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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 06:59 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
oh man! I'm really hoping Bella's not planning to go alone. It's one thing to stand up to your brother, another to do the same to someone who will have no hesitation at lashing out.
It's good to see Bella growing stronger, I just hope she's realistic about the risks she's taking.
Reviewer: hangmans_joke30 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 08:45 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
Finally :) I have been waiting for this to update and I am soo happy it did. I really enjoy it, sooo you are going to post that written chpt 18 right? :)
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 07:18 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
I loved Bella in the last chapter and even at the beginning of this chapter when she was talking to her bro. But she killed my love at the end here. Why, Bella, why? She must be a f'ing idiot to even think about meeting with Jacob.
I'm disgusted right now.
But I'm very, very glad to see you back!! and hope you continue to feel better.
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:32 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
ahhh! tis good to have u bck have missed u! as always i loved the chapter and am chompin a the bit for the nxt one! ur number 1 fan chelle x
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 01:35 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
If this Bella wimps out and sneaks back to Jake I am calling a strike. This Edward is fantastic and she needs to figure out how to be a big girl.
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 11:43 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
You've got to be kidding me...just like that she agrees to go meet him. I hope you have the chance to update again really soon. I want to know what happens next.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 11:31 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
this was very good and don't let her go back
keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 09:14 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
NO!!! SHE CAN'T GO ALONE!!!!! It's not safe! Someone needs to go with her, or they need to meet in a public place!!!
Ugh pleeease make her be smarter than she usually is with Jake this time!Or at least carry some Mace!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 08:54 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
Is she crazy? With the way Jake was demanding that she come to him to "end this mess" she should have hung up on him. Her meeting Jake will surely give Em a heart attack. I can't wait to see how you get her out of that mess.
Reviewer: MitziJani (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 07:43 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
Come on "Give me Half hour"?!??? is she for real?
I would deal with the Jacob Situation the next day, with my mind fresh, after I think and concider every aspec of the situation she is in. But not right away I mean her mind is still over thinking everything that happen with Em and Edward, she is emotionaly drained, is realy not the perfect time to deal with Jake.
Beside this meeting have to be in her term not 'cuz Jacob "Instructed" that is not progres.
Sorry, U may not like my review but I really like your story. I don't expect that you'll change the outcome 'cuz my lame review but I hope that the meeting between Bella and Jake have a good positve outcome.
See ya next Update,
MitziJani
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:32 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
well hopefluy she wont be stupid but i dont think that will happen cant wait till the next chapter
Reviewer: sleepy_s (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 05:19 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
Good story!! While you want to yell at Bella to just dump Jake for good, the story is more complex, reflecting human emotions, and it's better for this.
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:22 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 03:39 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
Awww...the present from Emmett was so thoughtful and exactly what Bella needed - to know that her brother would always stand by her side, remembering the things that are important to her.
Meanwhile....*growls at Bella* You'd better be telling Jake where to shove it!
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:41 AM · On: "Show And Tell"
love it, keep going
Reviewer: jesabaker (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:32 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
WTF! Bella jeesh, mind blowing wall sex then you're gonna leave...
ps. you need to provide spare panties with your chapters.
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:11 PM · On: "Bruise Easily"
Okay, I can't read any more. Bella is completely insufferable.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:48 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
ahh!!! i cant wait for the next update!!!!!! update soon pleeeeeease!
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:24 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
wtf! don't do it bella! anyway great chapter.
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:34 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
Awesome update!! Loved the talk between Emmett and Bella, they are so sweet with eachother :) Oh uhhh Jake...cant wait to see what happens next! Thanks so much for the update!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:29 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
What the hell Bella? How could you pass up possible bathtub sex with Edward for Jacob Jerkface?
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:59 PM · On: "Down the rabbit hole"
It doesn't feel like there's enough of a backstory to justify Bella's irrational codependency on Jake. I mean, normally people in abusive relationships feel trapped there, but if that's the case with Bella than why is she freaking out, being physically violent and sobbing into Edward's chest for "hours" (really?) after being rescued from that situation?
I don't know. I guess I'll keep reading a bit more in the hopes that you introduce some aspect of Bella's background that would explain her behavior. Were she and Emmett raised in an abusive house? Was she verbally abused by someone to make her think that Jake was really the best she could do? According to the timeline here, they've only been dating for three months, right? How could he possibly have the psychological hold he has over her in such a short amount of time? Or am I mistaken about the length of their relationship?
I guess I just like things to be as realistic as possible and have a hard time with fics that (I feel) just aren't. Like I said, though...I'll read a bit more to see if my questions are answered.
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:54 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
Ugh. Why can't we tell Jake to go jump off a cliff?
The lovin' was very good in this chapter, love the wall sex!
I also really like the idea of the rocks. Was that original or did you pick it up somewhere else? It's cute.
Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:58 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
god she's a stupid bitch. her stupidity knows no bounds
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:56 PM · On: "Show And Tell"
OMG - loved it - Heroward is so HOT!!!!!! ok Bella needs to tell Jake offf m'kay!
Update like fast please - thanks for the pimpage - (.)(.) < boobies cuz you like them so much - lol
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