Jake more than I already hate Jake. Didn't know that was really possible. I just want someone, anyone, preferably Emmett, to beat the shit out of him.
c) Sugar. Cupcake. Nice shoutouts. ;)
d) Jasper. Um, yeah. You know where my loyalties lie, but gawdamn girl, if his number was in the phonebook next to therapist, I would come UP with a reason to see him. This line:
"Sugar, if he hasn't had you screaming his name in pure ecstasy, then he hasn't made love to you, and quite frankly needs to a lesson or two on the female form."
Holywet-my-panties.
Oh, and I love Edward, too, of course.
Nicely done, wifey. ;)
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 06:25 AM · On: "pressure release"
WOW this was a great chap !!!!! i am really glad she talked to jasper it made a lot of difference =]
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 04:37 AM · On: "pressure release"
ohhh well I was holding my breath at points through that, but it burst out as laughter when Bella got home and "claimed" Edward hehehe
"what the hell indeed"!
oh... and Charlie/Aro could actually be oddly interesting... I mean, imagine Charlie being so ticked at Edward and the Cullens for "sucking Bella into the vamp world" and then he's offered a chance at it himself via Aro... and Charlie would have a shield variant of possible use to Aro hehe
Reviewer: heffolud (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 12:22 AM · On: "pressure release"
I'm lovin it!!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: NLM (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:31 PM · On: "pressure release"
Love Love Love this story!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 01:04 PM · On: "pressure release"
Nice end! The anticipation for the next chapter is going to kill me lol. I love your Jasper!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 12:40 PM · On: "pressure release"
Yes, that cliffie was a bit evil. i liked Bella being proactive and doing something to help herself - finally!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:47 AM · On: "pressure release"
Oooh, seems Bella's had a bit of a chance to think about Edward's blurting of his feelings out in the heat of the moment. She's very lucky she had Jasper to turn to, whether he was speaking as a 'shrink' or as her friend; but at least he could be honest but also give her perspective and confirmation that Edward is a good guy.
Will be interesting to see how Edward takes Bella's advances and what transpires next :)
Reviewer: Mily06 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 05:02 AM · On: "pressure release"
charlie and aro, thats gross!! lol.... cant wait to read what happens next, especially with that kiss at the end!! ;)
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 12:26 AM · On: "pressure release"
what the hell is right, lol. Edward has his work cut out for him.
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:04 PM · On: "pressure release"
Aw great chapter!! I loved the Bella and Jasper talk, it was awesome :) Lol cliffhanger! I soo cant wait for the next update! Thanks so much for this chapter!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:43 PM · On: "pressure release"
Oh no don't go there. I will review 1000 times not to have to read about that. Hey how about Jake gets hit by a Bus! I like that idea. Anyways great story I just read it all tonight. I really hope she can get past this and be with Edward. Can't wait to see Eclipse only 3 days left yay!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:34 PM · On: "pressure release"
Yay!!! Yessss!!!!! She went to Jasper instead of Jake!! Thank God our girl is learning!! Stupid !#*%! Jake! C'mon let Emmett kick his cheating, girl-beating, cocky no-good lazy ass! And then Alice can go all Yoda fight-scene on 'em! (she's scary!) Pleeeeasee!!
I SO Loved This cliffhanger better than the last one! This one she was attack-kissin Edward!!! Goody goody!!!
*Sigh* I have hope now. I just hope she doesn't call - or at least forgets to call - Jack ass. Er, I mean, Jake
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:10 PM · On: "pressure release"
great chapter!
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:50 PM · On: "pressure release"
Thankfully, you have reached the 500+ mark for reviews....we are all anxiously awaiting some good B/E action, lol. And for the love of all that is holy, don't let Emmett interrupt!!!
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:05 PM · On: "pressure release"
Jake is an asshole. I thought they broke off their engagement? What is Bella and Jake right now? They are on break or what? can't wait for the next.
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